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Date Posted: 22:18:07 08/06/02 Tue
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.132.151.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.132.151
Subject: Re: Infinity
In reply to: Megan 's message, "Infinity" on 17:17:48 08/05/02 Mon

Megan - hi,

I very much like your images
you have used to illustrate Infinity
which if we of mankind do not destroy
this earth, is ever so true...*smile*.
I hope very much you don't mind if I muse
that I think your opening line would have
more punch to it if you deleted 'ashen'
beside perhaps for you, more fun saying?
BUT I could be seriously wrong...*soft smile*
Please know, I did very much enjoy the read
and am glad you posted your "Infinity" amongst
the fine poets here-*grin*-with the possible
exception of myself!!!
Thanks, SuSanne

>Infinity

>Ashen clouds bellow furiously
>raindrops form
>torrents begin.
>
>Forming into spherical shapes
>landing on what lies beneath
>a leaf, perhaps--
>where one droplet stopped briefly
>before falling into a stream nearby.
>
>Acting as one
>no longer a mere droplet
>flowing smoothly down river
>never looking back nor stopping.
>
>Decided direction
>perpetually flowing
>through all obstacles
>without heed.
>
>Ancient water heads for ocean
>rapidly moving nonstop
>until it greets its brothers.
>
>United
>more massive than ever before
>shifting slowly and peacefully.
>
>Short-lived reunion
>as air heats,
>droplets separate
>rising above.
>
>No mercy is given
>as droplets are taken
>one by one.
>
>High above ocean
>single drop once more
>evaporating gradually
>into nothing-
>only to return.

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