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Date Posted: 18:02:00 09/17/02 Tue
Author: Fenira
Author Host/IP: dsl-65-190-51-33.telocity.com / 65.190.51.33
Subject: Untitled (help with name?)

DISCLAIMER: This poem is not meant in any way to purposely offend anyone, though in some cases it may do so. The author is not responsible for resentment and odd feelings, and hopes that you will -not- place her on your hit list, as many others have done.

UNTITLED (help me think of one)

We the people will not
(can not) mock this
confederacy of moralistic (gr)(d)eeds
for we are all bound
one nation, under
oh ye gods what happened
what happened to the

money drives the forces of enterprise,
the chance--Dow and Nasdaq fluctuate ceaselessly
the exhilaration of a speeding rollercoaster--what the
batteries died while still in the train
as the G's settle the vertigo sinks in

suddenly I don't feel so well anymore

will a wrench and socket repair it, sure,
for now, but free market and enterprise won't
won't guarauntee quality and substance;
lifetime warrantees never last
and a variation virus will spur another epidemic

whose hands raised the flagpole this morning


---fin---

I don't know how much I like the last big part but it's still in editing process I think, any good comments and criticism welcome. nothing taken offensively.

stephanie

p.s. sorry I haven't been replyign to posts, i've been extremely busy. a promise to do so soon. :)

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