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Date Posted: 22:04:41 07/22/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.145.171.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.145.171
Subject: Re: My soul weeps
In reply to: CJ 's message, "My soul weeps" on 11:58:54 07/22/02 Mon

Again the clarity and
the honestly is very refreshing.
What it means I must leave up
to you but I found these lines
very moving:
">A friendly smile
>Passes by
>Unnoticed in my haste
>Well I just
>Missed its cue"

You have a very poetic soul
CJ and thank you for sharing
with this board giving one such
as I, a chance to read your work!
SuSanne

>My soul weeps

>Walking home
>Beneath the stars
>Surrounded by the dark
>Thoughts elsewhere
>Spinning tales
>Telling lies to me

>A friendly smile
>Passes by
>Unnoticed in my haste
>Well I just
>Missed its cue
>Feeling sorry for myself

>Brothers tell them
>Not to pine
>It's a silly waste
>Their kindness
>When it shows
>Confuses while it uses

>Living is no better
>With a dollar
>In reserve
>A prisoner
>To suffering
>Don't need it anyway

>© CJ, 2002
>I'm not sure what this means, I woke up this morning
>and this is what came out.

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  • Re: My soul weeps -- Raphaela, 23:49:10 08/09/02 Fri
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