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Date Posted: 00:28:54 08/03/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB06a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.168
Subject: Re: Placement
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Placement" on 20:24:09 07/31/02 Wed

This is almost how I would define the uniqueness of your poetry

'try
to exist
within the
clouds
where so much echo
is'

you take the reader beyond the obvious to where feelings float on by and the imagination goes further with imagery to delight.

Raphaela

>What is the word you need
>use it not
>What is the word that suggest
>use
>
>When writing poetry
>try
>to exist
>within the
>clouds
>where so much echo
>is
>
>Where placement not important
>but merely
>whereabouts
>
>it is always so
>in your life besides,
>isn't it?
>
>You never know.
>You never guess.

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