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Date Posted: 21:02:28 07/27/02 Sat
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-63.208.86.133.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 63.208.86.133
Subject: Re: Forever Of Time
In reply to: SuSanne *_* 's message, "Forever Of Time" on 15:32:38 07/27/02 Sat

Hii Su

Well I see you worked hard on this one, smiles. Well I would readily see that your "ship" is life, or more specifically Your Life, that you go winging on, carrying the cargo of your own special grain that you must sow in your life. And of course the sea represents the depths that you see in life, although as you say cerain atrocities, minor, occur, in this dog eat dog world, however here you are comparing it to seahorses and the like. a little bit of an avoidance there, but I get your point. This is a writing that makes use of the moon for light as a worthy beacon indicating that we are to make do with whatever light "heaven" is providing. Rather deep poem here Su, not a pun inteneded because of the ocean view. I didn't for my dumbness get this line or word actually:

With phat lines of navy blue to azure

my guess it would be that you are saying its a distant cousin to the word "fat", although maybe I just had aught to get the dictionary out. I don't want to get too into it since you speak somewhat privately at times, and these are meanings often you have personally. You knowmy old gripe about sharing, hehe :) . But Idare say you are getting much better at it, and of course that makes me happy :) ala

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Re: Forever Of Time -- sp99, 09:07:20 07/28/02 Sun