Date Posted:02:59:10 09/18/02 Wed Author:icyheart Author Host/IP: wv-bkly-ubr-b-024-159-122-106.charterwv.net / 24.159.122.106 Subject: Re: Untitled (help with name?) In reply to:
Fenira
's message, "Untitled (help with name?)" on 18:02:00 09/17/02 Tue
stephanie....this is a good write and an interesting read.
icy
>DISCLAIMER: This poem is not meant in any way to
>purposely offend anyone, though in some cases it may
>do so. The author is not responsible for resentment
>and odd feelings, and hopes that you will -not- place
>her on your hit list, as many others have done.
>
>UNTITLED (help me think of one)
>
>We the people will not
>(can not) mock this
>confederacy of moralistic (gr)(d)eeds
>for we are all bound
>one nation, under
>oh ye gods what happened
>what happened to the
>
>money drives the forces of enterprise,
>the chance--Dow and Nasdaq fluctuate ceaselessly
>the exhilaration of a speeding rollercoaster--what the
>batteries died while still in the train
>as the G's settle the vertigo sinks in
>
>suddenly I don't feel so well anymore
>
>will a wrench and socket repair it, sure,
>for now, but free market and enterprise won't
>won't guarauntee quality and substance;
>lifetime warrantees never last
>and a variation virus will spur another epidemic
>
>whose hands raised the flagpole this morning
>
>
>---fin---
>
>I don't know how much I like the last big part but
>it's still in editing process I think, any good
>comments and criticism welcome. nothing taken
>offensively.
>
>stephanie
>
>p.s. sorry I haven't been replyign to posts, i've been
>extremely busy. a promise to do so soon. :)