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Date Posted: 15:29:26 05/10/02 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: Re: The Mailbox
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "The Mailbox" on 18:14:38 04/22/02 Mon

There is so much depth in your poetry that you dive in and keep on going yet the ripples keep on spreading as the layers are revealed.

I think you need to add a word after 'take' as the flow seems interrupted.

'Make its wings
to take
lift
you higher'


Raphaela

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