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Date Posted: 15:07:08 05/19/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM09b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.19
Subject: Re: Out Of Control
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Out Of Control" on 10:47:31 05/19/02 Sun

I like the way this poem went from a harmonious start painting an idyllic image to excalating to a climac which was

'like some gigantic spinning wheel
that had gone
completely
and evenly out
of control'

how many situations get us like this with life in the fast lane.

Good imagery as always

R



>The pond at the edge
>of the sprawling lawn
>was deep
>more than I cared
>to venture
>
>With high lilies strewn
>about
>as though
>picking their own dwelling place
>
>Happily waving
>in winds
>that blew all the day
>going places
>I could only ask
>
>My own life a looker
>seeing things in harmony already
>pre-established and settled
>containing all directions at once
>like some gigantic spinning wheel
>that had gone
>completely
>and evenly out
>of control

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