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Date Posted: 16:17:27 02/07/04 Sat
Author: Highlander
Author Host/IP: pD9037E69.dip.t-dialin.net / 217.3.126.105
Subject: Re: Tired and Hungry
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Tired and Hungry" on 17:35:50 02/05/04 Thu

A very straight and to the point piece of writing....the first questions lines tie up with the last answer and you merge the sequence (conversational ways) in a very appropriate fashion. I am known to your work and you seem to have captured and sculptured your own brand...I like that, I like a bit of originallity in a writer.

Well done GS

Highlander


>Tired and Hungry
>
>You ask me how I would feel?
>Do you even notice?
>
>I would've divorced my spouse
>Or would've cut off the relationship
>With me long ago...
>
>At least I think I would,
>But I don't know...
>
>I asked you once how you would feel,
>And you said you probably
>Wouldn't stand for it,
>If you were me...
>
>At least you think you wouldn't.
>
>But you aren't me,
>And I'm not you.
>
>So simple, it's trite.
>
>So, how does that make me feel?
>
>Like you, I guess, wishing
>I understood...
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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