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MacDac of Giggling Gang
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Date Posted: 14:09:08 07/18/07 Wed
OOC: This is my first story, so please do not tell me that its bad. Its about me(MacDac) as a dibbun, and how I did something great!!! Here goes nothing!
BIC: One day, there was a young dibbun,MacDac. He was a member of DAB, and was a good shot with his small bow n arrows. So, one day, he was walking aroung the Abbey grounds, when he heard noises coming from the south wall gate. He walked there, and heard some creatures talking. One said: Hurry up Rat-Tooth! We have to get in the Abbey to take it over! When MacDac heard that, he suddenly felt like hurting the rats. So, he oppened the gate, and attempted to stop then.(There were 13) He fired a few arrows at them, but didn't hit them. Instead, he warned them off. But one of them, a rat called Flame-Tail, punched MacDac hard. MacDac cried out in pain, the yelled out the cry he had heard from a hare:EULALIAAAAAAAAA! He ran right into the middle of the rats, hitting out with tiny fists, but missing mostly. The rats hit him many times, one even hitting him it the eye. But MacDac drove them off. They ran away, but not before they all yelled out: We will get you bushtail! MacDac roared back: I'm not a bushtail, I'm a squirrel! An if you come back, I'll be rady for you! He then rushed inside the Abbey, closed the south wicker gate, locked it, and ran strait into Mother Mellus! She roared at him: You've gone dirty! You need a good bath! Oh no! groaned MacDac, I just fought 13 rats! Ya right, said the Badger Mum, you did not, now to the tub!
OOC: If you want to tell me how I can do anything to this story, please e-mail me. And this was only part one. I'm hoping to make this into a 5 or more part story. Thanks for reading!
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