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Date Posted: 20:25:28 05/28/02 Tue
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-63.215.225.207.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 63.215.225.207
Subject: Re: Deep As One
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "Deep As One" on 15:14:54 05/27/02 Mon

Wow SuSanne, this was coolo !!

Well, if you were a bird, this was a complete description of each and every feather, hehe :). I liked some of the begining stuff, I thought the be3ginning stuff made me feel naked, and that idiom of the vaporous all seeing well was just a little too much, well it was ok actually, but heavy duty. I think the poem had a haunting quality to it actually, and a searing, well you did mention that, which attempted to seep in closer and closer, which of course I like. It had a radiance Su. The facts and everthing that you allude to just cloak or camaflouge the fact. Somehow the meanings were attached to the fact you used, like little indians hiding behind trees and movingin closer and closer, hehe :) well at any rate it was warm and sensual, well I thought so. You have to come here more and stop gong to those other poetry boards, hehe. Just kidding, love ya, al

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