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Date Posted: 16:04:44 12/03/03 Wed
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB06a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.168
Subject: Re: Somewhere In My Beautiful
In reply to: Ashley Owen Smith 's message, "Somewhere In My Beautiful" on 02:56:33 12/03/03 Wed

I particularly liked the lines

'I am hungry in my heart
where love is unfruitful'

personally I think you should complete that endline but otherwise provides food for thought.

Raphaela

>I am hungry,
>in my heart
>in my head
>in my belly
>where the acids
>rock the boats of discontent
>
>And on the screen
>where the blinking cursor only keeps time instead of a
>bludgeoning sense of unloved self
>
>I am hungry in my head,
>where intellect roams like a drifter
>among the forests and deserts
>and drowns in the seas there
>
>I am hungry in my head
>where I am prissy with my words
>
>I am hungry in my heart
>where love is unfruitful
>and has yet to conquer the harsh
>and dry soil--'tis only enriched
>with tears, from time to time
>
>I am lost somewhere in my beautiful sense
>of...
>
>
>
>
>ashley owen smith

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Re: Somewhere In My Beautiful -- ashley owen smith, 17:58:04 12/03/03 Wed