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Date Posted: 08:59:03 08/05/02 Mon
Author: SuSanne
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.146.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.146
Subject: Forever Of Time ~ slight rewrite of ~
In reply to: SuSanne *_* 's message, "Forever Of Time" on 15:32:38 07/27/02 Sat

Slight rewrite

FOREVER OF TIME

I see the forever of time
Standing upon the cutting bow,
Of this, in the night�s passing ship
Carrying cargos of seeds to sow..

Heading towards an evening sky
In air so still as freshness crisp,
Horizonal lines of navy blue to azure
Being softened by horizon's mist.

A crescent moon placed in blue
Is a heavenly beacon of light
Shinning an everlasting sideways smile,
Promoting feelings of so right �s bright..

A solitary seagull on its seven-year quest
Glides along with this humming ship
As if a harbinger of good from above
In this scenario of a spirit survivor's ocean trip.

While phosphorus dances amongst sea waves
Above miles to go across forever brimming life
Of tiny seahorses and fish being fished by huge whales
Representing much good .. that comes along with strife.

� SuSanne &*_*&

26.7.02-smb.powell
All rights reserved

"Above miles to go across forever brimming life"
I realized upon spell checking,
of this line that just flowed from me
strongly hints of Robert Frost,
of who I greatly admire but was not thinking
of when I wrote this line.

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Re: Forever Of Time ~ slight rewrite of ~ -- Raphaela, 09:23:11 08/05/02 Mon