可否明言那些為之"突兀"之語?好作潤飾一番。 --

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Date Posted: 13:29:54 10/22/02 Tue
Author: 千古(細)小人
Subject: 可否明言那些為之"突兀"之語?好作潤飾一番。
In reply to: 社長 's message, "很好很好" on 22:54:32 10/21/02 Mon

槍聲過遠看意不離圍版欄杆空間隔風雲起雨下淋漓減不了其噫

改為:槍聲過遠看意不離上下席間空間隔風雲起雨下淋漓減不了其噫

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上下席間空間隔雖免突兀，又失了原意 (NT) -- 社長, 13:42:20 10/23/02 Wed
- 那用「上下欄杆空間隔」，合了原意,古詞中亦有欄杆一詞,可會好些? (NT) -- 千古(細)小人, 13:38:47 10/24/02 Thu
  - 「空間」也是一個問題 (NT) -- 社長, 15:57:28 10/24/02 Thu
    - Re: 「空間」也是一個問題 -- 多口人, 20:04:28 10/25/02 Fri
      - 因平仄之故,斷句方式當如君所說,但看起來所生的歧異要求高的話是可免則免的,梓聰是詩社的學生,故有此要求 (NT) -- 社長, 20:54:17 10/25/02 Fri

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