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Date Posted: 17:17:20 08/13/02 Tue
Author: Megan
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 204.33.207.241
Subject: Re: A Child's Hold
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "A Child's Hold" on 07:16:30 08/13/02 Tue

Liked the poem; poignant. Nicely writte, though.
-Megan

>
>A CHILD'S HOLD
>
>
>Forgive me Lord, my sorrow
>That sad for child I cannot have
>Once so believing I had the power
>Now seemly only a spiritual salve?
>
>For so what? Life, smacks me in the face
>With body not growing seeds of my own
>Being shared with another; also not here
>Swirling me deeply while I, in a deep blue gown.
>
>That I decorate with twinkling stars
>To light up 'forever young' eyes
>As once I danced with my Onyx pup
>Wearing my naked soul disguise.
>
>For art of any splendid kind
>Takes me with others to another realm
>In an artistic vortex spun so fine
>As light through leaves of a Jersey elm.
>
>Mayhap a memory forever in a violin player eyes
>In night of his wailing strings, I spun my Celtic
>roots in dance
>Saying goodbye to our hello with a gentle kiss
>While St. Patrick chased all others away with his
>lance.
>
>Magical moments of good that cannot be taken away
>Entwined evermore within my soul
>In this life never being quite complete
>Without the you of you or .. a child's hold.
>
>SuSanne &*_*&
>
>� 10.8.02~smb.powell- [rewrite-12/13.8.02]
>RainbowSam11@hotmail.com
>me99sus@earthlink.com
>
>Dedicated to my tri-coastal nephews & nieces
>plus a very fine Radio host's music of Mahler and Rock
>an' Roll.
>
>

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