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Date Posted: 23:49:10 08/09/02 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB12a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.174
Subject: Re: My soul weeps
In reply to: CJ 's message, "My soul weeps" on 11:58:54 07/22/02 Mon

Ah perhaps a note of regret at a missed opportunity in your own soul inspired it....?

I love the second stanza

'A friendly smile
Passes by
Unnoticed in my haste
Well I just
Missed its cue
Feeling sorry for myself'



but was a little puzzled by who the 'them' was in this one:

'Brothers tell them
Not to pine'

Thanks for sharing.

Raphaela


>
>I'm not sure what this means, I woke up this morning
>and this is what came out.
>
>
>Walking home
>Beneath the stars
>Surrounded by the dark
>Thoughts elsewhere
>Spinning tales
>Telling lies to me
>
>A friendly smile
>Passes by
>Unnoticed in my haste
>Well I just
>Missed its cue
>Feeling sorry for myself
>
>Brothers tell them
>Not to pine
>It's a silly waste
>Their kindness
>When it shows
>Confuses while it uses
>
>Living is no better
>With a dollar
>In reserve
>A prisoner
>To suffering
>Don't need it anyway
>
>© CJ, 2002

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  • Re: My soul weeps -- icyheart, 04:42:30 08/10/02 Sat
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