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Date Posted: 19:48:55 06/22/02 Sat
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.146.21.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.146.21
Subject: Re: The Tossing
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "The Tossing" on 18:48:16 06/22/02 Sat

I really like that 'coil' thing
you have going on with this poem
with the moon, eyes and strength
put in with good measure....greatly enjoyed!!!

Susanne

>The Tossing

>The oasis of your heart
>with its smooth coils
>abounding
>
>fortified with
>the strength I
>yearn for
>
>knows
>I am near
>
>I touch you face
>feel
>the flutter
>as lilies
>or dainty swans
>that glide
>easily
>upon the smoothest
>waters
>
>Your eyes suddenly
>to awaken
>
>as a moon
>that is visible
>behind clouds
>that conceal
>to see me
>
>Tangible
>like a fishing line
>tossed
>neatly
>under
>the moon

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