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Date Posted: 15:44:34 01/17/01 Wed
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: The Glass Turret
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "The Glass Turret" on 07:07:45 01/14/01 Sun

I think the best approach for this working one stanza
at a time, as it is a complex piece.
I have pared this a little and altered some punctuation,
also changed the last line to give more impact.

Hope this is helpful

Rafael
>
>Sitting contentedly in her glass turret
>exposed to the world, yet protected.
>Silken-threaded needle, darts in and out
>weaving all the rich colours of her life
>from the greens of the enchanted forest,
>cool blues of the sky, pale and white,
>beautiful lilies which grow nearby.
>From time to time she stops her task
>looks up from her work to contemplate
>shakes her head then starts again
>faster and faster flies the thread
>her need so urgent, to finish and escape.

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