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Date Posted: 10:52:19 07/30/02 Tue
Author: ~小魚
Subject: Re: 卜算子
In reply to: 文津 's message, "卜算子" on 22:35:00 07/29/02 Mon

>這闕詞又是重寫小魚的詩,請大家見諒:
>
>明月遇清風
>君愛霓裳舞
>四處行人去那邊
>美樂悠仙府
>
>白紵舞翩翩
>唇吻丁香吐
>琴瑟和弦正好春
>惜別飄輕雨

不用詞牌, 將文津的一首改改如下,

皎皎明月華
清風送幽香
漫天繁星何閃爍
銀漢悠仙府

悠揚樂韻中
星光舞翩翩
琴瑟和弦會知音
情誼美今夏

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  • 修改 -- 文津, 22:55:17 07/30/02 Tue
  • 再修改 -- 文津, 02:31:52 07/31/02 Wed
  • Re: 修改 -- ~小魚, 07:15:14 07/31/02 Wed
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