Date Posted:10:45:10 08/26/02 Mon Author:AAAAGGGSSS Author Host/IP: dialup-65.56.26.70.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 65.56.26.70 Subject: Re: Another poem In reply to:
Richard Blake
's message, "Another poem" on 23:04:31 08/24/02 Sat
Remember when I used to smile?
A glint of happiness that’s not returned
Was drowned in those embittered rhymes.
hey rich, are you saying that writing "embittered rhymes"
or that is to say, "embittered poetry", or just using talent to write nasty things, destroyed indwelling happiness ? Like you comprimised yourself, or turned on yourself? Or are you really saying that the "embittered rhyme" was really just the nastiness of life represented as poems to you ?
And the second part, which got me somewhat confused, you say the memories have left you, correct? But if they hafe already gone, then how is it that you still have them, unless of course you still maintain them in a different area of your psychie. Know what I mean?? Al
