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Date Posted: 23:35:59 07/24/03 Thu
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB02a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.164
Subject: Re: I don't get it
In reply to: Incriminating Eloquence 's message, "Re: I don't get it" on 17:00:30 07/24/03 Thu

lololol I obviously didn't get it! Having read your previous work I guess I was looking for the deeper meaning and a good lesson not to read when tired. On re-reading it this morning I see that you needed the climatic ending! However, I think I still preferred my original interpretation! *grin*

Look forward to catching up soon.

Raphaela


>>Good to see you again Eli. This poem certainly had a
>>haunting feel and a sense of foreboding. I liked the
>>way the poem's imagery escalates. Personally I think
>>it would be stronger without the last two lines.
>>
>>Hope to see more from you.
>>
>>R
>
>
>Hey, Raphaela! Howdy do! Anyway, the thing is...
>this is one of those joke poems. It reads a lot
>funnier the second time, too, when you realize it's
>about a fart. I wasn't going for haunting, really,
>just funny. Glad you liked it, though, and I think
>I'll be around more. Talk to you soon!
>
>eli

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