Date Posted:17:00:30 07/24/03 Thu Author:Incriminating Eloquence Author Host/IP: NoHost / 67.160.43.229 Subject: Re: I don't get it In reply to:
Raphaela
's message, "Re: I don't get it" on 13:49:55 07/24/03 Thu
>Good to see you again Eli. This poem certainly had a
>haunting feel and a sense of foreboding. I liked the
>way the poem's imagery escalates. Personally I think
>it would be stronger without the last two lines.
>
>Hope to see more from you.
>
>R
Hey, Raphaela! Howdy do! Anyway, the thing is... this is one of those joke poems. It reads a lot funnier the second time, too, when you realize it's about a fart. I wasn't going for haunting, really, just funny. Glad you liked it, though, and I think I'll be around more. Talk to you soon!
