Re: Pathetique -- Unicorn

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Date Posted: 10:34:58 03/25/03 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: Pathetique
In reply to: Rafa�l 's message, "Pathetique" on 09:11:26 03/24/03 Mon

I have always marvelled at your skill in writing and this is no exception. The rhythm, rhyme and meter gives the poem a slow, steady pace with not one wasted word.

Thank you for 'fixing' Unicorn so we can all read the posts again, much appreciated.

Raphaela

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>Pathetique
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>Have the flowers lost their scent?
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>the daffodils all bloom
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>are memories what meant
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>depicting silence in each room.
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>The pain still shall remain
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>as now deep claret stains my lips
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>your face appears then wanes
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>behind another smile that slips.
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>For days our hands will reach
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>in life to crave shall find each breath
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>some times are incomplete:
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>unto the end, consigned to death.
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