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Date Posted: 11:21:59 08/01/02 Thu
Author: Highlander
Author Host/IP: pD9037922.dip.t-dialin.net / 217.3.121.34
Subject: Re: Without you babe
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Without you babe" on 11:54:06 07/29/02 Mon

Contrary to popular disbelief rhyme is not as easy as it seems...poets are mostly known as rhyming soldiers but few fail to fuel the flames but this has a unique (or is it an unique?...never did get to grips with that English language, I before E except after C and all that crap....my friend Neil was given the wrong name then I think)..where was I...?........oh yeah, your rhyme here generates enthusiastic measures and i look forward to reading more from you....you just put me in the mood to post my "Rap" piece i wrote earler...then you�ll see it is not easy to rhyme...lol...well some of us do it better than others so i will leave the rhyming to guys like you who do it better than most

well done friend
Highlander

>I'm coming straight on redline
>Blowing black smoke big time
>Leaving the hurt behind
>You'd do it too if you could
>Take the second exit off elm
>Old memories at the helm
>Head out in another realm
>Making myself feel good
>
>Know no need to stop
>Time to plant a new crop
>Bad habits setting up shop
>Selling off all of my time
>Got to lay collateral down
>On a brand new jewel I found
>The future's where I'm bound
>Gonna claim it all as mine
>
>Don't nobody block the road
>I'm headed out of the cold
>To a future filled with gold
>Set in a priceless scene
>Got my suitcase in my hand
>Packed all the hopes I can
>Headed for the Promised Land
>That's waiting there for me
>
>So why am I feeling low
>I was hoping it wouldn't show
>Just can't seem to go
>Without you babe
>
>� Coastaljoe

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