Date Posted:12:47:30 10/25/02 Fri Author:Raphaela Author Host/IP: webcacheB02a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.164 Subject: Re: Reflecting In reply to:
AGS
's message, "Reflecting" on 08:30:06 09/21/02 Sat
A wonderful dreamy quality to this. You have such a way of visually describing the scene, whilst revealing the hidden depths.
Raphaela
>That wav
>y glance you through me
>was really too long like
>fishing or watching
>the waters to see if the
>bob sinking - a bite
>
>It splashing there
>in you, sort of
>the bob
>with the bait attached
>I went for
>
>You knew where I liked to fish
>and you showed me the pool
>with the green waters
>on top
>and the rest
>all blue
>
>As I took off my shirt
>the sun now revealed
>broiling
>and the waters seemed cooler
>more
>inviting
>to touch
>reflecting:
>
>Lily pads
>
>Off of your eyes
