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Date Posted: 09:07:20 07/28/02 Sun
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.141.214.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.141.214
Subject: Re: Forever Of Time
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Re: Forever Of Time" on 21:02:28 07/27/02 Sat

>Hii Su
>
>Well I see you worked hard on this one, smiles.

Excuse me? I woke up with a sinus headache and
the first line in my head, the rest was easy, even
the one or two deletes.
Assuming my friend, as in the mother of all evil?:-o

>I would readily see that your "ship" is life, or more
>specifically Your Life, that you go winging on,
>carrying the cargo of your own special grain that you
>must sow in your life.

Do we not all have something to contribute to the world
at large? As I pray for those trapped in
living hell, as people or animals trapped by others
and suffering abusements they for many reasons why,
cannot escape?
A 'passing ship' in the night can
be just that and or a lifesaver to a sinking ship
as in helpwith lifeboats....*shaking her head
slightly perplexed*

And of course the sea
>represents the depths that you see in life, although
>as you say cerain atrocities, minor, occur, in this...

I would say for the fish being eaten by a whale that
is A pretty MAJOR 'thang' [as hip-hop] to that FISH
Are you too old to listen to hip-hop?:-O *grin*

>...dog eat dog world, however here you are comparing it
>to seahorses and the like. a little bit of an
>avoidance there, but I get your point. This is a....

Avoidance? Of what?:-+

>....writing that makes use of the moon for light as a
>worthy beacon indicating that we are to make do with
>whatever light "heaven" is providing.

Heaven or Light, please do not presume...*smile*
I can and do write from mental visions.

>Rather deep
>poem here Su, not a pun inteneded because of the ocean
>view. I didn't for my dumbness get this line or word
>actually:

>With phat lines of navy blue to azure

You could not bother to glance at the footnotes?:-O
And heaven knows, dumb you are not!
However, this could be a very valid point so we can
say the jury is out on this as I ask about a dusk sky
of first navy blue to the middle of azure then on top, a
gray-teal still colour of air with a full moon
hanging between the top two *phat* lines,
such an evening sky you've never seen?
However, considering changing the line to read as such
if this helps clarifly anything?:-p

'"In air so still, it is as freshness crisp,
Of horizonal phat lines of navy blue to azure'???

>my guess it would be that you are saying its a distant
>cousin to the word "fat", although maybe I just had
>aught to get the dictionary out.
You naught got it out, hehe? See positive of fat footnotes
>I don't want to get
>too into it since you speak somewhat privately at
>times, and these are meanings often you have
>personally. You know my old gripe about sharing, hehe
>:) Yea, yea, smiles I with a hmmmmmmm.........and then, when I get too hot sometimes when blushing,
I should tell the world more?:-o *softsigh*
But I dare say you are getting much better at
>it, and of course that makes me happy :) ala

Well ala, dare you?:-p I might not be able
to write as U but I do THANK YOU for this end result, which almost 99% happy makes me!
*smiles*...but Al my friend, in your opinion, is it a decent poem???
*questioning smile* while thanking you for your thoughts. &*_*& sp99

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