Date Posted:10:28:18 03/04/05 Fri Author:Rafaél Author Host/IP: ppp-0-104.newc-a-1.access.uk.tiscali.com / 80.40.66.104 Subject: Re: Rivers of Blood In reply to:
Raphaela
's message, "Rivers of Blood" on 13:16:52 02/25/05 Fri
I like the imagery in these neat stanzas as well as the combinataion of reading them all together. I personally think another stanza which reinforces the underlying purpose of the piece could be useful here. As I have said the images are great, and would benefit by rewarding the reader with a slightly more tangible message within this piece. I guess if I were to verbally discuss this piece with you and then read I would have more understanding. It just seems that once I have read these excellent stanzas that I need a little something more to resolve and satisfy the appetie that develops while reading. Everything is good with me and mine. I have a couple of pics you might be interested in seeing if you can let me have an e address.
