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Subject: Bat Mountpit


Author:
Bungo Mole
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Date Posted: 02:06:12 04/06/06 Thu

Me 'n Gonff
Out on a tree
Him singin and
Me hummin' diddle lee.

Suddenly we see
A tiny mouse pop
His head out
The window top.

Only thing is he's
Got tiny wings
And Gonff rattles
off and sings.

He sings about Martin
And if he were a bat
And he said,
"I'd rather be a rat."

Well our journey ended
At Bat Mountpit
And we set off to save
Martin 'n them before they
Were roasted on a spit.
Subject: Checkpoint!


Author:
Ranlawe, Trista, and Tasmanian
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Date Posted: 22:06:37 04/05/06 Wed

Checkpoint! Everyone, great! I love it when you all put your dorm! But, Tanthalasa forgot to put her dorm! Anyone who forgets their dorm, if you notice it, please let me know your dorm, in a differnt post, or just PM me, thanks!
Subject: Raining Lights


Author:
Ranlawe, DD
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Date Posted: 22:01:43 04/05/06 Wed

Raining Lights of Darkness,
Can you Hear my Cry,
The Rolls of thunder around me,
Can it be set aside?

The Rolls,
of Thunder,
of light,
of hope,
the rolls,
of light,
can it be set aside?

Can it be set, aside?

Raining lights of darkness,
surround me when I sleep,
the rolling of the thunder,
puts me to sleep,
the light,
the sound,
the roll?

Can it, be set, aside?

Ranlawe, DD
Subject: Song


Author:
Brooksong, Trinniss, and Arywn
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Date Posted: 03:11:03 04/04/06 Tue

Brooksong, Trinniss, and Arywn. SS.

A strong scent rushes past me.
The wet sand covers my speeding paws.
The life of a runner is not so easy.
I left the mountain a week ago.
Who know what happened while I was gone?
Maybe an attack.
I spur myself to a greater speed.
Maybe a horde has attacked like in the old legends.
Lord Brocktree could deal with it,
Lord Urthstripe did too.
Boar the Fighter,
Sunflash the Mace,
Surely Lithstripe can hold them back.
Perhaps nothing happened at all.
I come over the rise,
And look into the distance.
I still can't see the mountain.
I still have to travel for three more days to get there.
Well,
It was good to think for a moment.
Subject: Song


Author:
Brooksong, Trinniss, and Arywn
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Date Posted: 02:55:25 04/04/06 Tue

Brooksong, Trinniss, and Arywn, SS

The boat will disappear,
Into the distance,
While I stand here,
Not knowing what to think.
My father dissapers with the memories.
My friends,
My family,
Disapper into the distance.
He trusted me,
To protect our family,
And I will not fail him.
He is the father I don't remember,
But in the past,
He was all that mattered.
And now,
He sails away on the last of my dreams.

Young Martin
Subject: Sunset


Author:
Lady Goldenstripe Dewmist Sunfire in Clever Clan
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Date Posted: 01:09:23 04/04/06 Tue

I sighed, while looking out at the beutiful sight before me. I had always loved Sunsets, but this one seemed different. Could it be that I was standing on the walls of such a majestic and beutiful place. Or was it because I was standing next to Snowstrom, possibly the love of my life? Of could it be that this might be the last sunset I ever saw. Whatever it was, I decided to sit back and enjoy this beutiful sight.
Subject: Muffins!


Author:
Lyman the Hare KN
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Date Posted: 20:54:07 04/01/06 Sat

(CHORUS)
Muffins we are, muffins we eat,
We Live for the muffins, that we eat,
Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Muffins,
I Live for Muffins!

One day I trudged seven leagues for a Muffin,
Another, six seasons for a single Muffin,
I would die to eat muffins even with whip cream!

CHORUS

Fighting Bravely against the Cheese,
With Brave hearts and Gallantry
Never letting them see, our secret Recipes!

CHORUS

Muffin Bombs, Muffin Catapults,
Even Muffin Cannons!
Inventing every weapon known
All with good old Muffins!

CHORUS

I must go but I must tell you,
All For Muffins….
…and Muffins for All!!!!!!!
MUFFFFFFFFFFFIIIIINNNNSSSSS!!!!!!

Young or old, Elder or Dibbun,
Cocoa warms the soul!
Cold days work or forever playin’
Cocoa will refresh you…

(CHORUS)

Toxic Cocoa, Radioactive Cocoa,
Cocoa Guns, Cocoa Bullets!
Fighting the cheese with the muffins
Fighting with our cocoa!

(CHORUS)

Cocoa so rich and creamy
And so vary Chocolaty
Never forget the Cocoa
Cocoa For ALLLLLLL!!!!
Subject: Cocoa!


Author:
Lyman the Hare KN
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Date Posted: 20:52:55 04/01/06 Sat

What do you get when you mix cocoa…
With sugar and hot milk???
You get an Elixir of Life…
Its called Hot Cocoa!

Chorus:
Cocoa, Cocoa, Cocoa, Cocoa,
Even Hot or Cold Cocoa!
With Whipped Cream…
And Marshmallows
I LOVE COCOA!

Young or old, Elder or Dibbun,
Cocoa warms the soul!
Cold days work or forever playin’
Cocoa will refresh you…

(CHORUS)

Toxic Cocoa, Radioactive Cocoa,
Cocoa Guns, Cocoa Bullets!
Fighting the cheese with the muffins
Fighting with our cocoa!

(CHORUS)

Cocoa so rich and creamy
And so vary Chocolaty
Never forget the Cocoa
Cocoa For ALLLLLLL!!!!
Subject: The Mercenaries


Author:
Tanthalasa
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Date Posted: 00:01:57 03/29/06 Wed

The Mercenaries
Norman raised his sword up high. It glistened crimson in the morning sunlight. The gruesome battle had lasted all night with skirmishes still going on across the battlefield. Young faces and old faces were drawn from the exposure to battle. They had performed dynamically, but had lost much. The image of the battlefield was of a scarred wasteland filled with chaos. Mangled corpses lay everywhere and strangled cries rang across the expanse. Norman’s mercenaries had been gracious to fight along side the peasants defending what little they had from the Dragoon armies. The tide of the battle took a turn for the worse when more Dragoon reinforcements swarmed in and started dominating the battle. That’s when Norman came. A volley of arrows suddenly flew from over a hill a short distance away, reeking havoc on the enemy army. Kiat and Mora swooped in on their flying steeds and the tide turned for the better. Ada sent bolts of red lightning down on the enemy army while his brother, Odo, charged through the enemy lines. Marissa was everywhere. Her twin daggers flashing crimson and singing the song of death where ever she was. Then came Nanka, with his giant axes, smashing through the enemy defenses like brittle twigs. This battle took place on the outskirts of a small village.
Norman wasn’t always a sword for hire. He once lived among a very prosperous family. But, his father was abusive towards him because of his idealism that all men in the town learn swordplay. This lead to Norman leaving to pursue a career of a mercenary. A few days after he left, the castle went under siege. And when his father needed him the most, Norman didn’t come to his aid. The castle fell to the Dragoon army and his father was put to the sword. The Dragoon army was lead by the evil dragon, Othos. Othos soon changed even the most energetic, ambitious recruit into a hardened, unmerciful soldier because of his harsh training.
Norman analyzed what was left of the destroyed landscape, trying to count the casualties. There were far too many to be counted. They had won the battle, but at a very high cost. How many more of these cruel battles must he witness? Should he just stand back and watch as the world crumbles to the might of Othos when he can make a difference? It all became clear to him when he felt Marissa’s gentle touch on the arm.
He sheathed his sword with a determined fire in his eyes. He turned to his small band of highly trained mercenaries, Ada the mage, his brother Odo the warrior, Kiat the Pegasus knight, Mora the wyvern rider, Marissa the assassin, Rorek the archer, and finally, Nanka the berserker.
“Pack it up, and let’s move out!” he said. So they set off to destroy the Dragoon army and thwart Othos’ evil plan.
Subject: Poem


Author:
Gnoff of the Clever Clan
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Date Posted: 21:09:40 03/25/06 Sat

In the years to come of green
When evil rears the lead
Will come a Warrior,
Martin! Martin! Martin the Warrior!

Mossflower's pride of the cats,
Much worst than rats,
Will come a Warrior!
Marin! Martin! Martin the Warrior!

Come to slay
Tsarnima to the grave!
Oh cometh the Warrior!
Martin! Martin! Martin the Warrior!
Then he put, down his sword,
And at Redwall Abbey
Did he stay

Lost in the years, poor Martin
Gave his life to the ones he loved,
MARTIN! MARTIN! Martin the Warriorrrr
Subject: song


Author:
midnight
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Date Posted: 22:20:55 03/24/06 Fri

im a naugty dibbun
that keeps on fibbin'

i love candied chestnuts,
there the best nuts

i a gurt big wurrier
nuthin furrier

dab isnt sad
it for the bad
Subject: Suprise at Salamandastron


Author:
Vorran Blowpipe
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Date Posted: 23:31:37 03/20/06 Mon

Name: Vorran
Dorm: AA

Five leagues north of the mountain fortress, Ashdon the Ruthless had attacked! Ashdon was a small fox with dark brown fur and green eyes, he wore a plain red tunic and a dirk wich he kept in his adder skin belt. His size you could say was his weapon, many have fallen to his dirk blade for under estimating his ability of fighting because of his size. His most resent attack was on a group of three score otters, killing all but four.
Their camp was on the bank of River Moss less than an league from the ocean.
walking back from the bank edge was Femick the weasel captain of Ashdon, he was new to his captains job because the last captain was killed by one of the otters who he was bringing back back from questioning. Throwing him down he tied him to the other three otters. As he was leaving the youngest of the four threw a rock at him hitting him right on the back of his head, " Take that you stupid excuse for an idiot!"
"Why you little runt!" Femick said as he started aiming a kick at the otter.
" Wait!" A voice yelled through the air, " What are you thinking Femick my loyal captain." It was Ashdon!
" Why your hi-"
" Don't even start ye blithering idiot!" Ashdons voice sounded Like steel.
" Well oi was just given' this runt a lesson."
" I'll give you a lesson you aren't going to forget!" Ashdeg jumped on the weasel and started beating him with the butt of his dirk handle.
While the punishment was taking effect the otters conversed.
" So Skip, what did they ask you?" A otter named Greytail by the thin line of grey that went from his head to the end of his tail.
" Oh nothing, just where we came from and all that. But heres the question, did you figure out any way of escape?"
" We did actually !" The younger one piped up.
" Shhhhh. quiet! do you want them to hear us?" Greytail said hotly, "That's the problem with young ones these days. Anyway Skip, we found out that this link here is rusted! So we worked on it with a rock and it came apart!"
" So you mean we can escape tonight?" Skipper asked.
" Yes, so that means we can go to Salamandastron and tell them, then we can get back to Redwall and se how they are."

To be continued.....
Subject: Suprise at Salamandastron


Author:
Vorran Blowpipe
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Date Posted: 23:31:02 03/20/06 Mon

Name: Vorran
Dorm: AA

Five leagues north of the mountain fortress, Ashdon the Ruthless had attacked! Ashdon was a small fox with dark brown fur and green eyes, he wore a plain red tunic and a dirk wich he kept in his adder skin belt. His size you could say was his weapon, many have fallen to his dirk blade for under estimating his ability of fighting because of his size. His most resent attack was on a group of three score otters, killing all but four.
Their camp was on the bank of River Moss less than an league from the ocean.
walking back from the bank edge was Femick the weasel captain of Ashdon, he was new to his captains job because the last captain was killed by one of the otters who he was bringing back back from questioning. Throwing him down he tied him to the other three otters. As he was leaving the youngest of the four threw a rock at him hitting him right on the back of his head, " Take that you stupid excuse for an idiot!"
"Why you little runt!" Femick said as he started aiming a kick at the otter.
" Wait!" A voice yelled through the air, " What are you thinking Femick my loyal captain." It was Ashdon!
" Why your hi-"
" Don't even start ye blithering idiot!" Ashdons voice sounded Like steel.
" Well oi was just given' this runt a lesson."
" I'll give you a lesson you aren't going to forget!" Ashdeg jumped on the weasel and started beating him with the butt of his dirk handle.
While the punishment was taking effect the otters conversed.
" So Skip, what did they ask you?" A otter named Greytail by the thin line of grey that went from his head to the end of his tail.
" Oh nothing, just where we came from and all that. But heres the question, did you figure out any way of escape?"
" We did actually !" The younger one piped up.
" Shhhhh. quiet! do you want them to hear us?" Greytail said hotly, "That's the problem with young ones these days. Anyway Skip, we found out that this link here is rusted! So we worked on it with a rock and it came apart!"
" So you mean we can escape tonight?" Skipper asked.
" Yes, so that means we can go to Salamandastron and tell them, then we can get back to Redwall and se how they are."

To be continued.....
Subject: Poem/ Song


Author:
Brooksong and Company, SS
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Date Posted: 01:00:29 03/20/06 Mon

My place,
Is anywhere,
I'd like to be.
Mossflower,
Loamhedge,
Or by the sea.
The only thing,
I know right now,
You need me here.
There are beasts,
Willing to die,
For what they believe, so it would appear.
But, me,
I'm different,
I'm here for you.
Your friend,
Your comrade.
True and blue.
So never forget me,
I sure hope you don't,
I know one thing,
I won't.

From Triss, To Shogg.
Subject: A Marchin' Song!


Author:
Rippler of MM
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Date Posted: 13:58:48 03/18/06 Sat

Hi, me name's Rippler of the mad Menace dorm!

We are marchin' all together,
And I think that is fine,
It doesn't matter wot is the weather,
Just as long as you keep in line!

Were goin' south, were on the run,
We are heading to the land of the sun,
We are abot to have some jolly good fun,
Please pardon the pun,
Were goin' south, were on the run!

When you're marchin' for a cause,
You have to wonder,
There's no time to pause,
For any lightenin' or thunder,

If there is a rat in me way, I'll push right through,
When the wolverines face I, the won't have a clue,
When me an' my maties fight good and true,
Wait for me, I want to fight that snake too!

So why do we march, ye ask,
Why do we do it?
Is it because the future wears a mask,
This day: you will soon start to rue it!
Subject: Surprise at Salamandastron Part 1


Author:
Vorran Blowpipe
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Date Posted: 22:45:39 03/16/06 Thu

Name: Vorren Blowpipe
Dorm:AA and CC

One summer night the shores of Salamandastron were peacfull and relaxing,the only thing that could be heard besides the waves crashing on the shore was the two voices of Lord Bayan Bloodpaw and Captain Redmond Jem.
" But sir, I don't mean to be persistent but how could we make this...catapalt as you call it, what would we use to pull the arm back to launch the boulder, it just would not work." The captian said.
"You just don't get it do you Redmond" the badger ruler said. " We use the rope I made. Here I'll tell you again, first I made a loop out of a short peice of rope then I used that interesting seawead that the seals gave me and made a another loop but through the first one and so on." Jem's eye's started to widen. "Well it turnes out."The bager Lord continued. "That when I repeted the prosess that it becaume a strechy rope!"
"I still don't know sir it still seams far feched, but since you say so I believe you."
"You better have Captain or your going back down to the pottscrubber you were when I came." The capitain stopped and stood stiffly and saluted.
" Yes sa! Believe you or be reduced ounce again!"
Both ruler and capitains started to chuckle and started back to the great fortress of Salamandastron.



The next morning Percy Delane was up rather early, so he decided to go and get an untimely breakfast. Strolling down the corridors of Salamadastron he took into mind that it was awfully quiet, he figured that everyone was still asleep.
That was when he heard and felt it, it sounded and felt like a rumble. Of course not! it wasn't a rumble! How could it be a rumble! He thoght to himself. He kept on walking, thinking it was his still being drowsy. So he splashed his face with some water at the bucket washpan outside of the dinning hall and strolled over to the kitchen. Ounce he got in he found that one other beast was awake. It was Delum the cook."Hmmm, my my that smells good."
"Good morning Percy!" Delum said happily. (Percy and Delum had been good freinds since Dibbun hood).
"So, what are ye flip'n up today me jolly old messmate, wot wot!"
Delum responded likely maner,"Well I'm Flip'n up some apple, cherry and rhubarb turnovers and oatmeal 'n honey with greensap milk. How does that sound wot."
"Flipp'n marvelous old chap! My favorite!"
"And so was yesterdays breakfast and the day before that." Delum mumbled.
"What's that old chap?" Percy asked while biting into one of the turnovers.
"Oh, I said yesterdays meal was horrible and infelicitous."
"Right you are old bean, right you a- owowowowow!" Percy screamed running out of the kitchen while being hit by Delum by two big oak spoons.
"And stay out, ye rotten excuse for a hare! Hares just are not the same anymore, Ahh well." Delum went back to work but stopped suddenly, was that a rumble he just felt? Of course not, it just be a rock rolling down the side of the mountain... or was it?

To be continued....
Subject: Story


Author:
Vorran Blowpipe
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Date Posted: 21:42:29 03/16/06 Thu

Name: Vorren Blowpipe
Dorm:AA and CC

The shores of Salamandastron were peacfull and relaxing,the only thing that could be heard besides the waves crashing on the shore was the two voices of Lord Bayan Bloodpaw and Captain Redmond Jem.
" But sir, I don't mean to be persistent but how could we make this...catapalt as you call it, what would we use to pull the arm back to launch the boulder, it just would not work." The captian said.
"You just don't get it do you Redmond" the badger ruler said. " We use the rope I made. Here I'll tell you again, first I made a loop out of a short peice of rope then I used that interesting seawead that the seals gave me and made a another loop but through the first one and so on." Jem's eye's started to widen. "Well it turnes out."The bager Lord continued. "That when I repeted the prosess that it becaume a strechy rope!"
"I still don't know sir it still seams far feched, but since you say so I believe you."
"You better have Captain or your going back down to the pottscrubber you were when I came." The capitain stopped and stood stiffly and saluted.
" Yes sa! Believe you or be reduced ounce again!"
Both ruler and capitains started to chuckle and started back to the great fortress of Salamandastron.

(to be continued)
Subject: DAB Poem


Author:
Fwirl HH
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Date Posted: 11:50:09 03/12/06 Sun

Sorry, I keep going on and on but I just made up a chant and I'd be really happy if ANYBEAST could tell me what they think about it

We're the Dibbuns at Redwall
Hearken up and hear our call
We run about and play all day
Always having our own way

Nobeast telling us what to do
We don't behave like Mary-Sue
We cause the trouble roundabout
If you catch us we'll frown and pout

We lie and dance while singing our song
And trying not to make it long
Bye to you go to bed
We're off to play - not to drink some mead
Subject: A poem, not a story


Author:
Gnoff of the Clever Clan
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Date Posted: 22:07:32 02/26/06 Sun

What If?
If rich people didn't have money,
they would not be rich.
If young people were old
how could THAT happen,
If no one could read,
There would not be signs
And if you do not eat food,
You will die
Still Waterways

Oh the places I've travelled,
On still waterways.
The days go by since the day I travelled,
From Home, so faraway.

Oh the people I met,
For all I shed a tear.
But I always say let me-
Come back next year

Oh the comrades I had, both brave and bold
Who died in battle
Oh comrades of old.

Oh the people I met, for all I shed tear
Won't you sit beside me, on this still waterway
For though you're dead you're still here
And i go to Home- so faraway
Subject: Life at DAB


Author:
Jess Willowfwirl Tamastru, DD
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Date Posted: 22:02:30 02/26/06 Sun

Life at DAB

Climbing 'cross the rafters,
Creeping down the hall,
Silent, muffled laughter,
A trap, a wire, a fall.

Slipping up a stairway,
Throwing 'way a book,
Hot, springtide days,
A pie, a wait, a cook.

Dibbuns padding quietly,
A squeak, a hush, a sound,
A pie that sits so safely,
No one is around.

Sister serving nettle soup,
A bowl, a spoon, a squeal,
Making potion for the croup,
A cough, a bath, a pill.

Dibbuns making lots of noise,
An Elder's whispered 'Hush!'
Using twigs for making toys,
A babe, a doll, a fuss.

Sewing towels to make a tent,
A cake, a sling, a club,
A place where all the babes are kept,
No bed, some fun, no tub.

Dibbuns flocking up the stair,
A bow, a raid, a cake,
Careful whisper, Elder's lair,
An Infant's life at stake.

Weaving through the rushes,
A flag, a cheer, a plan,
Midnight meeting at the pond,
Sitting on the sand.
Subject: Dibbun Times-Table song! Whoot!


Author:
Jess Willowfwirl Tamastru, DD
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Date Posted: 22:00:11 02/26/06 Sun

Dibbun Maths-song (up to nine)

One likkle Dibbun be eatin' a pie,
Two likkle Dibbuns fink dey can fly,
Fwee likkle Dibbuns be up da twee,
One an' two makes fwee fwee fwee!

Four likkle Dibbuns be cookin' a cake
Dat five likkle Dibbuns be plannin' to take,
Six likkle Dibbuns be makin' a cwime,
Four 'n' five makes lleventynine!

Sev'n likkle Dibbuns be rwunnin' 'way,
Eight likkle Dibbuns be out alla day,
Nine likkle Dibbuns be singin' a tune,
Alla likkle Dibbuns gonna gerra baff soon!
Subject: True Warriors


Author:
Bushytail Clumsypaw Squirrellygel, WW
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Date Posted: 03:17:11 02/22/06 Wed

True warriors it is said
are brave to the end
they always defend
those who can not and enturn they befriend them

never to give up the fight
they always do what is right
they are honest and truthful
but strong and determined
cool headed and wise until battle

they never forget the good friends
the fought the good fight till they met their ends
aye, maybe one day I'll be
one of them I'll have practice and see
I must use my wepon to do what is just
to slay only when I must
for life is precious
Subject: Super Soory!


Author:
Zo, MM
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Date Posted: 21:11:59 02/20/06 Mon

Zo is in MM!
Everyone did great!! And, almost everyone put their dorms! YAY! But, Zo forgot. I'm sorry Zo, please remember to put you dorm or you won't get CC'S!


Subject: First couple chapters


Author:
By Zo
(24-205-83-68.dhcp.psdn.ca.charter.com/24.205.83.68)
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Date Posted: 17:02:37 02/19/06 Sun

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Star-blessed

What do a spoiled princess, a generous servant and a clever thief have in common? They're Star-blessed!

Chapter 1, The Cottage

The icy winds blew over the land, making the lush greenery sway heavily. The foggy day only seemed normal, but behind the swirling clouds of mist, anything was possible. The Cottage lay on the left side of a long dirt road that stretched all around the St. Moss mountain range. About five feet away from the entrance was a cobblestone path lined with fresh cabbage and lettuce heads. At the start of the path were two cement walls, inlaid with a pattern made of bedrock and, in the center, a large, five-spoke wheel. The garden was filled with colorful flowers of every size and shape imaginable. Large Weeping Willow trees loomed over the bright green grass and tiny maple trees sprouted all about the garden. But perhaps the most fascinating part of the whole cottage was the rose garden. Delicately carved arbors stood over the vibrant roses. There were red roses, white roses, peach, yellow and pink roses. And, in the midst of the roses' beauty and fragrance, was the giant waterwheel. It spun continually; dropping water from bucket to bucket as hardly a drop was spilled. Inside the Cottage, many fairies flew around silently, attending to their duties. The cottage housed the entire species of fairies. Each fairy was born into a different group: Water Fairies, Land Fairies, Fire fairies, Fairies for the Protection of Society (FPS) and Fairies of the Night. Also living in the cottage were hummingbirds, bees, butterflies, dragonflies, ladybugs and other flying insects, plus the artistic elves, who rarely showed themselves and, in the stables, the magnificent steeds; reindeer. It may seem as if the cottage would be bursting at its seams with all of the creatures inside of it, but remember that all of the beings (excluding the reindeer) are very tiny, and that there is a huge backyard and an entire underground series of tunnels, caves and rooms in which the elves dwell. Many fairies garbed in deep blue robes, the Water Fairies, attended to the wheel, gasping as a drip hit the floor -though that hardly happened- and seeing that there was plenty of water for all of the residents. Tending to the garden were fairies in light green robes, The Land Fairies, and they did so with precise measurements of water and with extreme care. Gathered around the huge fire place, settling gently on the hearth and mantle, were the Fire fairies, wearing bright gowns of orange. They tossed logs into the fire and made sure that it was warm enough for all the creatures to bear the cold. Lastly, the FPS fairies, wearing plain robes of light brown were gathered in the center of the largest room in the Cottage, some filing through paperwork, other training young FPS' to fight. It was the leader of these fairies, Galena, who got up and spoke, breaking the hanging silence.
"All creatures please gather to the speaking stone. There is a message of importance awaiting your arrival."
The creatures obeyed and soon the room was filled with excited whispers.
"Silence please. Thank you. I would like to say that They have been chosen and notified." Gasps arose from Galena's audience. One fire fairy raised her delicate hand,
"You mean the Star-blessed ones?"
Galena replied, "Yes Them. One is the lovely princess of Bellsbury, Willa. She has a bit of an attitude, but we can fix that. The other is a wonderful person. Her name is Anita, and she is a servant for the Wizard Inn. Lastly is a clever thief named Armon. He is currently in the dungeons, but he is a good chap. E' was in the prison only for stealing food so a group of children living on the streets could survive. With your approval, I'll gather them and bring them here."
In unison, the entire crowd shouted "Aye!" And so Galena set off to Bellsbury first, then Wizard Inn and lastly the Correctional Institute for Criminals. Grabbing a small sack, she left the cottage and set off, hoping that her colleagues had chosen the right children to be Star-blessed.


Chapter 2, Willa

Orange flames lapped at the cold air, with the children gathered around the fire, singing and laughing merrily. One by one, the adults paid their respects to the King and Queen with gifts and shouts of "Long live throne! Merry Christmas!" The jolly fat king, thoroughly drunk with each gulp of whiskey, shook with mirth as the gifts were presented to him. The queen stood elegant in a trailing, scarlet red dress trimmed with fresh lace weaved in intricate patterns. Her long black hair flowed down to her waist-line and her dazzling green eyes flicked around the room, kindly greeting all of the guests entering. The long line of peasants veered in the direction of the king, though they each knew that it was the beautiful Queen Martha who did all the work while King Peter lazed around in a chair. But both Martha and Peter were very kind and loved to throw elegant parties for the people of Bellsbury. Sitting next to her mother and father was the Princess Willa, who looked just like her mother, but acted neither like her mum or dad. Willa sat atop her chair, looking wearily at the small line of peasants gathering around her. First in line was a Spanish vintner wearing a large festive hat with a peacock feather tucked in at the top. He wore his best suit and a rather worn tie. The vintner pulled off his hat and bowed romantically.
"Ah, senorita, Merry Christmas!" he said, "My name is Carlos Montello. I present to you this gift, and although it is small, its purpose is big." He leaned closer to her, his breath smelling of putrid grapes, "Do not tell anyone else this, but you are star-blessed" With that, he thrust a small box into her hand and walked off into the darkness, away from the cheer of the party. Willa looked scornfully at the box then threw it into a pile behind her. Scowling, she turned to the next peasant in line.
"Watcha got fer me?" she snapped. Queen Martha grabbed her by the shoulder and shook her firmly.
"Willa Festia Mygothy! Behave yourself!" Then she turned to the gift givers, a look of apology on her face. Slowly, the guests began to leave until the grand Bellsbury palace was empty but for the royal family. Tiredly, Willa slipped into her pajamas and crawled into bed. Her mother came to tuck her in.
"What gifts did you get, dear?" she asked
"They were all awful" Willa replied
Reprovingly, Martha said, "Now Willa, be nice. Did you get any interesting gifts?"
"Yeah, this vintner guy said I was star blessed and he gave me a glass, green star"
"Hmmm," the Queen pondered, "Well, the vintners spend much time out in the hot sun, and it clearly gets to them. He was probably just trying to stun you. Don't be frightened by him"
"I'm not! Good night mummy!"
"Good night Willa"
The lights were switched off and Willa was left lying in her bed, fighting for sleep. She would chase after it, and just as Willa thought she had caught it at last, it would escape her and get a large lead. This continued for quite awhile, until Sleep finally slowed down enough for her to catch it and drift into it. But sleep came with a strange dream. A little person with wings -a fairy perhaps- was standing on her bedpost, smiling strangely. The little fairy spoke, and her voice was so faint that Willa had to strain her ears to hear it.
"So you are the star-blessed one" he/she/it said, "follow me" The little fairy strode out of Willa's room and fluttered down the stairs. Outside it was raining, and with a loud clap of thunder, Willa was awake. She was startled to find the little fairy still there. Rubbing her eyes to be sure if she was awake, Willa stared in disbelief at the fairy. It spoke again.
"Well, I haven't all day, hurry up!"
Willa shakily replied,
"You said I was star-blessed, that is what a man named Carlos Montello told me"
The little fairy sighed happily, "Ahh Carlos, bless his soul! He was right, you are star-blessed. You will find out what it means later. Follow me. I have three more houses to visit before we get back to the Cottage. "Willa was puzzled, but she restrained herself from further questions as she silently followed the fairy into the darkness outside.
Subject: Super Soory!


Author:
Zo, MM
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Date Posted: 21:11:57 02/20/06 Mon

Zo is in MM!
Everyone did great!! And, almost everyone put their dorms! YAY! But, Zo forgot. I'm sorry Zo, please remember to put you dorm or you won't get CC'S!


Subject: First couple chapters


Author:
By Zo
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Date Posted: 17:02:37 02/19/06 Sun

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Star-blessed

What do a spoiled princess, a generous servant and a clever thief have in common? They're Star-blessed!

Chapter 1, The Cottage

The icy winds blew over the land, making the lush greenery sway heavily. The foggy day only seemed normal, but behind the swirling clouds of mist, anything was possible. The Cottage lay on the left side of a long dirt road that stretched all around the St. Moss mountain range. About five feet away from the entrance was a cobblestone path lined with fresh cabbage and lettuce heads. At the start of the path were two cement walls, inlaid with a pattern made of bedrock and, in the center, a large, five-spoke wheel. The garden was filled with colorful flowers of every size and shape imaginable. Large Weeping Willow trees loomed over the bright green grass and tiny maple trees sprouted all about the garden. But perhaps the most fascinating part of the whole cottage was the rose garden. Delicately carved arbors stood over the vibrant roses. There were red roses, white roses, peach, yellow and pink roses. And, in the midst of the roses' beauty and fragrance, was the giant waterwheel. It spun continually; dropping water from bucket to bucket as hardly a drop was spilled. Inside the Cottage, many fairies flew around silently, attending to their duties. The cottage housed the entire species of fairies. Each fairy was born into a different group: Water Fairies, Land Fairies, Fire fairies, Fairies for the Protection of Society (FPS) and Fairies of the Night. Also living in the cottage were hummingbirds, bees, butterflies, dragonflies, ladybugs and other flying insects, plus the artistic elves, who rarely showed themselves and, in the stables, the magnificent steeds; reindeer. It may seem as if the cottage would be bursting at its seams with all of the creatures inside of it, but remember that all of the beings (excluding the reindeer) are very tiny, and that there is a huge backyard and an entire underground series of tunnels, caves and rooms in which the elves dwell. Many fairies garbed in deep blue robes, the Water Fairies, attended to the wheel, gasping as a drip hit the floor -though that hardly happened- and seeing that there was plenty of water for all of the residents. Tending to the garden were fairies in light green robes, The Land Fairies, and they did so with precise measurements of water and with extreme care. Gathered around the huge fire place, settling gently on the hearth and mantle, were the Fire fairies, wearing bright gowns of orange. They tossed logs into the fire and made sure that it was warm enough for all the creatures to bear the cold. Lastly, the FPS fairies, wearing plain robes of light brown were gathered in the center of the largest room in the Cottage, some filing through paperwork, other training young FPS' to fight. It was the leader of these fairies, Galena, who got up and spoke, breaking the hanging silence.
"All creatures please gather to the speaking stone. There is a message of importance awaiting your arrival."
The creatures obeyed and soon the room was filled with excited whispers.
"Silence please. Thank you. I would like to say that They have been chosen and notified." Gasps arose from Galena's audience. One fire fairy raised her delicate hand,
"You mean the Star-blessed ones?"
Galena replied, "Yes Them. One is the lovely princess of Bellsbury, Willa. She has a bit of an attitude, but we can fix that. The other is a wonderful person. Her name is Anita, and she is a servant for the Wizard Inn. Lastly is a clever thief named Armon. He is currently in the dungeons, but he is a good chap. E' was in the prison only for stealing food so a group of children living on the streets could survive. With your approval, I'll gather them and bring them here."
In unison, the entire crowd shouted "Aye!" And so Galena set off to Bellsbury first, then Wizard Inn and lastly the Correctional Institute for Criminals. Grabbing a small sack, she left the cottage and set off, hoping that her colleagues had chosen the right children to be Star-blessed.


Chapter 2, Willa

Orange flames lapped at the cold air, with the children gathered around the fire, singing and laughing merrily. One by one, the adults paid their respects to the King and Queen with gifts and shouts of "Long live throne! Merry Christmas!" The jolly fat king, thoroughly drunk with each gulp of whiskey, shook with mirth as the gifts were presented to him. The queen stood elegant in a trailing, scarlet red dress trimmed with fresh lace weaved in intricate patterns. Her long black hair flowed down to her waist-line and her dazzling green eyes flicked around the room, kindly greeting all of the guests entering. The long line of peasants veered in the direction of the king, though they each knew that it was the beautiful Queen Martha who did all the work while King Peter lazed around in a chair. But both Martha and Peter were very kind and loved to throw elegant parties for the people of Bellsbury. Sitting next to her mother and father was the Princess Willa, who looked just like her mother, but acted neither like her mum or dad. Willa sat atop her chair, looking wearily at the small line of peasants gathering around her. First in line was a Spanish vintner wearing a large festive hat with a peacock feather tucked in at the top. He wore his best suit and a rather worn tie. The vintner pulled off his hat and bowed romantically.
"Ah, senorita, Merry Christmas!" he said, "My name is Carlos Montello. I present to you this gift, and although it is small, its purpose is big." He leaned closer to her, his breath smelling of putrid grapes, "Do not tell anyone else this, but you are star-blessed" With that, he thrust a small box into her hand and walked off into the darkness, away from the cheer of the party. Willa looked scornfully at the box then threw it into a pile behind her. Scowling, she turned to the next peasant in line.
"Watcha got fer me?" she snapped. Queen Martha grabbed her by the shoulder and shook her firmly.
"Willa Festia Mygothy! Behave yourself!" Then she turned to the gift givers, a look of apology on her face. Slowly, the guests began to leave until the grand Bellsbury palace was empty but for the royal family. Tiredly, Willa slipped into her pajamas and crawled into bed. Her mother came to tuck her in.
"What gifts did you get, dear?" she asked
"They were all awful" Willa replied
Reprovingly, Martha said, "Now Willa, be nice. Did you get any interesting gifts?"
"Yeah, this vintner guy said I was star blessed and he gave me a glass, green star"
"Hmmm," the Queen pondered, "Well, the vintners spend much time out in the hot sun, and it clearly gets to them. He was probably just trying to stun you. Don't be frightened by him"
"I'm not! Good night mummy!"
"Good night Willa"
The lights were switched off and Willa was left lying in her bed, fighting for sleep. She would chase after it, and just as Willa thought she had caught it at last, it would escape her and get a large lead. This continued for quite awhile, until Sleep finally slowed down enough for her to catch it and drift into it. But sleep came with a strange dream. A little person with wings -a fairy perhaps- was standing on her bedpost, smiling strangely. The little fairy spoke, and her voice was so faint that Willa had to strain her ears to hear it.
"So you are the star-blessed one" he/she/it said, "follow me" The little fairy strode out of Willa's room and fluttered down the stairs. Outside it was raining, and with a loud clap of thunder, Willa was awake. She was startled to find the little fairy still there. Rubbing her eyes to be sure if she was awake, Willa stared in disbelief at the fairy. It spoke again.
"Well, I haven't all day, hurry up!"
Willa shakily replied,
"You said I was star-blessed, that is what a man named Carlos Montello told me"
The little fairy sighed happily, "Ahh Carlos, bless his soul! He was right, you are star-blessed. You will find out what it means later. Follow me. I have three more houses to visit before we get back to the Cottage. "Willa was puzzled, but she restrained herself from further questions as she silently followed the fairy into the darkness outside.
Subject: Checkpoint!!!! =D


Author:
Ranlawe and Trista
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Date Posted: 17:59:06 02/20/06 Mon

Everyone did great!! And, almost everyone put their dorms! YAY! But, Zo forgot. I'm sorry Zo, please remember to put you dorm or you won't get CC'S!
Subject: First couple chapters


Author:
By Zo
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Date Posted: 17:02:37 02/19/06 Sun

Star-blessed

What do a spoiled princess, a generous servant and a clever thief have in common? They're Star-blessed!

Chapter 1, The Cottage

The icy winds blew over the land, making the lush greenery sway heavily. The foggy day only seemed normal, but behind the swirling clouds of mist, anything was possible. The Cottage lay on the left side of a long dirt road that stretched all around the St. Moss mountain range. About five feet away from the entrance was a cobblestone path lined with fresh cabbage and lettuce heads. At the start of the path were two cement walls, inlaid with a pattern made of bedrock and, in the center, a large, five-spoke wheel. The garden was filled with colorful flowers of every size and shape imaginable. Large Weeping Willow trees loomed over the bright green grass and tiny maple trees sprouted all about the garden. But perhaps the most fascinating part of the whole cottage was the rose garden. Delicately carved arbors stood over the vibrant roses. There were red roses, white roses, peach, yellow and pink roses. And, in the midst of the roses' beauty and fragrance, was the giant waterwheel. It spun continually; dropping water from bucket to bucket as hardly a drop was spilled. Inside the Cottage, many fairies flew around silently, attending to their duties. The cottage housed the entire species of fairies. Each fairy was born into a different group: Water Fairies, Land Fairies, Fire fairies, Fairies for the Protection of Society (FPS) and Fairies of the Night. Also living in the cottage were hummingbirds, bees, butterflies, dragonflies, ladybugs and other flying insects, plus the artistic elves, who rarely showed themselves and, in the stables, the magnificent steeds; reindeer. It may seem as if the cottage would be bursting at its seams with all of the creatures inside of it, but remember that all of the beings (excluding the reindeer) are very tiny, and that there is a huge backyard and an entire underground series of tunnels, caves and rooms in which the elves dwell. Many fairies garbed in deep blue robes, the Water Fairies, attended to the wheel, gasping as a drip hit the floor -though that hardly happened- and seeing that there was plenty of water for all of the residents. Tending to the garden were fairies in light green robes, The Land Fairies, and they did so with precise measurements of water and with extreme care. Gathered around the huge fire place, settling gently on the hearth and mantle, were the Fire fairies, wearing bright gowns of orange. They tossed logs into the fire and made sure that it was warm enough for all the creatures to bear the cold. Lastly, the FPS fairies, wearing plain robes of light brown were gathered in the center of the largest room in the Cottage, some filing through paperwork, other training young FPS' to fight. It was the leader of these fairies, Galena, who got up and spoke, breaking the hanging silence.
"All creatures please gather to the speaking stone. There is a message of importance awaiting your arrival."
The creatures obeyed and soon the room was filled with excited whispers.
"Silence please. Thank you. I would like to say that They have been chosen and notified." Gasps arose from Galena's audience. One fire fairy raised her delicate hand,
"You mean the Star-blessed ones?"
Galena replied, "Yes Them. One is the lovely princess of Bellsbury, Willa. She has a bit of an attitude, but we can fix that. The other is a wonderful person. Her name is Anita, and she is a servant for the Wizard Inn. Lastly is a clever thief named Armon. He is currently in the dungeons, but he is a good chap. E' was in the prison only for stealing food so a group of children living on the streets could survive. With your approval, I'll gather them and bring them here."
In unison, the entire crowd shouted "Aye!" And so Galena set off to Bellsbury first, then Wizard Inn and lastly the Correctional Institute for Criminals. Grabbing a small sack, she left the cottage and set off, hoping that her colleagues had chosen the right children to be Star-blessed.


Chapter 2, Willa

Orange flames lapped at the cold air, with the children gathered around the fire, singing and laughing merrily. One by one, the adults paid their respects to the King and Queen with gifts and shouts of "Long live throne! Merry Christmas!" The jolly fat king, thoroughly drunk with each gulp of whiskey, shook with mirth as the gifts were presented to him. The queen stood elegant in a trailing, scarlet red dress trimmed with fresh lace weaved in intricate patterns. Her long black hair flowed down to her waist-line and her dazzling green eyes flicked around the room, kindly greeting all of the guests entering. The long line of peasants veered in the direction of the king, though they each knew that it was the beautiful Queen Martha who did all the work while King Peter lazed around in a chair. But both Martha and Peter were very kind and loved to throw elegant parties for the people of Bellsbury. Sitting next to her mother and father was the Princess Willa, who looked just like her mother, but acted neither like her mum or dad. Willa sat atop her chair, looking wearily at the small line of peasants gathering around her. First in line was a Spanish vintner wearing a large festive hat with a peacock feather tucked in at the top. He wore his best suit and a rather worn tie. The vintner pulled off his hat and bowed romantically.
"Ah, senorita, Merry Christmas!" he said, "My name is Carlos Montello. I present to you this gift, and although it is small, its purpose is big." He leaned closer to her, his breath smelling of putrid grapes, "Do not tell anyone else this, but you are star-blessed" With that, he thrust a small box into her hand and walked off into the darkness, away from the cheer of the party. Willa looked scornfully at the box then threw it into a pile behind her. Scowling, she turned to the next peasant in line.
"Watcha got fer me?" she snapped. Queen Martha grabbed her by the shoulder and shook her firmly.
"Willa Festia Mygothy! Behave yourself!" Then she turned to the gift givers, a look of apology on her face. Slowly, the guests began to leave until the grand Bellsbury palace was empty but for the royal family. Tiredly, Willa slipped into her pajamas and crawled into bed. Her mother came to tuck her in.
"What gifts did you get, dear?" she asked
"They were all awful" Willa replied
Reprovingly, Martha said, "Now Willa, be nice. Did you get any interesting gifts?"
"Yeah, this vintner guy said I was star blessed and he gave me a glass, green star"
"Hmmm," the Queen pondered, "Well, the vintners spend much time out in the hot sun, and it clearly gets to them. He was probably just trying to stun you. Don't be frightened by him"
"I'm not! Good night mummy!"
"Good night Willa"
The lights were switched off and Willa was left lying in her bed, fighting for sleep. She would chase after it, and just as Willa thought she had caught it at last, it would escape her and get a large lead. This continued for quite awhile, until Sleep finally slowed down enough for her to catch it and drift into it. But sleep came with a strange dream. A little person with wings -a fairy perhaps- was standing on her bedpost, smiling strangely. The little fairy spoke, and her voice was so faint that Willa had to strain her ears to hear it.
"So you are the star-blessed one" he/she/it said, "follow me" The little fairy strode out of Willa's room and fluttered down the stairs. Outside it was raining, and with a loud clap of thunder, Willa was awake. She was startled to find the little fairy still there. Rubbing her eyes to be sure if she was awake, Willa stared in disbelief at the fairy. It spoke again.
"Well, I haven't all day, hurry up!"
Willa shakily replied,
"You said I was star-blessed, that is what a man named Carlos Montello told me"
The little fairy sighed happily, "Ahh Carlos, bless his soul! He was right, you are star-blessed. You will find out what it means later. Follow me. I have three more houses to visit before we get back to the Cottage. "Willa was puzzled, but she restrained herself from further questions as she silently followed the fairy into the darkness outside.
Subject: Oh No!


Author:
Ikur Maetil, Bad Babes
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Date Posted: 20:33:34 02/18/06 Sat

(OCC)I'm so sorry! I forgot to keep the poem redwall related! *looks up at Tangle with watery eyes* (OCC)go ahead and delete it if you feel that it is not RW-oreinted, and feel free to not give me any cc's!
Subject: a modest poem


Author:
Ikur Maetil, Bad Babes
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Date Posted: 20:28:41 02/18/06 Sat

Tthis is a poem I wrote a cuople years ago. I wrote it for a book of poetry on the seasons, this was in the section "Spring"

Oh how the robin loves his song,
for he sings it all day long,
warbling sweetly as he flies,
singing and ode to the sunlight skies!

(it will have been under a penname, perhaps Jor? anyway, if anyone finds it in a book, I did not plagerize!)
Subject: DAB poem


Author:
Skydance, Pesky Pack
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Date Posted: 16:16:03 02/16/06 Thu

“Not DAB again,” the elders say,
“Those dibbuns turn my fur quite grey!
They behave like little scamps,
And never bath: they smell like tramps!
What shall we do to reconcile,
These young uns who have gone quite wild!”
The dibbuns listening at the door,
Giggle, expecting more.
“Those little savages we call mice,
Never ever behave nice!
And I must warn you to beware,
If you come across a hare!
The only way to express our wrath,
Is to give them all a bath!”
There is a muffled squeal, a scurrying of paws,
The dibbuns tripping on the floor,
A tiny hedgehog with a pout,
Gives vent to an enormous shout,
“DAB!” she cries. “Bathing kills!
It makes a young un feel quite ill!”
Dibbuns in all directions scatter,
Their tiny paws going pitter-patter,
The dibbuns sweat, they get quite fraught,
But one by one each dibbuns caught.
The Abbess cries “Into the tub!”
Every dibbun starts to blub.
They are clean, but full of sorrow,
There’ll be no baths, until the morrow!
Subject: Nature...


Author:
Audrey and Vinepaw, RR
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Date Posted: 06:05:21 02/11/06 Sat

Name: Audrey and Vinepaw
Dorm: Rambling Rascals

I gaze around at the beauty,
That meets my eyes,
The gentle star shine,
Or the blazing sunrise.

The grass that sways,
And the petals that bloom,
Growing ever taller still,
Under the guidance of the moon.

The birds that care for their young,
Oh a mothers love,
The mist that hovers on the ground,
Or the clouds that drift above.

The leaves that crackle under step,
When the Autumn rolls around,
Or when the snow in Winter,
Blankets the ground.

The dry hot days in Summer,
Make flowers wilt and fall,
Wilst the Spring gives them,
Enough strength to stand tall.

Each season and time of day,
Shapes the view around us,
Yet, we can all agree,
The Earth's beauty is unsurpassed.
Subject: The Clash of A Warrior


Author:
Audrey and Vinepaw, RR
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Date Posted: 08:33:34 02/08/06 Wed

Name: Audrey and Vinepaw
Dorm: Rambling Rascals

The Clash of A Warrior

Once upon a time... long ago,
'Neath the star-strewn night,
Under the shade of tree,
With which held birds of flight.
A sole figure sat there,
His eyes like steel,
A sword buckled to his belt,
And on his arm- a sturdy shield.

His look was harsher then any Winter,
And his face was worn with fatique,
His paws were tough with battles won,
... He had traversed many a league.
He swung a food sack over his shoulder,
And staggered upright,
Then that weary traveller... vanished in the night.

Unknown of yet to this Warrior true,
An evil stoat with a heart of black,
Took the East as his domain,
Unafraid of any attack.
His cruelty ran across the land,
And he soon had a savage fame,
Catching slaves and making them work,
Work through beating sun and rain.

One dark night the Warrior stumbled,
Upon an empty camp and tents,
But to his horror found nothing but,
Carcasses with their throats rent.
Struggling back his sickly feeling,
He peered around for a beast who'd survived,
Though he searched with all his pure heart,
He found only an otter alive.

Cradling the beast in his lap,
The Warrior asked who'd done this and why?
The otter opened his mouth slightly, "The East,"
And with a deep sigh... he died.
The Warrior clenched his paws,
And made a vow then,
To avenge this loss and make justice,
For is new-found friend.

"Such evil cannot be forgiven,
And justice must be served,"
And with that again, he disappeared,
Disappearing into the dark world.
He travelled long and hard from the West,
The thought of just one thing...
In the distance a lark trilled softly,
Like a death bells ring.

At last the Warrior gazed upon,
The looming structure of the stoats castle,
The wind blew softly against it's stone walls,
Making dead grass rustle.
The Warrior observing the high security,
Due to the beasts dotted around the walls,
He would have to take an army against this foe,
It was time for this tyrant to fall.

He soon gathered up an army,
Beasts swelling with an urge to fight,
The Warrior was thanked by many,
For helping with their plight.
With a war cry torn from scores of throats,
Creatures rushed to meet their fates,
Unknowing whether they would ever see this world again,
Or be sent to the Dark Gates?

The dead grass was given a new color...
The color of blood: red,
As beasts collapsed with their eyes closed,
Never to wake again.
The Warrior, surrounded by others now just like him,
Battled his way through the throng,
His Army was faring badly...
But another battle needed to be won.

He found the stoat in his castle-and with a snarl, leapt at the Warrior,
His eyes a'keenin' for blood,
Syliva blanketed his fangs,
And his fur was stained with mud.
The Warrior leapt back,
And began his desperate clash,
The Warrior heaved his sword up high,
Ready to deliver the final slash.

A moan was faint from the evil ones maw,
As his voice, with his life, faded,
The Warrior peered out a castle window,
And it looked like the stoat army's threat had abated.
His own army was winning now,
And the Warrior re-entered the fray,
Swinging his blade with a triumphant cry,
All had saved the day.

We love happy endings! ^.^
Subject: Checkpoint!!


Author:
Ranlawe and Trista
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Date Posted: 21:03:16 02/06/06 Mon

Checkpoint!! But.. Ikur Maetil forgot his dorm! Please remember to put your dorm right along with your name!!
Subject: Physick 'n food Ballad


Author:
Ikur Maetil
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Date Posted: 02:41:58 02/05/06 Sun

I sing of the tale of Sorla Noor
Whose ears were long as the grass on the moor.
He had a hunger but no food,
So he raided the kitchens to lighten his mood,
Well he met the Friar who was keeping ovens warm
And he gave starving Sorla a fresh warm bun.
Well that helped a wee bit, but Hares aren't little Mice,
So he yelled, "a blinkin' puddin would be really nice!"
Well the Friar, he was sleepy, this made 'im a wee bit rude,
So e' didn't gave Sorla, his right due food.
Now Sorla's stomach rumbled loud, and his voice rumbled louder;
"I'll pop ye' in the oven and turn you into chowder!"
Just then, walked in Sister Salpurse,
The old Infirminary Nurse.
She saw th' hungry Hare, and the Friar, cow'rin like a cake,
But her apperance made them both their foolish quarrel, soon forsake.
She proved to be a diplomat, "I know just wa' to do,"
"Follow me to my room, and I'll fix ye' up like new,"
The Hare and Friar exchanged nervous looks, but with her they went.
Coming to the room, they entered, to see Sister Salpurse open a window to act as a vent.
She settled them down on the soft Infirminary beds,
glad for the chance to rest ther heads.
Said Sister Salpurse, " I have a tip, for those who with hunger are sick,"
Fill 'em full of Physick! That will do the trick!"
Full of fear, Sorla and the Friar started to stand,
But the Sister held them down with a strong, firm hand.
Realizing they could be trouble, she tied them wi' a rope,
For the Hare and the Friar, there wasn't much hope.
She went to her cupboard, and got the nessecary stuff.
Made with nettles and ivy, her potion was pret'y rough.
She cooked these foul ingredients, along with quite another few,
Boiled all together, they made really nasty stew.
"O lack a day! O dearie me! The poor Sorla cried,
With repulsion at the potion, at his ropes he tried.
The Friar was sil'nt though, as if in some deep thought,
Still against the ropes while the Hare against them fought.
The truth you see, from the awful smell, the Friar, (the poor country lout),
Had passed compleatly out!
The Hare's efforts began to slow, his strength began to lag,
The Sister took her chance and filled the Hare, his body started to sag.
He didn't even have the energy to spit the Physick out.
His eyes started close, survival was a doubt,
When at that very moment, the door swung open wide!
Was it someone to save his hide?
But alas, it was the wind, playing with his mind,
Not some gallant rescuer, come for him to find.
The Sister then gave the Friar his dose,
Waking him from his comatose.
Her job done, as she thought, she released them into the early night.
Crawling on their paws and knees, they both knew she'd been right,
For neither any longer had any appetite!
Subject: Every Nightfall


Author:
Laurelina, WW
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Date Posted: 04:45:41 02/04/06 Sat

(It's been ages since I've submitted /anything/, but I figure I might as well display this.)

Late at night
One winter's night
A lonely light shines through the town
A small girl lies
Beneath the skies
Of a blue quilt stuffed with down.

Her eyes alight
Like rays of moonlight
Shining far above
Her smile pure
Her hair mature
Her grace undreamed of.

Her soft sighs
Her silent cries
Laughter muffled from time to time
Her pumping fist
That will not subsist
Cheering for a hero in his prime.

Her brow creased
The emotions ceased
Trying to puzzle out a rhyme
Her lips in motion
Expressing the devotion
Of a song on the page for all time.

Her eyes ablaze
With hate and rage
At the horror that evil wreaks
Her face wet
With tears of regret
For those who died and could not speak.

She is engaged
With words on a page
In a book measured seven by four
A simple story
Full of glory
That lets her imagination soar.

She closes the book
Goes to turn off the light
Pauses to say thank you and goodnight
To Brian Jacques
The greatest writer of all
Who picks up his pen every nightfall.
Subject: Checkpoint!


Author:
Ranlawe
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Date Posted: 19:54:22 01/29/06 Sun

Beaktalon Clawfeather forgot to put yoour name, but everyone good job!
Subject: Climbing Poem


Author:
Bushytail Clumsypaw Squirrellygel, Whicked Wastrels
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Date Posted: 05:01:11 01/25/06 Wed

up inna high tree
thats where me loves ta be
the higher the better
aye thats what me says but thats if yer
a squiggle like me bes
with the breeze
blowing through the leaves
of the highest tree
me can find to be
part of the sky
i feel i belong up here don't ask why
its jus' so calm an' peaceful
but sometimes i'll yell
an' shout break the silence i will
being a dibbun havin' fun
Subject: Oops..


Author:
Beaktalon Clawfeather
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Date Posted: 00:15:12 01/24/06 Tue

I'm a newbie.
Subject: A Poem


Author:
Beaktalon Clawfeather
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Date Posted: 00:14:06 01/24/06 Tue

My little craft at sea,
being buffeted by the winds,
I should be flying,
but I'm not.

I chose to sail,
why,oh,why,
my craft begins to sink,
I cry out.

Then, suddenly,
I see a light,
I fly away from my boat,
and the rain strikes me.

I see a ship,
I fly for it,
finally landing on it,
a mouse greets me and takes me to warmth.
Subject: Poem/ Song


Author:
Brooksong and Company
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Date Posted: 00:25:07 01/21/06 Sat

Brooksong and company

My craft sailed on,
Into the sea,
Who is no friend,
To you, nor me.

My Friends,
They know,
They know,
Where I must go,

And ask no questions,
While the wind does blow.

We met a squirrel,
On a small cay,
As we sailed into,
It's shallow bay.

She was a stout little beast,
And put up a good fight,
And we knew when she stopped,
That she was alright.

She knew the waters,
From here to there,
And we took her aboard,
And she learned to share.

A savage beast,
She was till now,
It shows you can tame,
From a savage roar,
You can coax out,
A tame meow.
Subject: Poem/ Song


Author:
Brooksong
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Date Posted: 00:18:35 01/21/06 Sat

Brooksong, SS

The sea is black,
The sky has darkened
I turn my back,
To the land.

My mind is made up,
the choise is clear,
I was born a night like this,
Says my mother dear.

I climb aboard,
My little ship,
And try,
To give my friends the Slip.

But there they are,
My dearest chums,
Not gonna let me,
Eat only crumbs.

They sit on board,
My little craft,
And laugh, and laugh,
And laugh and laugh.

I did not go alone that night,
Nor many nights to come,
For my friends know me well,
And know from where I come.
Subject: The dibbuns hath done valiantly


Author:
Gruckford Nimletoes (rambling rascals)
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Date Posted: 00:28:39 01/18/06 Wed

Twixt moon and stars the sky hath darkened,
The moon doesn’t give its light.
Though in the darkness one shall not see,
The villains creep tonight.

They climb far up the abbey wall,
To enter in their might.
The gatekeeper is fast asleep,
He will not be able to fight.

Over the wall the hoard does come,
Down onto the abbey grounds.
The dibbuns, though, are wide awake,
For the villains, they have found.

They rush around in their quiet way,
Waking all the elders.
The grown-ups search for their weapons,
But after waking, in a blur.

The elders rush onto the grounds,
Fighting valiantly.
The rodent hoard retreated back,
Yelling loudly.

The abbey now is safe once more,
All because of the dibbuns.
And that is the end of the tale,
Though you’ve heard some more real ones.
Subject: Another poem about winter


Author:
Bushytail (whicked wastrels
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Date Posted: 04:28:48 01/17/06 Tue

its cold outside an' it might be
snowing an' windy
but we can still have fun and i can climb the snowy trees
and we can do whatever we please
no matter the wheather
we can be friends an' play togather
if we gets cold hot tea
or some cocoa will be
perfect to warm you an' me
then we can go out
an' play again Hee Hee
Subject: Winter Poem


Author:
Bushytail (Whicked Wastrels)
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Date Posted: 01:17:16 01/17/06 Tue

the trees were bare
it snowed last night i was there
i was part of it the snow flakes called
we join us in the snow dance so i danced
twirling leaping and swirlig
everwhere sugar like coating and whirling
down everywhere all night
until the snow was at a great hight

i woke and saw that it had snowed
and i remembered
it all and the trees were not bare
anymore because their
covered in a dusting
light powder of snow leaving
me wishing it would snow some more
but for now lets play in it before
it all melts away
Subject: Jus' a likkle poem I wrote


Author:
Bushytail
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Date Posted: 06:08:31 01/16/06 Mon

Hee Hee if you can't catch me
You can't baff me
I'll be bad 'cause i want to be
i'm likkle un and free
aye i be
free as the breeeze an' you can't stop me

I supposes later i'll be good
aye some day i'll do what i should
but for now i'll fun being in DAB like any likkle un would
i suppose i could stop but that could
be too boring so me
just be naughty an' free
for now Hee Hee
Subject: A winter poem


Author:
Redtail
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Date Posted: 23:32:59 12/29/05 Thu

The winter is long and cold,
But do not worry, it shall come to pass.
The snowy skies and icy fields,
Shall yeild to flowers and lovely green grass.

The frozen lakes and rivers,
That no longer babble about,
Shall melt into cool clear water,
That washes away your doubt.

So do not worry my child,
This winter will turn to Spring.
And as the birds sing happily,
Tis' will be a wonderful thing.
Subject: Poem


Author:
Brooksong, Trinniss, and Arywn
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Date Posted: 02:55:46 12/29/05 Thu

Brooksong, Trinniss and Arywn

The sky above my head grows light.
I would enjoy it if not for my plight.
I remain tied to a tree to be fed,
Just to be eaten, with lettuce for a bed.
But a mouse do i see,
From my drugged little eyes.
He's got something up his nose,
And it smells like my toes.
He's come to rescue me, Hooray!
This sure doesn't happen every day.
He's got a nice sword,
And he knows how to use it,
And he can tell I mean well without saying a word.

From the point of veiw of Chugger. It's been a while since I've read that book, so i'm sorry if my detail are a bit off.
Subject: Riaw's Mom (con't)


Author:
Riaw Thunderstream
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Date Posted: 01:53:51 12/20/05 Tue

The searats rode up alongside the ship and boarded. Yelling warcries and brandishing weapons, they jumped on the otter crew, who were vastly outnumbered. They had few weapons but they fought bravely. The searat captin led the charge and he killed the first creature he could reach. This was Riaw's mom. Chaos insued and during the meele, Riaw's dad grabbed him and they escaped by the ships longboat. In the distance they could see the ship, now burning.
I wonder where we'll go mused Riaw's dad as he rocked the baby and rowed...
TO BE CONTINUED
Subject: Riaw's Mother


Author:
Riaw Thundestream
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Date Posted: 18:59:14 12/17/05 Sat

15 seasons ago, Riaw Thunderstream lived on the NW coast with his parents in the Thunderstream Clan. It was the midwinter feast for the clan and there had been singing and dancing and eating for three days now. And, as was tradition, the clan began to sail to find a new home. But a storm hit and drove Riaw's ship off course. on it were Riaw, his mother, father and several others. After a few days, Riaw's ship came in sight of the others. But as they sailed foreward, they were cut off by a searat ship!
TO BE CONTINUED...
Subject: Death to Searats: Part 1


Author:
Riaw Thunderstream Clever Clan
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Date Posted: 19:15:53 12/15/05 Thu

Riaw Thunderstream gave a
small sigh as he flipped a
pebble into the abbey pond.
the stone sunk, leaving an
ever widening ripple in the
normally smooth pond. The
otter was a tall sinewy
warrior of 16. he was so
deep in thought that he
didn'd notice his dad slid
down next to him. Whats
wrong mate? Riaws dad asked.
Howcome I dont got a mom?
replied Riaw.
Subject: Poem


Author:
Snowflower
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Date Posted: 21:39:37 12/10/05 Sat

Bafs neva!
Dab faeva!
Badger mum can say come
but we dibbuns know it won't be done!
bafs neva!
dab faeva!
When icy cold all night and day
we the dibbuns shout hooray!
To cold to bathe at least we say
bafs neva!
dab faeva!
candied chestnuts we eat all day
drinking cordial no matter what elders say!
bread n' cheese yuck!
candied chestnuts yum!
bafs neva!
dab faeva!
no bedtime more play!
we neva care what badger mum say.

can't think of more right now
Subject: A Poem


Author:
Thrus
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Date Posted: 21:18:45 12/08/05 Thu

Thrus
Active Array

1.The Monarch

Resting upon the flower bed
Entangled with leaves of every hue
A butterfly perches
With dusty blotches black as lead
'Gainst stunning white and bold orange too
Queenly monarch perches
Subject: riverblade chapter three: seasons pass


Author:
calhen riverblade
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Date Posted: 03:24:35 12/08/05 Thu

five seasons had passed since the birth of riverblade. he had grown stronger and noughty. he and his two partners in crime, the twins trags and lilly were the tarrors of the holt. playing pranks, stealing food, geting dirty when told not to and just being allaround little rogues. his father had begun to give sling lessons to him at which he was making progress.slwly the seassons passed and riverblade began to tough'n up and to grow out of his noughty streak. when ten more seassons had passed riverblade began to grow restless. the winter had come and the night was dark as he laid down his head to sleep. slowly slumber overtook him. his dreams danced before him then a dream apeared vividly. it was of an aurmored mouse with a marveles sword, with which he was pointing to a large red structure and said "go"
and with that he awoke.
to be continued...................


calhen river blade newbie
Subject: riverblade chapter two: riverblade


Author:
calhen riverblade
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Date Posted: 22:24:58 12/07/05 Wed

the next mornnig was qiet and peaceful. skippers wife riversong slowly creapt over to were he son was sleeping. she carefuly lifted him and wrapped him up in her cloak. she slowly rocked him back and forth as she walked to the back of the cave were the oven and stoves were. she spotted a rack where some scones were cooling, taking afew she wrapped them up in a kerchife. bending down she opend one of the cupboard doors and pulled out a jug of warm cider. silently she crept outside of the cave and into the fresh air. it had been a long time since she had last enjoyed the fresh air.the little otter babe cood peacefuly. after afew minuts she began to munch on the scones the had brought. after she had finished her makeshift meal she shifted all of her atintion to the little otter in her arms. he was of thick build and had thick redish brown fur and his eyes, his eyes were of the deepest blue and were peaceful and knowing. a smile crept to riversong face and suprisingly he smilled back. she hugged him close and kissed his for head. they togeather for a considarable amount of time. in the cave she could hear acouple of the otters going about their early morrning choars. sudenly she froze as she was about to re-enter the holt when she heard voices."sherup or she'l ear us." she could tell they were vermin by the sound of the voices. she quickly ran back in the cave and woke her husband."wake up, there are vermin outside." at that he bolted up and woke up all of the others. he bounded over to the corner where he kept his arms. first he grabed his sling and his favorit pouch of stones then he grabed his claymore. it was long witha steel ball pomel and steel curved crosspiece. he gripped it's brown leather wrapped hilt tight and rushed to the entrace of the holt as many others were. riversong hefted a long steel tiped lance and made ready to protect he little pup. the vermin numbered nearly two score. they had lost the element of surprise but they still slightly out numbered the otters. they hit the otter warriors head on. caos reined as the two forces met. skipper swung his blade like a mad beast, hacking, slashing and staping at the thought of his newborn son being in the claws of vermin. gallune the massive otter met up with him in one paw which was the almost size of a bagers he held a huge double bladed battle ax and in the other the body of a small dead rat. he hurled it at a charging ferret. calhen and gallune fought back to back. slowly but suredly the otters drove away the vermin. skipper dashed to his wifes side to see if she was hurt but she was not. after all the bodys had been thrown in the river they decided not to speak of the incedent. the skipper aprouched his wife and said "we need to name im." she nodded. "speak'n of im where is e." looking around he soon spotted him trying to lif his claymore."we'l call im riverblade" exlaimed riversong "i like sound o that, calhen riverblade."
to be countinued................

calhen riverblade, newbie
Subject: riverblade chapter one: a warrior is born


Author:
calhen riverblade
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Date Posted: 18:33:10 12/07/05 Wed

the wind blew hard and cold outside the Mclean clans holt. fires were burning throughout the cave that was set inside a huge oak tree. the skipper calhen slingpaw smilled as he hugged his new otter pup close wrapped up in a thick wool blanket. a feast was being held in honor of the birth of the little otter babe. calhen seated hiself at the head of a large ash wood table. he lifted up the pup to show all the otters present and spoke with tears in his eyes." otters this is my son my SON. no father has ever been prouder than me today." at his right was seated the skippers wife, the mother of the babe. he handed him to her and let her take the floor. but she was to happy to speak." well are we going to eat or not?" said skipper. at that all present began to do full justice to the meal. there were bubbleing bobs, shrip'n'hotroot soup, warm breads and cheeses and to wash it dow warm mint tea and for the young ones, cool srawbery coardial. after most of th eating had been done the entertainment began. first up was the young ones preforming a very of key song wile they did a fast pace dance

"ohhhhhhh we'r river dogs
when it coms to food wre og's
and we dont like toads'n'frogs
an thats cus we'r river dogs

river dogs! river dogs! river dogs! hay!
river dogs! river dogs! river dogs! all day!
river dogs! river dogs! river dogs! we like to swim'n' play
riv-"
one of the little otters triped and knocked over another singer witch started an all out paw to paw fight. the adults laughed at the antics of the young ones.biteing, scratching, kicking, punching and ruddering. after awile the skipper spoke in his deep baratone voice."alright thats enough li'il warriors harharhar. so who's next." a young pretty ottermaid with voice to mach her apearence steped up to the makeshift stage. pulling out a small reed flute and played an inroduction

"i once met a fox, a dirty ol fox
he lived in a box, a stinky wooden box
he ate his food on rocks, cold slimy rocks
the fox who lived in a box and ate his food on rocks
the fox was in the way of the road, the road that led to the aboade of a toad. so i said let me thru
and he said, oh that i cant do so i hit him on the head hard and true, and with that he let me thru."

she took a bow and steped down. the otters applaud her and some of the young ones began to hit one another on the head with sticks and put some of the leftover food on some of the stones inside their holt. next the skipper and a big otter named gallune, who were both good friends steped up on the platform. both were wearing large cloaks. the two otters slid their paws behind their back and both drew out a long blunt curved sword. they twirled the around in cmplex patterns. behind their backs, over their heads and sometimes between their legs. some times beasts would cover their eyes. the skill of the two otters was amazingafter thay had finished. it was argeed that it was time for bed. the two happy parents went of over to their corner of the holt were they laid down and were soon taken over by slumber.
to be contenued.......


by riverblade, newbie
Subject: food!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Author:
boarrick of the happy horrors
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Date Posted: 04:42:14 12/02/05 Fri



When dreaming I'm guided to the kichens
Time and time again
At sunrise I fight to stay asleep
'Cause I don't want to leave the comfort of this pie
'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape
From the life I live when I'm hungry
So let's go there
Let's make our escape
Come on, let's go there
Let's ask can we stay?

Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place where food is all i see
Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place with meadowcream

Although I would like our world to change
It helps me to appreciate
Those pies and those scones
But, my friend, I'd sacrifice all those dorms
If I could make the food and my dreams the same
The only difference is
To let candy replace all our carrots
So let's go there
Let's make our escape
Come on, let's go there
Let's ask can we stay?

Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place where food is all i see
Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place with meadowcream

So lets go there, lets go there,
Come on, lets go there
Lets ask can we stay?

in the kichens I feel like I'm alive for the very first time
Set up with food I'm strong enough to take these puds
And make them mine
Set up with food I'm strong enough to take these puds
And make them mine

Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place where food is all i see
Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place with meadowcream

Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place where food is all i see
Can you take me to the kichens?
To a place with meadowcream

boarrick of the happy horrors
Subject: Rockwood


Author:
Montague Fleetpaw (Unbathable Bunch)
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Date Posted: 14:28:39 11/28/05 Mon

This is basically a Redwall story, but its called Rockwood not Redwall.

Chapter 1

It is a bright and cheery morning in the animal country of Rockwood. The birds are singing, the bees are buzzing, and the city, Quaking Aspen, is alive and abuzz with activity. The little ones can be heard in the orchard practicing their singing, and any beast within a hundred miles can smell Jolie the Mole in the kitchen preparing a feast. All of the creatures are peaceful and happy. All except one. In his room, the young mouse Maximus is pacing back and forth and back and forth, all the while grumbling to himself. “Another day, another season, another year, another feast...When is something exciting going to happen!” He starts to actually make noise and quickly checks himself. Sucking up all his grumblings and complaints, the young mouse heads downstairs for breakfast. He walks around for a bit, hoping to avoid his friend Fludge, who can always tell when something is wrong. He walks around for a few minutes, and then finally sits down. “Hey, maybe he really won’t…” “Hulo, hulo, mate!” Of course, Fludge the otter, as always, finds his friend. “Hulo mate…what in bloomin hey is wrong wit you Maxi?” “Well…it’s just…” Maxi tries to act like nothing wrong, “Can you pass the salt?” “Oh common now u blighter…I know when something’s up wit my mate, yes sir I do, now wut is it ole buddy?” ” Oh alright…I hate being ungrateful, but I just feel restless here ya’know? I mean, I wish I could be like Stanton or Monty and travel around all of Rockwood fighting vermin. Not stay here being cooped up with all these peaceful creatures. I want action and adventure and…speak of the devil!” At that very moment Stanton comes striding through the door. Stanton is a very tall badger, sinewy with muscles, and looks like an absolute true warrior. With him marching in came Monty, or Montague Jolly Hopping Toad-Snatching Bear Wrestling Woodsorrow. Monty is a hare with big floppy ears and happy look on his face. He considers himself the indebted servant of Stanton. Stanton saved him from a pack of vermin almost ten years ago, and hasn’t been able to get away from him since. But for some reason, Monty isn’t so happy, and Stanton has a rougher, more downtrodden look in his eye. All of the merriment and joy ceases; they wish to hear the big badger speak. “Hello friends.” The booming voice rolls for all to hear. ”I hate to interrupt your day of feast and merriment, but an evil has come over our beloved land. An evil villain named Alexandria Red Eyes has come and is determined to take over Quaking Aspen and all of its inhabitants!” Murmurs of fear and disbelief circulate around the room. “But we need not be scared! I myself will lead a revolution. I plan on meeting the tyrant before she can make it here. I will stop her in her tracks!” Shouts of joy and happiness rise. “But…I need some volunteers. I need those who are willing to be taught and those who will listen. I need strength and I need courage. I need help to fight this warlord…so who’s with me?” “I am!” The first shout came; you guessed it, from Maxi. Fledge, feeling loyalty to his friend quickly raises his hand and puts it down. Like a shy kid raising his hand in class. “Wut in bloomin hey ‘ave I got meself into now?” he says quietly to himself. The final volunteer comes from a teenage squirrel hanging from the rafters to listen. “You can count me in most definitely, sir!" “Okay, I have three young rips, plus me and Monty…I’ve got some work to do.”


Chapter 2

Deep in the dark castle of Alexandria Red Eyes, an evil laugh is heard. Chuckling how only an evil warlord can chuckle, the red eyed demon has the look of fire in her eyes. She is a rather large fox and has claws like knife blades. Beside her throne sits a basket of pikes, her weapon of choice. And in front of her on a table, she looks into her crystal ball. “So, they think they can challenge me.” She says this to herself as a statement, not a question. “Err… yes ma’am they do!” The sound of a pike whirling through the air is heard and it pins the poor buffoon to a wall by the arm, soon to die an inglorious death. “Silence!!! Fool, do you think I was speaking to you?” “Please …” Shink!!! Another pike quivers into the dumb rat, but this time it hits its mark. “I was not talking to you…Move the carcass out of my room!” A few more guards come in and take out the dead rat. “Never talk unless spoken to!” “Yes ma’am,” they all say in chorus. “Now away with you!” The remaining rats, stoats, and weasels scurry away quickly. Another evil laugh can be heard all throughout the castle. “I can’t believe the badger is going to try and storm my castle with only five people…and three of them still babies. This is going to be fun. I will keep my rats, stoats, and weasels here to guard the castle, and while the five conquering heroes come here, my vipers will have a wonderful time taking over the helpless creatures at Quaking Aspen.” A final chuckle can be heard throughout half of Rockwood, and those who hear it have chills sent down their spine.
Chapter 3

“Training has begun!” Stanton first has the group pick weapons. “I’ll take the dagger and that big rope with a knot in it” says Maxi. “Wut?” screams Fludge in shock and disbelief. ”Wut ‘bout your ole pop’s sword, mate?” “Didn’t I tell you to never speak of him?” “Rightio, sorry mate.” “Wait, I’m curious about this” the squirrel, whose name is Rose, says quizzically. “Well, my father used to hunt vermin, but he was killed about five years ago. He left me it to me. But I know that I’m not worthy of the sword, and will never use it in battle.” “Oh, I’m so sorry.” Says everyone in chorus. “Okay Fludge, you’re next.” “Well, I think that I’ll take them bows an arrers.” “Alright Rose, you’re last.” Why I think I’ll try out the sling and stones if that’s alright with you, sir.” “Of course it is child…Now let training begin!” “Hey what about you guys?” asks Maxi in a surprised tone. “Well, I have my battle axe, and Monty has the spears. Okay, Maxi, I’ll work with you on the rope, and Monty will teach Rose and Fludge how to use the long-distance weapons.” After about five days of training, Maxi was chomping at the bit to go attack. “Cummon! I’m ready, I can take those vermin slime!” “Your time will come child, just be patient.” And patient he was. For six months the team trained and prepared until their strength, knowledge, and abilities in fighting were unmatched. "Now we are ready. We will leave at sunrise."

Chapter 4

Stanton’s crew was already packed and ready to go before sunrise. Now the birds can be heard chirping, and the creatures are waking up from there peaceful night’s sleep. “Up and at ‘em troops!” Stanton’s booming voice is heard throughout all of the creature’s barracks. “Wake up! Rose, Fludge, Maxi!” Slowly, the drowsy creatures wake up and get dressed. After they say their goodbyes, the creatures head onto the trail. “Look at that beautiful sunset mates! Must be some sort of omen thingamagig, dontcha think?” says Fludge, excited about the trip. “Quite possibly, my friend. Quite possibly.” Everyone can tell that Stanton is excited though he tries his best to hide it. “Okay! Okay! The sunset is beautiful! Now lets get going!” Maxi, though already on the trail, is still biting at the bit to fight. “The young one is right, lets go.” As commanded, the troop heads off down the trail. They look back on the big grey gates for what could be the last time.
Chapter 5

“Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!” The rolling chuckle again comes from inside the castle. “Here come the fools. They’ll be here soon. Bring me the Vipers!” The vermin again scurry around to do their master’s bidding. “They think they attack in secret. And Stanton still thinks that I have no idea of the penetrability of Aspen, now that the warriors have left.” At this point, five giant vipers slither towards the red-eyed demon. “Yesssss your highnesssssssss.” The largest snake comes forward. It, like the other snakes, is jet black with a red diamond on its neck. It has fangs the size of Alexandria’s pikes. It and the others slither all the way to the throne. “You go in secret to Quaking Aspen. Do not be seen. Sneak into the stronghold. Leave no prisoners.” “With pleassssssure.” The immense snakes slither quickly out of the room. “My vipers will be at Aspen at the same time as Stanton and he fools get here. Things are working out nicely. Muahahaha!” Once again the laugh presides over the castle. All else is silent.

Chapter 6

“What is that up ahead?!” says Maxi, surprised and all little scared at the same time. Five red diamond shapes are seen through the trees. “I have seen those shapes before! Everyone! Attack positions!” Stanton pulls out his axe while Fludge and Rose hide in nearby trees with the bow and the sling. Monty and Maxi walk forward and stand next to the big badger. Like a flash, two giant snakes jump out from their positions in the trees and leap onto Stanton. “Don’t fire!” yells Maxi. “You might hit him!” Rose and Fludge turn and aim for the three remaining snakes fleeing the battle. “It’s no use! I can’t penetrate their armor!” Yells Fludge. “Aim for the red diamond!” yells Rose. “I just brought one down!” Arrows and slingstones zip at the two remaining vipers, but to no avail. They escape untouched. Stanton manages to throw one snake off, but the other bites him. “Stanton!” Maxi rushes towards the snake and starts clubbing it with the rope. The snake turns and wraps around him, attempting to squeeze him to death. “AAAHH!” Maxi drives his dagger into the diamond on its neck. It writhes on the ground,then falls dead. The other snake rushes away, scared of the fierce young mouse. Maxi, Monty, Rose, and Fludge rush to the aid of their fallen friend. His flesh is already cold.


Chapter 7

“Stanton, you were the best friend I ever had. I always will be your friend and indebted servant. I will miss you deeply, and always love you as the father I never had.” With that, poor Monty broke into tears. Monty and everyone else are crowded around the crude grave of their friend. Listening to the speech, everyone starts crying. Everyone except Maxi. “Come friends. He would not have tears. He would have wanted us to continue. He would have wanted us to kill the vermin leader, who no doubt sent the snakes that killed our friend.” “He’s right” says Monty, drying his tears. “We must continue.” The remaining four trudge down the road, more solemn and without hope then they have ever been. And though they do not know it yet, they have a new leader.

Chapter 8

“Snakes!!! We have snakes!” A large porcupine bursts through the door. “Arm yourselves here come the….ARGH!” The first snake rushes through the door and stabs him through the back with its long fangs. The creatures of Quaking Aspen run around like chickens with their heads cut off. Blood and venom are dripping everywhere. Within five minutes, the creatures of Aspen are wiped out. Bodies lay thrown about, and no creature is left alive. Satisfied, the merciless snakes leave the house of death.

Chapter 9

“There it is, do you see it?” asks Maxi in a hushed voice. The troop, lying in the ditch, spies the large castle. It is black and ominous. It looks like the old vampire layers you see in movies. “Yea, I see it there, mate, but it done gone and gave me the willies it has.” They slowly creep up, in the cover of the trees and the silence of the night. “There are sentries everywhere, but I spy a gate in the back. We can probably sneak through, but keep your weapons at ready. Fludge slowly raises his bow and arrow, while all of the others follow suit. “Hey!” Thunk. The guard falls to one of Rose’s pebbles. “Come on, get inside before more guards come” Maxi commands. The group heads through the gate and into the large castle. “We need to split up if we want to find Alexandria’s room. I’ll go with Fludge down the right hallway. Rose, you and Monty go down the left hallway.” The group, following Maxi’s orders, splits up and travels their separate ways. A few minutes later, Maxi and Fludge here cries from the other side of the castle. “Sounds like Rose and Monty are in trouble. Let’s go Fludge!” The two heroes rush of down the corridor. They arrive to find Rose and Monty tied up in Alexandria’s room. “Sssh….stay quiet Fludge. I’ll try and get a signal to Rose and Monty.” Suddenly, a guard comes up behind Fludge and drags him away. “FLUDGE!!!!!” Maxi gets his rope ready and prepares to fight the onslaught of the vermin horde.

Chapter 10

Maxi spins and whirls to fight of the horde. Thud! Thwak! Maxi continues to lash out and deal punishing blows to those brave enough to try to attack. Five minutes and fifty vermin later, Alexandria calls out, “Retreat! Rally back to me, you mindless oafs, back to me!” The flood of vermin rushes away from the battle and back to the red-eyed devil. Suddenly archers surround Maxi. “I offer you a deal mouse! You lay down your weapon and I will allow you to go free. If not, my archers would be happy to make you into a pincushion.” He hears the sound of bows being drawn. “Coward!” “What did you say?!” Alexandria is shocked at the boldness and courage of the young mouse. “You cannot fight, can you? You, the mighty warlord, must have your little minions fight for you! No doubt, you sent the vipers that killed our beloved friend! And no doubt you could not fight me on your own! If you are so strong and powerful, why not fight me yourself? I’ll make you a deal, we will fight, to the death, if I win, my friends go free. If you win, my friends die and you may keep your honor. But if you refuse my challenge, I will be forced to kill you and all your vermin by force!!!” “Hahahahahaha…. You kill us by….hahahahaha. Very well mouse, I admire your spunk. I will fight you. Prepare to die.” “Obviously, one of us will die, but it will not be me.”

Chapter 11

Like a flash, the warlord jumps down from her thrown. She has lightning quickness, and her sharp claws quickly tear Maxi’s rope to pieces. He pulls out his dagger and prepares to stop the onslaught of slashes from the red-eyed demon. Meanwhile, Fludge is struggling to free himself from the rope that binds him. He gets free and prepares to help Maxi. The guards see him and decide it best to slaughter Monty and Rose, in case they escape too. In horror, Fludge sees the head’s of his companions rolling on the ground. He sits back down, and the guards tie his feet, so he can’t run to help Maxi. Maxi is losing the battle. The fox has great strength and speed. She strikes out with her claws once more, and the dagger flies form Maxi’s hands. He crawls back on the ground, trying to find something to use as a weapon. The fox steps on his chest with one foot, pinning him to the ground. Just when all hope was lost, Maxi hears a familiar voice, “Don’t give up, my friend. There is always a way.” “Stanton?” The voice is gone. “Maxi!” Fludge cries to him and throws the sword of Anturon, Maxi’s father. Maxi catches it and jabs it into Alexandria’s heart. The fox rolls over, her reign of terror ended. Her eyes glaze over. Maxi gets up, spits on the carcass, and walks away with his friend. To this day, there are two warriors who walk through Rockwood. They are the protectors of good, and free all good creatures from oppressive vermin. Like Stanton and Montague, they live on as legends forever.
Subject: Redwall!


Author:
Sonia, Happy Horrors
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Date Posted: 06:43:08 11/24/05 Thu

Redwall!

As I lay against the big red walls,
My spirt, it does soar.
The security of that wonderful place,
Makes my heart want to roar!

Redwall! Laughter and friendship, the dream that can come true.
Redwall! Never an ending, there I'm never blue.

As I roam across the Mossflower woods
The one thing I do seek,
Is The place that brings everyone's love
To its highest peek.

Redwall! Laughter and friendship, the dream that can come true.
Redwall! Never an ending, there I'm never blue.

As I think of all the wonderful things
The red stone brought upon them,
And I see all the happy faces of those
Who have the honor to live within 'em.

Redwall! Laughter and friendship, the dream that can come true.
Redwall! Never an ending, there I'm never blue.

There is alot of feasting,
The ringing bells go 'dong!'
And I listen as the good friends sing
Of their lives in merry song.

Redwall! Laughter and friendship, the dream that can come true!
Redwall! Never an ending, there I'm never blue!!!
Subject: Poems again


Author:
Lavee Nightswift, Clever Clan
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Date Posted: 01:10:35 11/24/05 Thu

Will always I travel
'Neath a star-ridden sky?
Will poems unravel
Ne'er again to ask why?
Will sunflowers blossom
On the side of a stream,
Unmoving, unspeaking,
Still lost in a dream?

Wil I go to the mountains
To see the sun rise,
And return just in time
To watch whilst the sun dies?

The light always lingers
On the face of the sea,
And lasts until dawning
For keen eyes to see.
And the light of the moon,
Still caught in the trees,
Shines o'er the wavelets,
And fore'er will be.

And will I go to the mountains
To see the sun rise,
And return just in time
To watch whilst the sun dies?
___________________________________________________________

Alders and willows that weep e'ermore,
Whether sunlight shines down, or the rain sadly pours.
Is it true that the cloudbanks stay all through the night,
And sit through a vigil 'til dawning's first light?

Cosmos and daisies and red roses fine,
Up in the Rockys the blue columbine,
Sweet bells of Ireland sweep o'er the hills,
Seep into crevices of rocks and of rills.

The leaves turning crimson, a sure sign of fall,
And ever-green ivy creeps up an old wall,
Gold petalled marigolds starting to fade,
"Goodbye now, goodbye now!" the marigolds bade.

Ribbons of twilight creep o'er the sky,
Hear on the wind the sea's sorrowful cry,
O'er the green wavetops blows a soft breeze.
You beat now, you sigh now, poor fly-away seas.

All colors of rainbow, deep purple and blue,
Sea green, and grass green, and emerald green, too.
Yellow and orange, scarlet and gold,
All colors at evening the heavens shall hold.

Now that the seasons have come to an end,
I await what appears at the next river bend,
And wilting leaves in winter's light cower.
They are waiting, like I, for midnight's next hour.

~Lavee Nightswift, Clever Clan~
Subject: Whoops!


Author:
Nadro and Melora
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Date Posted: 03:49:42 11/21/05 Mon

Forgot to add, I'm in LL!
Subject: (I don't know the title) Chapter 1: A Child Found


Author:
Nadro and Melora
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Date Posted: 03:49:09 11/21/05 Mon

The squirrel sighs as she looks at the gray rain, thinking that the angels were mourning again. Oh how she longed for the shining rays of the sun, and a gentle breeze upon her cheek, but old Uncle James had an ache in his shoulder that foretold of many more days of rain. She and her mother, father, and baby sister Vale were strangers to the land called Lamin. They came from a blessed place, she called it home, and Lomins called it Mossflower. They only left because of a curse on the land, one of famine and drought, oh so rare in Mossflower.

A knock from the front door startles her from her wishes, and she takes loon strides to the entrance. She sees no living soul near, so she begins to shut the door, but a young babe's cry stops her. She looks, and at the bottom of the stairs lays a parcel. She takes a few steps into the rain, and scoops it up. Tenderness and compassion covers her heart as she sees what lays within. It is a young fox cub, with orange fur and black paws. He let out a small cry, and she hurried in. Vale was just about this dibbun's age, she could take care of it. She quickly hurries up the stairs, careful not to jostle the child to much, and knocks on the door to her mother's room.

She opens the door, and begins to talk, "Mother! I was just looking out the window.." her mother quickly takes the fox out of Opeh's paws, and looks at him, and sighs a happy, yet sad sigh, "Opeh, this fox, I suppose you found him in the rain where a mother who couldn't, or wouldn't, care for him. But he is welcome here. But I can not take care of him, for little Vale and your father are enough to handle for an old soul like me. You shall take care of, oh, what shall we name him?" Opeh had been thinking, and quickly replies, "Nadro, rain in the old language, for he was found and has come during the rain." Sarla smiles, "Nadro it is. Opeh, you shall take care of Nadro." Opeh's face beams, and nods, her golden tail bobbing along, "I will mother, I'll take care of him. Opeh hurries off to find some fresh clothes for Nadro, and Sarla grins. What a fine mother Opeh will become!
Subject: Poem


Author:
Emiko, Iva, and Salali of II
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Date Posted: 02:52:41 11/20/05 Sun

This is a poem of Martin and his love, Rose. 1st is M's view, than Rose's, than M's, than R's,etc.

I stood upon the wall,
Thinking myself to be dead,
Till I heard an eagle's call,
From the mouth of a beast.

I saw a mouse upon a post,
On the dreaded fort,
Going to become a host,
For an seagull's dinner.

When I got away,
With four other beasts,
In a boat on that day,
T'was punctured with a sword.

My brother was taken away,
With a squirrel I call friend,
By the water so gray,
While I traveled further.

We were captured later on,
By nasty little shrews,
Afraid of not a swan,
But a large gannet.

There Martin fought a bird,
And set the prince free,
And was given the queen's word,
That freedom was ours.

We traveled hard and far,
Met a group of performers,
That really, truly are,
A little crazy but good.

Then one day we returned,
After setting the slaves free,
Martin's heat burned,
For revenge upon a stoat.

When we fought I found success,
But much sadness too.
For Rose the mouse became less,
When Badrang threw her far.

I now am in the spirit,
The Dark Forest is my home,
For my head was hit,
And Feldoh is nearby.

I left soon after,
Weeping for my love,
Nowhere was there laughter,
After the death of Laterose.

My Martin went to Mossflower
To find a new home,
But a wildcat in power,
Is what he found instead.

I helped to build an abbey,
With even a big bell tower,
Soon there was a jubilee,
When it was finished.

Many years later,
He hung up the sword,
Gave up being a hater,
Never fought again.

Now I too am in one place,
With my beloved Laterose.
Never a disgrace,
Are the new warriors.

My Martin watches them,
The beasts of the Abbey,
Like a precious gem,
And I watch with him,
Happy as can be.
Subject: The song on Redwall's DAB dibbuns


Author:
shadowflash
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Date Posted: 01:41:33 11/19/05 Sat

There once was a fox who thought he was smart,
he walked straight into Redwall!
The grownups didn't know what to do,
so the fox laughed out and called,

"Why do ye sit there with open mouths,
I want your loot and plunder.
I want ye to gather little slaves for me
so I can build a castle called 'Chunder'"

DAB heard the fox and walked right out
and knocked the fox on the head.
They beat thay fox up while yelling out,
Let's beat him up and throw him in the shed

They all got a lot of big cheers from that and they
got a lot new pebble rocks
for their slingshot made of thread
and (accidently) shot a Sister in the head!

They won prizes after prizes from then on out
But the abbot said, "look at all these Goldilocks!
Let's give'em a name day instead
and the name day was DAB did Tangle with the Fox!
And knocked him on the head!
Subject: Dark Sky


Author:
shadowflash
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Date Posted: 10:45:03 11/18/05 Fri

Once there was a small mouse. His name was Jek. He ran into a crowd of Foxes once and fought his way through. He earned a medal for that and was proud and prideful. Once he saw another gang of foxes and walked right up to them. "Foight, ya ruffians. I want 'nother badge!" They surrounded him, and, even though a valiant warrior, got captured. DAB's swat team took them out one by one in the trees by slings. Jek wasn't hurt on his body, but he lost his pride and medal.

Don't Be Proud and do things you can't do!
Subject: the clash of the species


Author:
tarquin
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Date Posted: 20:50:06 11/12/05 Sat

foxes,wildcats,and stoats.*Walking through the woods drebbi the otter and kilika the sparrow were searching for redwall. Coming to the rivers the otter scouts ahead.*
kilika! c'mon! i cant fly,unlike someone. taking off,kilika watches drebbi fight many vermin.Tied to a tree, a mouse is kicking the vermin as they come to him.Kilika dives,stabs with her beak,and kills about five.Drebbi is untying the mouses ropes and clears him.They escape.drebbi drops his sword and escapes kilika beckons the mouse to follow but he doesent not knowing kilika and drebbi run.by the way, the mouses name was martin. that is why the tapestry shows vermin running.
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 7: Bluetuft


Author:
The all-knowing Muffle Diddlepaws of DD!
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Date Posted: 23:56:45 11/07/05 Mon

Chapter 7: Bluetuft

Last Chapter: Like last time, there is only 1 post seperating this chapter and the previous. So go'n'read it y'self, wot wot!


Those gathered in Cavern Hole were quiet, each with their own thoughts of the Warrior's story. Suddenly, Clearily held up a paw and motioned to the others. Tippawing to one of the couches near the door, Clearily peeked over it. "Boo!"

Much to the Troupe's suprise, a pretty young vixen yelped and leaped up, blushing furiously. She was clad in a tunic of light pink, and a light blue cloak thrown over it. Her bright blue eyes sparkled, this time with sheepishness and-to Muffle's suprise-a touch of fear.
However, Abbess Ferns and Sister Clearily obviously knew the fox.
"Bluetuft, what in the name o' seasons are you doing here?" Said Ferns with an unusually amount of sternness.
Bluetuft hung her head and whispered meekly, in a soft, gentle voice. "Skippa wanted me to tell you that the wall race can't start without you, Abbess Ferns."
There was a touch of sharpness in Ferns' voice as she told the others. "I can handle this. Go on now, off to the festivities, eh?" They silently walked out of Cavern Hole, and headed toward the main Abbey door, chatting animatedly. Muffle stayed behind, and listened at the door.

"You ought to have knocked. How long have you been here?"
The voice was faint. "When Sister Clearily started t'talk about Martin the Warrior."
"And you've been listening all this time?"
Muffle almost snorted at that.
"Yes."
"I am shocked at this, Bluetuft! Why, I don't know why I shouldn't send you to your dormitry for the ngiht-"
"No!" The soft voice was pleading.
Muffle decided to intervine. Aruptly opening the door, she said cheerfully to the startled Bluetuft and Abbess. "'Lo, Abbess marm! Ah came tae see if this little gel would care to show mah tae m'dormitry an' escort mah t'the Namedah festivities!"
The Abbess could not refuse the request of a guest. "Er, of course Muffle. Bluetuft, show Muffle to the dormitry across the hall from the Infermiry."
"Bluetuft nodded eagerly, refief plain in her eyes as she looked at Muffle.

"Sae, Bluetuft, how'd ye come tae be at yon Abbey?" Asked Muffle as they strolled to the Infermiry.
"I dunno, Miz Muffle. Ever since I can 'member, almost."
"That's a long time. Been happy here?"
"Oh yes, the food is wonderful, and my bed's so soft-"
"Have any friends?"
Bluetuft hesitated, and said finally. "There's a mousemaid in the kitchens named Loly, Kersey De Mayne, Sister Clearily and Sister Armel...." She trailed off miserably, then started and quickly added. "Of coursae, those are just my really close friends."
Muffle felt sorry for her. Obviously the other Abbeybeasts did not favor vermin, even ones raised in the Abbey. She decided to help.
"Well, count y'self lucky, Bluetuft! Cos you just got another friend, me!"
Bluetuft perked up considerably. "Really? Oh gosh, Miz Muffle!" She was about to go on when they arrived at the designated dormitry. "Here w'are, Muffle! I'm in the one all the way down the hall, so just let me know when you've freshened up!" And hurried off down the hallway. Muffle paused to see where she went; it was in the last dormitry. Muffle might have been gone for several seasons, but she remembered that the ones near that were unoccupied. With a sigh, Muffle disapeared into her temporary room.

Brushing her fur and washing her paws, Muffle broaded. Her heart went out to the lonely little outcast, the outcast of Redwall, imagiane! Suddenly, a story she had been told back at Abbey School came to mind, the story of Veil. The little weasel had been brought to the Abbey as a babe, and when he was older had left, also as an outcast. But, he had been cast out for trying to poisen, not for simpley being himself! This was a totally differant thing, Muffle crossly told herself. And yet, maybe they weren't so different after all.


The hightlander ottermaid knocked on the door. Bluetuft called from within. "Come in!"
Muffle obliged. At least Bluetuft's room was nicely furnished, the Abbeybeasts could not deny anyone their reknowned hospitality. Bluetuft was tying a large blue ribbon behind her ears, and looked prettier then ever. snatching her cloak from the back of a chair, the young fox grinned at Muffle. "Ready?"
"Aye. Race ya!"
Laughing and giggling, they dashed out of the dormitry. A few minutes later they emerged from the Abbey, panting. Bluetuft cried. "I win!" She was subdued by the glares of several Abbeybeasts.
Muffle clapped her on the back heartily as Bluetuft straightened her bow and cloak. "C'mon matey, ye kin eat wi' me. Watch out for the haremaids though, put scoff near 'em an' they scoff it! Ah always have tae count mah paws after sittin' to near them at lunch!" Bluetuft giggled. "Now, Tufty ole mate, grab some o' that scoff an' foller me!"

Rosestripe, the haremaids, and the squirrelmaids were seated near the orcherd, and they cocked an eyebrow as Muffle approached at table. Rosestripe nodded at Bluetuft, who was 'getting some scoff' from the tables, which had been set up buffet-style on the lawn. "You invited her to sit with us?"
"Yah. An' don't give me those skeptical looks 'til ye've met her."
Bluetuft approached, balencing a tray piled high with food and a beaker of strawberry fizz. She smiled brightly at Muffle. "I thought you and your friends might like to try some of my appleburry trifle, Muffle!"
Hazal, who was the youngest of the Troupe, smiled back. "Howdy do, Miss! Appleburry trifle? Sounds good!"
Muffle smiled with satisfaction. "Bluetuft, this is Rosestripe, Hazal, Lady Moss, Poppinjay, Maybelle, Reila, and Starmist. Ev'ryone, this 'ere's Bluetuft. Say hello to the nice gel, Troupe!"
Poppy looked curiously at the Appleburry Trifle. Like all hares, her appitite was insatible, especially before meals. "Er, I say ol' chappess, think y'might pass the jolly old rations thisaway?"
Bluetuft handed it to her, and watched in amazment as the haremaids demolished everything that came within paws range. Hazal and the fox quickly became friends, and they chatted animatedly as they ate. Halfway through the meal a cry rang out. It was Ferdimond De Mayne, near the gatehouse.

"Wall racers, line up, wot!"


End of Part Seven!!
Subject: To The West


Author:
Malian and Libra of BB
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Date Posted: 23:01:43 11/05/05 Sat

Name: Malian
Dorm: BB

Malian runs furiously toward the Great Hall, worried that she'd be late for the Abbot's Feast. In her desperation to get there, she trips over a protruding rock, and tumbles head over tail, to land at nobeast other than Aspen's feet. Aspen smirks at the dark fox, think about how that Malian was just a stupid fox, and why the smart creatures of Redwall would let in some vermin.
She says in a harsh, biting tone, "Sister Rose sent me to go find you, won't you ever be on time? Or is it your vermin heart that will always cause trouble?"
Malian's heart boils with anger, and bites her lips and clenches her paws to keep from attacking the squirrel. Why must she always be so, so, UGH!! She ignores her, and walks calmly toward the great hall, ignoring the unpleasant squirrel, and walks in. Blinking at the lack of light in the hall, she stands still and waits for her vision to become accustomed to it. She continues walking down into the Great Hall, and takes a seat on the far side of the table, hardly noticed by the chit chattering beasts of Redwall Abbey. She sits calmly, but can not help but to glare at Aspen. David, her mouse friend sits next to her.* Aspen again Mal? *Malian nods, and digs her claws into the oak seat, but instantly calms down as the Abbot enters the room. Abbot Llarius is a tall and stately otter, and being an abbot is strange for his kind. He takes his seat, and all the beasts fall silent as Friar Taffed, a hedgehog, enters, pushing a large cart. A plate is covered, but Malian’s tender nose picks up the scent. It is a salmon, with herbs, and baked to perfection in an oven. As the friar lifts the cover, the Abbot smiles, and takes a small fork in his paw. The friar cuts of a steaming piece of the fish, and lays it on a plate, with some herbs on the side. The Abbot takes a piece onto his fork, and places it in his mouth. An uncomfortable silance follows. Father Llarius’ eyes open, and he smiles.* My dear Friar Taff, this is one of the best meals I have ever tried. You have outdone yourself! Now, let all the beasts of the Abbey enjoy it, and the rest of this marvelous spread! *Malian begins piling food onto her plate, some woodland salad, hotroot soup, ‘unnymoles, Abbot Mortimer Cake, strawberry pastys, leek and onion flans, and deeper’n’ever pie. She looks around sadly, to see if anyone had created a food for a fox, but there is nothing. She takes her wooden fork, and smiles as the friar places a piece of salmon on her plate. *Now now my dear Malian. I’ve been working on a fox food, but I haven’t finished it yet. I’ll tell you as soon as I perfect it! *He continues on, and Malian feels warmer inside. She reaches for a flask of Strawberry fizz, and growls as Aspen puts her paw on it. She looks disdainfully at her, and draws her hand back.* Humph! The vermin has ruined it! I’ll just have to get a different drink! *Malian flames inside again, but doesn’t show it. She was getting a lot of practice at that. She pours it into her cup, and takes a sip. Oh to get away!*

(Continued Later)
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 6: Coming Closer


Author:
Muffle of DD!
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Date Posted: 22:30:17 11/05/05 Sat

In our last chapter: Well, it's too long to post here. And it's almost right b'low this post, so y'shan't have a hard time finding it. I'm afriad there were MAJOR spoilers for Martin the Warrior(The book, y'no.). Anyway, let's take a look at what out great Vernix is up to.....


Nerean Fol was pleased. Preperations for their voyage were going smoothly, but that was to be expected when the lesser vermin being overseen by Aured. Aured was a female fox, and was one of Fol's best fighters. Her cold, calculating ways and the way her gaze intimidated even the most hardened beast made her that way.

Aryle was perched upon the steps that led up to the main cabin, watching with slight amusement the pair known as 'The Twins.' Vasika, a female Vernix barely four seasons old, was playing with a ball, tossing it back and forth with her brother Nerith. They laughed and giggled when the ball rolled near their mother, and she had to throw it back. Aryle was an excellent thrower. That fact was probably due to all the knifes and stones she had chucked at her enemies. But she didn't tell The Twins that. Let them live as long as possable without the knowlage that it was because their mother had been a killer, and not because of the games she'd played as a young one.

Aryle snorted quietly. Games as a young one indeed! Her life at a young age had involved slaying those who were plotting to kill her because of the fortune and position that she would inherite when she was of age. That age came all too soon, when her parents were slain and she had to reprisent the Sea Rulers clan at the annual vermin council, she had been only ten seasons. It didn't matter what age the reprisenitive was, as long as he or she had quick thinking, a skill for uncovering rebel plots, smarts, and of course they had to be from the Vernix clan reprisented.
Seasons after that, she had married Nerean Fol and together they had pushed their way up to the top, until they were one of the primary and most respected Vernixes of them all. In the prossess, they had aquired two cubs, one, Nereith, was born by her, and Vasika had been an orphan, found near the road and abandoned. After much pleading on her part to Nerean, they had adopted her and told everyone that she was Nerith's twin, hiding the truth. But it barely mattered that no one knew, as Nerith and Vasika had, over the years, become truely The Twins, who were loved by both Nerean and Aryle. Now there was no way she would let her cubs grow up in the mind-numbing fear that had gripped her many a night at their age. No, she would enjoy 'spoiling' them, yet give them an education on weapons of war without their knowing it. Already each of them could sling a wooden stick fashioned as a dirk, not nearly as good as their mother, but still a fair shot.

Aryle was brought out of her thoughts when Nerean lightly touched her shoulder. She looked up, and Fol motiond toward The Twins.
"Tell them to follow us, 'tis time I showed 'em where we're going to live."
The Twins willingly followed their parents into the main cabin. Several paper lanturns illuminated the comfertable space, where three beds, a table laden with charts, and a few random things that were to be brought along.
Fol led them to the charts. He pointed at the faded one that Aryle had caught him looking at a few days ago, his voice enthusiastic.
"Here is where our new home'll be, it's call Redwall. What d'ya think?"
Vasika peeked over the table edge, having to stand on her tip-paws to do so. Her small voice sqeaked slightly as she spoke. "Daddy, I norra see it!"
Fol chuckled. He lifted her up, and set her in the edge of the table. "Do you see it now, little Vasika?"
Vasika sqeaked in excitment. "Yah, yah! Oooh, it'sa small!"
Nerean chuckled again. "Wait'll ya see in in person, me liddle Vasi! It's much, much bigger then on that piece of parchment." Nerith tugged slightly on his father's tunic. His voice sqeaked less then Vasika's.
"Dad'y, lemee see! I wanna see our new homeser!"
So, Vasika was set down and Nerith picked up, with a new round of oohs and ahs. Nerean and Aryle exchanged looks. This ws perfect. It simply would not be worth going if The Twins didn't like where they were headed and threw fits and such, making the whole party miserable. And that wouldn't happen. With so few numbers(Only about 30 Vernix total), each Vernix family was closely knit. They needed each other. Nothing could seperate them, except the sea. And that wasn't going to happen, and nothing was going to go wrong.

Nothing.

END OF PART SIX!!

And now a word from our auther: Betcha never heard of such a type o' vermin, eh? That's the best thing about using a not-used-very-often/ever type of vermin; you have an almost clean easal to work on.

Look forward to Part Seven!
Subject: A Poem


Author:
Serm of AA
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Date Posted: 16:45:49 11/05/05 Sat

I made this up awhile ago. Well, here it is....

While seagulls soar o'er water,
Letting loose their mournful cry;
I lay still, my spirit let loose, free to fly.

Why Deaths befell me,
'Tis a mystery,
Deaths shadow cloaked me,
As I become part of history.

Don't try to fight it,
Cuz will do naught,
The mind becomes befuddled,
While the body shall rot.

~Serm's Poem~
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 5: A Discovery


Author:
Muffle D. of the DD!
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Date Posted: 20:03:36 11/04/05 Fri

Last chapter:

"Well, as you ken, Nuncle Doogy was takin' me on a liddle tour of the Highlands," Began Muffle. They(The Players, Sister Clearily, and Abbess Ferns) were crowded into Cavern Hole. Muffle was relating details about her trip in her broad Highlander accent, whilst Clearily recorded it.
"We stopped at Salamandastron first, 'cause it was sorta on our way, for a visit wi' Lady Mesleme. We got there by boat, on the River Moss, y'know, so it didn't take us long. We picked up a couple of vermin tracks but thought nought of them. Probably some mangy bands, passin' through. Anywho, we made great time, and after a few days o' trekking south, we made it tae th' dar o' the fire mountion.
"Mesleme, along wi' 'er daughter, Rosestripe over there, an' a thousand Long Patrol hares, were there tae weelcome us. A right good score o' days we spent there, swimmin' an' observin' the Long Parol an' 'ow it works an' all that. Rosy an' me were great chums, an' her Mum allowed Rosy to leave Salamandastron and tour wi' us, after being convinced that it would familierize her with the ter'try."
Muffle paused for breath, and Rosestripe took up te narriative.
"Aye, and what a time we had! Sad as I was to leave Mamma, I rather enjoyed leaving the mountion, never having ventured far from it's shores. Well, we took a seaworthy-ship -captured from searats, the nasty things!- named the 'Rosewell' and travaled North'ard, fully provisioned and staying well within sight of the coast. We moored it and left it in the paws of a tribe of sea-otters, and trekked east on foot."
Rosestripe nodded for Muffle to continue, and the ottermaid obliged with a grin.
"Aye, and it wasn't to long afore we came upon a liddle 'idden place by the name of Noonvale! Filled with mice, squirrels, moles, a suprising number of hares, and a few river-otters."

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Sister Clearily dropped her quill pen that she was using to record the tale. Abbess Ferns looked concerned and alarmed as the good sister's mouth hung open. "My dear, are you ill?"

Clearily shook her head, and gave a small chuckle. "Ill? You must be jesting, Abbess. Now, Muffle, did hear you correctly, 'Noonvale'?"

Muffle nodded, her pretty features puzzled. "Aye marm. We spent a forenight there, wish we coulda stayed longer. Kirrin Vol and his wife were braw kind to us-"

Sister Clearily looked as though she was about to jump up and dance, she was so excited. "Noonvale, oh my bloomin' goodness and great seasons! The place still lives!"

Abbess Ferns shook her head. Clearily had finally been done in. Ferns spoke kindly to her. "Clearily, would you like to go and lay down? Perhaps you should go and take a rest."

Clearily looked horrafied, but she relized what Ferns was speaking of, so she said rather wryly. "And miss educating you lot on Redwall history? Certianly not, m'am! Come on now, you must remember your lessons from Abbey School?"

Ferns looked suprised and her face lighted up as it struck her. "Of course! Noonvale, why diddn't I reconize the name?"

Poppy politely interuppted. "Pardon me, marms, but wot the ballyhooday are you speaking of?"

Clearily nodded. "Ah, you have not been to Abbey School, as you were raised in Salamandastron. Of course you haven't the foggiest idea of what I speaking of! Er, right. Ahem. Noonvale,"She explained. "Was-is, actuelly,- the home of very peacable beasts. A long, long time ago before Redwall was built, a young mouse called Brome wandered away from Noonvale. He was captured by a stoat called Badrang, who was, in fact, a vermin warlord in the middle of building his fortress. He imprisened Brome. When he didn't come back, his father sent his sister, Laterose, and a trusted mole called Grumm to fetch him. Laterose-or Rose as she was known- was by far the prettiest, nicest, and most lovely young mousemaid in all the land. She was also very brave, and saved Martin-Yes, Martin the Warrior- from death by seagulls! He had been tied up on the top of the partily completed fortress for 'disobidience of a slave' to Badrang. Rose saved Martin by calling like an eagle-she could imatate any and every bird call well-and grightened the gulls away. Some of the vermin were frightened too, and that gave some of Badrang's slaves the courage to chuck stones at the vermin's backs-"

Muffle interuppted. "Why was Martin a slave?"

"Well, he had been captured when he was very young, along with his grandmother, who died soon after. It was after Luke-Martin's father- had sailed away, ne'er to return, and Martin possesed Luke's sword. Badrang now had it. It wasn't the fabulous sword that we have now, that came much, much later. Anyway, Martin was chucked into a prison pit to die, and he found some of his best friends there, Felldoh the squirrel and Brome! They soon escaped with a bit of night and Grumm tunnalling, but they got away. Unfortunetily, there was a storm, and to escape the vermin chasing them they boarded a small vermin boat to sail to sea. The boat soon broke, and they were cast into the sea. Martin, Rose, and Grumm landed a ways north, whilest Felldoh and Brome ended up much closer to the fort, Marshank. Brome an' Felldoh teamed up with a band of wandering players, and worked on freeing every last slave. They suceeded, and were in the middle of a battle when who shows up but Martin, Rose, Grumm, and a hedgehog maid they met along the way, Pallum. They were at the head of a huge army of pigmy shrews, Guosim, and many other assorted cretures. While traveling they had visited Noonvale, and they had also left it, Rose following much against her father's wishes.

"After a long, hard battle, the Fur'n'Freedom Fighters won, but at a bitter price. Felldoh, and many others, had been killed, but above them all in Martin's heart was Rose, who was slain by Badrang himself just before Martin slew Badrang. It was not until Martin awoke from a state of unconsiousness that he was told that his love, Rose, was dead, and he blamed himself bitterly for it. Right before Rose was taken back to be buried in Noonvale, Martin left, never returning to that area again in his life. He came to Mossflower and-well, I s'pose you lot know the rest."
Subject: Winter


Author:
Thrus
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Date Posted: 02:10:18 11/04/05 Fri

Thrus
Active Array

Crystals falling from the sky
The ground is rich with their light
The days are dark and cold out
But warm and cheery within
Beasts are bundled up about
The halls filled with merriment
Subject: Tempest's Tale, part ?


Author:
Mareth of the AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA AA
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Date Posted: 23:22:37 11/03/05 Thu

Last chapter:

That next evening, after grueling work chopping down a huge pine tree, Tempest, Reuben, Gryphurn the mole, and Twurrie the hedgehog were whispering together in the dark.
"Sorry the old plan didn't work, Tempest." Reuben said, apologetically.
"There /wasn't/ any plan! I ran away 'cos I was sick of it all! So stop trying to act like you had some part of it!"
"How ungrateful can you get? And so rude!"
"You sound like some fussy old rabbitwife- 'How ungrateful can you get?'" Tempest mimicked in a high-pitched voice. "And so rude!"
"Stoppit, both of ye," interrupted old Twurrie. "Anyway, this time, we have a plan." Her voice lowered. "Everybeast lean in." And the four figures- two old and frail, one in his prime, and an extremely sore and pained one who was still growing- whispered excitedly together in a tight circle. Hopes, finally, were lifting.
* * *
The next morning, while trying to swallow her breakfast of breadcrusts, cheese rinds, apple cores, and stale water, Tempest voiced her doubts about the plan to Reuben.
"'Ben, I was mulling over the plan last night and I'm wondering- Why're you sending me off? Why me? If they catch me again, it doesn't matter how hard I work, I'm dead!"
"I told you, you're the only one that's the right size and species, and a searat is a whole lot more convincing than a seastoat!"
"But- but-" sputtered Tempest. "When are we doing this, anyway? Why now? Why not wait a while longer?"
"There are a few reasons, missy. One, the vermin are preparing to move soon, and that means that they're going to be going nearer to some good slave-buyer. And with your behavior, they'll be happy to get rid of you. Two, have you noticed the condition of Twurrie, Gryphurn, and the old mad shrew, Diffinder?"
"No, what's wrong with them?"
"They're getting old, Tempest. They're becoming frailer by the week. If they go on like this, they'll be dead in a month! All three of 'em are /elders/, Tempest, and they need lots of food, rest, and medicine. They can't keep it up much longer."
"Okay, okay, 'Ben. I'm with you. We'll stock up on food and supplies for a week, and then I’ll go."
"We can’t wait that long!" exclaimed the otter. "You gotta leave soon! They’re going to sell us, and our lives can only get worse from there! We don’t deserve this! None of the slaves deserve this! There are babes and elders here! They’re all going to drop dead in these conditions, and you’ll be to blame by not saving them in time!"
"Okay, fine. I’ll strike a deal with you. Tonight, we’ll listen in on the vermin’s conversations-"
"I’ve already done that!" interrupted Reuben.
"We’ll listen in on the vermin," continued Tempest, "and if we hear one bit of news about selling or moving, then I’ll leave tomorrow night. Deal?"
"Deal." said her surrogate father. And they shook paws on it…

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"This is the best deal I've ever made!" whispered Reuben to Tempest. The otter and mousemaid were lying on their stomachs behind a bush. This may seem like a rather odd thing to be doing at midnight with a gang of drunken searats in front of you, ready to kill you if you make a single sound, but the two had their reasons.
"They've been talking of nothing BUT trading and moving! I just knew it!" continued Reuben. Tempest, still rather annoyed at the fact her best friend was right and she was wrong, merely grunted in return.
"So, tomorrow, we'll stock up on berries, nuts, and dry leaves." said Tempest after her grunt.
"Why dry leaves?"
"To muffle the chains!"
"Oooookay. Wouldn't they crackle? I think plain leaves'd be better."
Tempest groaned.
"Why are you /always/ right?" she muttered.
The vermin then very conveniently started talking about the gruesome torture of somebeast-or-other, and the argument that was about to blossom between Tempest and Reuben stopped as they both grimaced, headed towards the other slaves, and collapsed drowsily.
***
The next day, Tempest gave an important announcement to Twurrie, Gryphurn, Likkleun, and the other babies Clovey, Winkle, and Og (who was actually named Twinky, but being a boy, little Twinky preferred something a bit more masculine). Instead of a polite "ahem", Tempest promptly broke into a hacking cough before starting.
"Hechretchretchahem. Reuben and I have been planning something, as two of you will know. It's all decided. I will escape tonight. I can't say much more because the walls- er, bushes have ears here. We'll be collecting things in the forest. You know, leaves (she glared at Reuben), berries, that sort of thing. The end."
As soon as Tempest was finished, Likkleun, Og, and co. began bombarding Tempest with questions.
"Is sumfin' bad gonna 'appen?"
"Are you gonna kill lotsa lotsa verminks?"
"Can you bwing me a pwetty seashell?"
"Will there be-" The mousemaid quickly butted in and stopped the flood.
"If everything goes according to plan, nothing bad will happen, Likkleun. I hopefully will not have to kill lotsa lotsa vermin, Og, and as I'm going by the beach, I'll give you all seashells!"
TO BE CONTINUED...
Subject: Haikus About dibbuns


Author:
Rika from MM
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Date Posted: 22:35:34 11/01/05 Tue

No baths for dibbuns!
a pie in the Abbots face
uh oh Run away!

Bedtime has now come,
Quick! hide inside the orchard,
No! Sister found me

Dibbuns! Join DAB now
Oppose bathtime and you will
Have a bathless life
Subject: Dibbuns O DAB


Author:
Chestnut Spiketree
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Date Posted: 11:40:38 10/30/05 Sun

We're da dibbuns o DAB!
We like ta fight and play!
Earn Candied Chestnuts,
And play all day!
HEEHEE!

If we here da Eldas calling:
'Bathtimes pretty soon'
We run and hide our dirty selves,
And don't come out til next noon!
AHH!

We weally like ta cause mischief
All day and all night!
Jump out on Elders
And give e'm a big fright!
BOO!

We're da Dibbuns of DAB
And dat's what we's are!
Subject: Storytellers


Author:
Tuffen of GG GG GG GG GG GG GG GG GG GG
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Date Posted: 15:40:39 10/23/05 Sun

I am in GG, GG, GG,GG,GG,GG,GG,GG,GG,GG,!!
Alrighty, I'll give it a go:
First, how to pronounce the names:
Corral- ka-RUHL
Pheobe- FEE-bee


The fire licked at the logs hungrily with such power and force that it was mind reeling to think that the one feeling it produced was an utter sense of warmth and happiness. The smooth stones that surrounded the hearth of the mantle glowed with light. The room was small, being a tiny section of the library where the librarian fixed the books with new covers and such. Redwall's librarian was a very ancient mouse named Corral. Corral had seen many years of both justice and injustice, thus his knowledge stretched farther than any Redwaller could perplex thier mind enough to imagine. He sat in a velvet red chair, his nose in a book as always. With a shaky paw, he rubbed his eyes. Slowly, they closed and he drifted off to sleep....
" CORRAL!! Oh dear, you fell asleep again! Please do continue with the story!" Ferny requested. Ferny was a young otter, older than a dibbun but still in her prime. She was gently shaking Corral with one paw and holding a candle in the other. By her side, an otterbabe nodded in agreement. "Pweez, mista Cowwal? You was tellin' us'ns a 'tory! It's Tory Time!"giggled Pheobe. Pheobe was a rascally otter dibbun, and she wore a dirty night gown with strawberry stains all over it. In her secret pocket inside of the tunic, Pheobe hid her treasures- candied chestnuts, shiny cups, acorns and spoons. Laughing excitedly, she jumped on Corral's lap. "You was 'bout to tell us 'bout the two explorers clues, 'memba?"
Corral sat up " Oh! yes, sorry indeed. Ferny, pull up a chair. Pheobe, come sit in my lap. This is a long story. Once apon a time, very long ago, there were two friends. Actually, quite like you two! There was an older squirrel, about Ferny's age, and his name was Flash. Flash was the fastest squirrel Redwall had ever seen. He could shimmy up and done a tree before you could blink an eyeball. His young friend, a dibbun squirrel just your age" The old mouse turned to Pheobe and tickled her nose. "Her name was Snicket, and she had the largest appetite for nuts than anybeast could imagine! She had nuts for breakfast, two snacks of nuts until lunch and three more nut snacks to keep her going until dinner. Of course, she grew to be very large, chubby I mean, and wasn't the most agile squirrel, but she still kept up with Flash. And Flash knew to slow down when Snicket grew tired. They were the best of friends. At that time, the abbess was Abbess Memsie, the jolly old hedghog. For a very long while, the abbey was at perfect peace. Until one foggy night. Clambering to bed, Flash was so tired he felt he could sleep for a month. He hopped in bed and fell asleep. Yet in his dreams, Martin came to him. Raising his sword, the legednary mouse spoke. And the words didn't come from his mouth, it seemed as if they were spoken into Flash, into his brain. Martin's words were:
I pass my sword along to thee,
You, sweet, living image of me,
Take your friend who eats a lot,
Bring all that you have got,
It's time to leave the beloved abbey,
So in the morning, tell Memsie Mother,
That you have buisness other,
Twixt the rocks of sullen life,
And the girl you'll soon call wife,
You must pass clearly by,
Take thee sword of my,
Questing calls some,
leaves some others,
some love adventure,
some cry to their mothers,
You have the call,
overall,
It would be best,
for to quest,
At the very earliest hour,
You two will leave Mossflower.
Martin bowed and dissapeared. For the rest of the night, Flash slept peacefully.

That is all fer now!
Subject: Elyth


Author:
Dastardly Dibbuns
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Date Posted: 14:14:17 10/23/05 Sun

Hares
Fierce, Brave
Eating, Scoffing, Feasting
Gluttounous and Perilous
Beasts
Hares

Badger
Large, Proud
Fighting, Helping, Slaying
Guard the Fire Mountain

Dibbuns
Mischeivious, Happy
Playing, Tricking, Cheering
Baffs neva, play foreva
Dibbuns
Subject: Remembering Shay


Author:
Twilla, Corin and Tuffen of GG GG GG GG GG GG
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Date Posted: 02:24:33 10/20/05 Thu

We have all heard the tale of Sister Shay, and she was known as the wisest creature of all time. She was only a young mouse when she came to the abbey, but she was immediatly loved by all. Although she never told anyone of her history, we loved her as if we were born cradled in her arms. And yet, on one winters night, Shay told me of her history. I take up my pen to tell you of it.
Prolougue:
The wind swirled along the shore, sending the mists scattering to the outskirts of the beach. The waves lapped gently against the still form lying on the sand. Far away, in the endless brine, still floated the raft, with the hot flames licking it away and devouring it. With the raft, went a young otter and mole, lost forever to the fathoms of unknown eternity. And yet, from the dark of the night, the greiving of the death and the pain of survival, came a miracle.

Chapter 1:
The young mouse grumbled and rolled onto her side. Probing into her mind, she fought to remember what had happened. And, yet, she found she could remember nothing at all. Who she was, where she was and she got here were all mysteries to her. Opening her eyes, she took stock of her surroundings. Why was she here? Fighting to remember more, she stood up painfully. She gently felt around her body for injuries. All she could feel was cold. Pain. And another feeling, greiving, although she did not know what for.

I'll write more later, gotta go!
Subject: redwall poem(I don't think it's very good, but...)


Author:
moonbrook and treeshine of II
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Date Posted: 14:45:36 10/16/05 Sun

Redwall: a place of peace,
a haven for a hare.
A foe of foxes;
a terror to vermin,
it stands as a sign
of peace,honesty, and rest.
For shrews to sit in silence,
for mice to meditate,
for dibbuns to play safely,
for cooks to chat merrily,
for otters to sing aloud,
for badgers to forget the bloodwrath,
Redwall is the place!!
Subject: White Leaves


Author:
Thrus, AA
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Date Posted: 02:54:04 10/11/05 Tue

On the blanket of soaring black grass
Lie white leaves shining like shattered glass
And amidst these broken pieces of
Platters and bowls and cups above is
One saucer unbroken, unshattered,
Shining more that all the others,
And like a brave warrior standing
The smiling saucer nods toward me,
But no one can see him smilling save
Oh little, oh little, little me.
For the shattered glass plates are the stars
And the one whole saucer the moon,
And even if I travel so far
That saucer'll be there very soon
As the only dearest friend to me
When all other friends tease little me.
Subject: Poem


Author:
Otterears of the Rambling Rascals
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Date Posted: 15:56:22 10/08/05 Sat

Night has closed upon the piles of leaves.
Winter closes in on the quiet closings.
The red harvest moon wanes from sight,
leaving a frosty moon this night.
The warrior will speak to the one whose lost.
The mean willl not be put to justice.
The heir will find refuge in the limbs of mother nature.
And you can find her there.
Subject: Redwall poem


Author:
Sapheronatora of the U.B.
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Date Posted: 00:08:28 10/07/05 Fri

Redwall abey

Oh I love to be in this beautifull abbey,
It all ways makes mee so cheerfull and happy,
I hope you will come to see it with me,

Down in the kichens,
There are no chickens,
But there is foood for a feast,

Look to the east,
Look to the west,
Thats the place that I like best
Subject: The Old Quarry's Secret Part II


Author:
Riverrose
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Date Posted: 19:19:18 10/04/05 Tue

Name: Riverrose
Dorm: Bad Babes

The Old Quarry's Secret: How Asmodeous Came to Mossflower

Part II: The Reeds of the Cave

Kari opened her almond-shaped eyes and let go of Brio's legs. The fall was emense; about ten feet or so, and to a young mouse, that was forever. She had closed her eyes tightly when they went, but now, as she opened them, wanted to scream.
They were in total darkness. Nothing like the dim light that shone through the passageways, but real, raven black. It was as if there was nothing.
Kari tried to feel around with her paw, to find something. When she jerked it, a white hot pain shot into her arm, as if thousands of daggers were pressing into her flesh.
The agonizing cry of the infant woke Brio up. He lay sprawled upon the floor. When he slowly opened his eyes, he tried to pick himself up, accustomed to total darkness. But his efforts were in vain, as he experienced more pain than Kari.
"Three ribs cracked and a leg broken, little one." he groaned, trying to be cheerful. "What about you?"
"Sprained my paw."
Brio cried silently.
"Not only will we never be able to scale the cliff, but I'm in no condition to travel."
"We're trapped?" Brio detected a sob in the young doormouse's voice.
"I am, but not you. See if you can find us some food."
"I've never been anywhere without an elder."
"There are always firsts."
Kari touched the old mouse's paw.
"I won't leave without you."
"Listen to me, go!"
Without a word, Kari ran off into the darkness.

When she returned, Brio groaned and rolled over.
"Anything, little one?"
"No," Kari stated sadly. "All I saw was a big lake. There were reeds in the water. I picked them."
"Did you know I was once assistant infirmary helper?" asked Brio. "Those herbs are very good for dressings, expecially when they've never seen sunlight."
"Teach me how to make one and I can bandage up your leg." Kari said excitedly.
"No." said Brio. "I'll do it myself."

Kari perswaded Brother Brio to show her how. His nimble paws flew as he stripped the outside of the reed, revealing the red-colored pulp within. While he had Kari weave the reed outside, Brio shaped the core into a thin, flat sheet. He passed it from paw to paw. When Kari was done, he inserted the red thing into the two small mats, and bound it with a reed.
"Good, little one. I see your weaving has improved."
Kari blushed. "When will you be well enough to walk?"
"A week."
"We don't have that long!"
"There are plants here. But before I send you out to get them, Kari, I want to tell you a story. You're wondering about how I knew about the secret passage, right?"
Subject: Oops!


Author:
Riverrose
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Date Posted: 01:24:53 10/04/05 Tue

I'm in the Bad Babes.
Subject: The Old Quarry's Secret


Author:
Riverrose
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Date Posted: 01:23:02 10/04/05 Tue

The Old Quarry's Secret: How Asmoudeous Came to Mossflower

When a mousemaid and an Abbey schoolteacher venture too far into the place where Redwall's stone was taken, they awaken a monster who will be known as poisonteeth for years to come...

Part I: The Bricks of the Foundations

"The first Redwallers labored at this very spot." Brother Brio guided the young doormouse to a gigantic cave at the other end. It was red, a rusty, beautiful red. Kari looked at the vast tunnels leading down. The young mouse gasped.
"Yes, it is gigantic, and all of that was done to create our Abbey. Imagine if you will hot, tired woodlanders, laboring hard under the sun. They carry giant blocks of sandstone on their backs, bent low to support the stone. Martin the Warrior stood here." he pointed to a groove in the cave walls. "He surveyed the work. Touch the blocks of sandstone, cut off to build our Abbey. It is living history. The quarry will always be here."
"Forever?" Kari touched the rough edges where the chisels had done their work, careful not to press to hard.
"Forever." the school brother smiled.
Brio was an old, aging mouse with tan-colored fur and a small goatee. His gray habit was wrapped tight around him as the steady breeze blew through the Abbey. His stundent Kari wore a green dress, paterned with four-leaf clovers. Brio had taken a liking to the mousemaid.
"Do you want to go deeper?" he asked as she tugged at his habit. "What is it, little one?"
"What's that?" she asked, looking at an indent in the walls.
"That is where the sword of Martin the Warrior did the work that tools could not." Brio explained. She looked at that part in awe.
"I want to go farther in."

Kari clung tightly to the Brother's habit as they spiraled through the passageways. It got darker and darker, and the walls narrowed. There were forks in the road, on which Brio backtracked their journey in his head than took a path. He seemed to know the quarry like the back of his paw.
Then, they reached a dead end. Softly, Brio whispered:
"Here they had all the block they needed, little one."
"Is this the end of our journey?"
Brio smiled, his eyes twinkling.
"Oh my, no."
"Where to go but back?"
Brio felt around the stone wall. He pressed and pushed, rubbing his fur against it and spitting on the stone. Finally, he found the part he was looking for.
"Cling to my legs. Whatever you do, don't let go."
With suprising stregnth rare in one his age, Brio pushed hard on the stone. He threw his weight against it, and the wall swung, revealing a small cliff with a giant fall.
But Brio had misjudged his effort. Pushing altogether to hard, he found himself tompling over the edge, Kari still clinging to his legs.

More coming up!
Subject: 1) Do You Remember Me? 2) Memories of Mine 3) When the Rain Falls


Author:
Kana of the Naughty Knot
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Date Posted: 09:59:49 10/01/05 Sat

I remember you.
Do you remember me?
You were there for me
When I had troubles
And I was there for you.
We cried together.

I remember you.
Do you remember me?
You were there to listen
When I was spilling joy
And I was there for you.
We laughed together.

I remember you.
Do you remember me?
You were there for me
When I was all alone.
And I was there for you.
We kept company together.

I remember you.
Do you remember me?
We laughed together,
We cried together.
We fought back sorrow
And sought happiness,
We did it together.

I remember you.
Do you remember me?
You were there for me.
And I was there for you.


My memories rest on my shelf
Reminding me of the past.
Helping me see the future.
And clearing the present.
I gather my memories from them.
Past, Present and Future.
An elegent rose, so complex.
A child's drawing, so simple.
A single photo, a thousand words.
Living proof of the past.
Building blocks for the future.
All resting on my shelf
But now my shelf is gone,
I can't find my memories
My life as I know it
Is now over, n'er to return.


When the rain falls
Is it the Lord above,
Mourning for his people?
Or is it the clouds on high,
Mourning for Mother Earth?

When the rain falls
Do you share the grief?
Or do you laugh aloud,
Filled with the joy of life?
Are the long-forgotten
Mysteries of time remembered?
Do you now understand
How all life is joined,
To sing in perfect harmony?

When the rain falls
Upon Mother Earth,
Do you love?


Thats all! *bows*
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 4: A Meetup Journey, and a Setting Out


Author:
Muffle Diddlepaw of DD
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Date Posted: 21:27:24 09/27/05 Tue

"Well, as you ken, Nuncle Doogy was takin' me on a liddle tour of the Highlands," Began Muffle. They(The Players, Sister Clearily, and Abbess Ferns) were crowded into Cavern Hole. Muffle was relating details about her trip in her broad Highlander accent, whilst Clearily recorded it.
"We stopped at Salamandastron first, 'cause it was sorta on our way, for a visit wi' Lady Mesleme. We got there by boat, on the River Moss, y'know, so it didn't take us long. We picked up a couple of vermin tracks but thought nought of them. Probably some mangy bands, passin' through. Anywho, we made great time, and after a few days o' trekking south, we made it tae th' dar o' the fire mountion.
"Mesleme, along wi' 'er daughter, Rosestripe over there, an' a thousand Long Patrol hares, were there tae weelcome us. A right good score o' days we spent there, swimmin' an' observin' the Long Parol an' 'ow it works an' all that. Rosy an' me were great chums, an' her Mum allowed Rosy to leave Salamandastron and tour wi' us, after being convinced that it would familierize her with the ter'try."
Muffle paused for breath, and Rosestripe took up te narriative.
"Aye, and what a time we had! Sad as I was to leave Mamma, I rather enjoyed leaving the mountion, never having ventured far from it's shores. Well, we took a seaworthy-ship -captured from searats, the nasty things!- named the 'Rosewell' and travaled North'ard, fully provisioned and staying well within sight of the coast. We moored it and left it in the paws of a tribe of sea-otters, and trekked east on foot."
Rosestripe nodded for Muffle to continue, and the ottermaid obliged with a grin.
"Aye, and it wasn't to long afore we came upon a liddle 'idden place by the name of Noonvale! Filled with mice, squirrels, moles, a suprising number of hares, and a few river-otters."


END OF PART FOUR!

Sorry it's so short, but later today I'll post the rest!
Subject: Sorry Nutty, I forgot to put my dorm down. I'm Konul Seatide of the Mad Menaces


Author:
Konul Seatide
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Date Posted: 00:33:10 09/21/05 Wed

Subject: A Poem, Song, Ballad, or whatever else ya wanna call it.


Author:
Konul Seatide
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Date Posted: 00:30:55 09/21/05 Wed

I'm looking through a window,
A window through Time?
I'm looking through a window,
This chance just might be mine.
I'm looking through a window,
And I now know what I see,
I am seeing what might be,
Just,
Just,
All I have to do is step forward,
Not hide in the Shadows this time.
All I've got to do is try.
I won't be invisible anymore,
Not a slave,
Not to be beaten by one who thinks himself my master.
I'll live.
I'll know what it is to love and be free,
If only I wasn't so sure they'd won my submission.
My spirit just might be broken,
But I won't know until I try,
Will I?
So I /must/ try.
I /know/ I could do it!
Why aren't my feet moving when my mind wills them.
My mind says /go/!
My body says I'm not so sure.
I /know/ it will happen!
Some day,
Some day.
But not today?
My one chance, and I'm to afraid to take it?
How can this be?
A perfect chance,
A chance to slip free,
And I don't know if I can.
I must though.
I want my mind to breathe free,
Not be imprisoned, and forced to think what my so
called "masters" want.
All I want is my life.
My chance is staring me in the face,
I might never get another one,
And I can't move my feet to go,
My lips to say yes, I'll go.
I can't because I'm afraid,
A coward.

Suddenly you speak.
You say, "Love, you're not a coward."
You say, "Those who accept love, of any kind, can't be
cowards."
But I know,
I'm a coward,
I'm afraid to leave the life I always known,
Even though it was a cruel one,
One I only endured because I couldn't go anywhere else.

I think.
Maybe you are right,
Maybe I'm not a coward.
I can love.
I can /be/ loved.

I go with you.
I leave the life I've always known,
I leave it and I know I'm taking a risk,
But I don't care anymore,
Because I'm finally free,
And I can breathe,
And I can think,
And I know I'm not alone.

We tied a knot, you and I.
We're bound forever,
And we don't care,
Because we know we're not alone.

We'll always have each other.



**Author's Note: The aforementioned "slave" is not a /true/ slave, it is simply a figure of speech. The tied knot can mean any of many types of bonds (male/female love, the truest of friends, etc.**
Subject: A Poam about waiting for the new books


Author:
Lady Moss of DD
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Date Posted: 21:56:55 09/19/05 Mon

Standing outside the bookstore
Waiting, waiting,
Pressing nose against the glass.
Impaitent feelings stir within me,
Waiting, for the time to come to pass.
Waiting, ever waiting,
Passerbys eye me oddly
As I wait in the cold
In the place fire burning hotly
Waits for me at home.
O, but I wish that it would come!
As dawn kisses the morning
Hopefull I become once more
My eyes rivite on the shelves, boring
Into them.
A few hang around the door,
All awaiting when,
The time should come that we all get our wishes.
But I ignore them,
(And make a face as one starts eating fryed fishes)
I clutch the corner hem
Of my cloak,
Waiting for that time then.
(Behind me someone sips at their coke.)
My hopes sing out and we all cheer
When Finally he comes,
The manage-eer!
I shout 'Haway the Braw!' and charge into the store
When when it is locked no more
And in the frenzy I follow future cooks
All of us searching for the same book,
When I find it.
An isle away from all the best
I think that I must find the rest
Before I enjoy what I hold here,
(Here it is, what I hold dear!)
The Cookbook.
Running blindly to the table
I stop and stare at the fabled
High Rhulian.
I shout my warcry high and loud
and quickly grab it off the shelve
Dashing to the checkout proud
Not really thinking, here and now.
Putting change right on the stand
(Counted out be-fore hand)
I bother with no lousy bag
But run outside, my feet no drag
I whistle for my ride, "Come near!"
And it pulls up beside me here
On the sidewalk.
I leap into my seat
And open the books quite happily
Finished is my stalk.
As I turn my eyes unto first words
A loud sound quite like a bird
Dispairs me.
For now, I'm not in a van, instead
I find I'm in my bed.
"No No!" I cry and I sigh.
As over the pinkish sky
Dawn breaks.
Oh well, only three more days!


*Sigh* I'm waaay to bored, not to mention that I'm going crazier with waiting!! Um, any CCs go to Lady Moss of DD!
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 3: The Wolf's comence.


Author:
Muffle Diddlepaw of DD
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Date Posted: 21:06:15 09/19/05 Mon

Nerean Fol looked hard at the charts that lay before him. He was a wolf, of average height and build, with nothing totally unusuel about him except for three things.
One, he was a Vernix wolf, one of an elite band who had been born with a orange-ish, reddish tinge in in their fur, and an unusuelly bushy white tail. He resembled a fox more then a wolf in his colorings.
Two, Nerean Fol was a seaswolf. While it was commom in the far southern regain of the coast, never before had any Vernix ventured further then the outskirts of the place called Southsward. It was said that fierce warriors lived in the north, and none had wanted to be killed. Nerean Fol was different. At his command was five hundred vermin, all trained and skilled, armed to the teeth and cold-blooded when it came to slaying. The Vernix was certian that with them, he could easily go around Southsward by sea, and conqour the land further north.
The third and final thing that set Nerean Fol apart from the other Vernix's was that he was bringing his family with him. Yes, he was so condfadent in his abilaty to suceed that the Vernix was bringing along his beloved wife, the she-Vernix Aryle, and their little twins, the male Nerith and female Vasika. Unlike the other vermin that populated the land, Nerean Fol greatly valued and treasured his family, and hated it when they were seprated. The family felt likewise.

Now Nerean Fol was plotting a course for getting around Southsward. He muttered to himself in a rough voice as he traced his claw around a map, made seasons before by some unknown beast who had visited it. "Hm, lessee now, this 'ere stream will take us out over... Hmm, yah, then if we get onto this current... What's this?" He looked suprised. "A great stone fortress?" He read the faded print, slowly and carefully, squinting hard at it. "Redwall." He liked the sound of that. His eyes glittered wickedly as he repeated the name and mused. "Redwall... Methinks it would make a fine bearth for many a season, eh?"

Behind him, Aryle crept in, not wanting to desturb him. She touched his shoulder lightly and inquired in her light voice "Where?"
Nerean Fol smiled and let his claw rest as he replied. "Redwall."
Aryle repeated the name, her eyes glittering in anticapation.

"Redwall."


END OF PART THREE!!!!
Subject: One great dibbun Fight


Author:
Cregga & Crocus of II
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Date Posted: 19:56:41 09/19/05 Mon

One black night
When the stars were Bright
Two young dibbuns came out to fight
They ripped & slashed
they yelled & bashed
until across they lawn
they saw a flash.
Lightning! They screamed
and with such a dash
they ran & ran back to
their dormitory
and climbed in their beds of yew
to tell the other dibbuns their great story.
Subject: My first poem


Author:
Cetera, Wicked Wastrels
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Date Posted: 20:53:32 09/16/05 Fri

Badger Lords and Ladies

Stonepaw, Brocktree, Boar, Sunflash the Mace,
Rawnblade wields weapons with excellent grace,
Orlando the Axe and Cregga Rose Eyes,
Blinded, she raised Russano the Wise.

Hightor and Lonna, Melesme and more,
Fufulling the tasks destiny has in store,
The Badger Lords and Ladies of Salamandastron,
Without them, all Mossflower would be gone.
Subject: Poems about Math


Author:
Auburn, II
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Date Posted: 21:55:25 09/11/05 Sun

Here are some poems about math...

Substitution:
Winding through the twisted paths,
trying to avoid the complicated math.
Right in front of me appears,
the dreaded Substitution, my peer.
“I’ve got you now!” he exclaims,
while I am wishing for it to rain.
I take out my trusty pencil and brain,
while Substitution sends a great big Dane.
With the problem in it’s mouth,
it trots towards me and I dream of my house.
I gingerly take the problem in my hands,
and it seems to bind my hands with thick, strong bands.
I vaguely remember the steps,
to perhaps solve this complicated math.
First of all,
you must solve,
one of the equations,
for one of it’s variables.
Next you shall,
substitute this expression,
into the other equation,
and solve for the other variable.
Don’t forget,
the next important step,
where you substitute this value into the revised equation,
and solve.
Now you should have a very important answer.
Last but not least,
everyone knows,
is always check your answer.
These are the steps,
and now I am saved,
from my peer,
the dreaded Substitution with his games.

Linear combinations:
What should you do,
if you have to solve linear systems with linear combinations?

There are a few steps,
that everyone should know,
to perhaps,
beat a special foe.
First of all,
all should know,
is to arrange the equations,
in standard form,
with like terms in the same column.
This is important,
so don’t you forget,
and now we’re ready,
to move on to the next step.
Multiply one,
or both the equations,
by an appropriate number
to obtain new coefficients,
for x or y,
that are opposites.
You add the equations,
and solve for the remaining variable,
but make sure you don’t cause yourself some abrasions.
Substitute the value,
into either one of the original equations,
to solve for the other variable.
Learning this is a special occasion.
But as we all learn,
through the years,
check your work,
or you don’t belong here.

Order of operations;
In my math class one day,
I’m handed a problem that makes no sense.
Aunt Sally I remember straight away,
to help me not be tense.
Ms. Kovich taught me much, I know,
but this I remember till this very day.
Please Excuse My Dear Aunt Sally
Don’t you know always?
Aunt Sally was a troublemaker,
she did really bad as a baker.
Everywhere she went,
trouble followed that could not be prevent.
I would always say,
“Please excuse my dear Aunt Sally,
she’s always in disarray.”
P in please – always do what’s first in parenthesis,
no matter what you think.
E in excuse – exponents are always next,
so don’t you dare miss if you blink.
M in my – multiplication is next.
Aunt Sally don’t drip ink!
D in dear – next up is division.
Aunt Sally, what’s that clink?
A in Aunt – addition is important and therefore is next
and Auntie, would you clean out the sink?
S in Sally – stands for subtraction.
Now I really need a drink.
A special rule all should remember,
M and D’s order can be switched.
But only if division comes before multiplication
from left to right, don’t be bewitched.
Same rule for A and S.
So make sure you don’t forget.
Please Excuse my dear Aunt Sally
or
Parenthesis, exponents, multiplication, division, addition, and subtraction.

Pi:
Hungry was I,
for some pie.
Went to my mom,
who made me a pi.
I looked at my plate,
surprised to see
3.14
spelled with beets.
“What is this?” I cried,
thinking that this was a bribe.
Perhaps to make me do
my math homework
and to eat my vegetables too.
“Pi my dear,” my mother said,
“or 3.14 instead.”
The closer I looked
the more I could see
the words
3.141592654, I could read.
Sadly I ate,
my math lesson up to date,
and thought to myself,
dinner can be educational by itself.
Subject: Poem


Author:
Auburn, II
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Date Posted: 21:52:30 09/11/05 Sun

Nothing’s left for me here,
Nothing left to do.
No more laughter,
No more songs,
No more children,
All because of those bombs.
No more tears,
No more sorrow,
No more fears,
Even gone is my burrow.
What’s left for me
In this gray world?
Where there’s no one else,
No one else but me.
Subject: Wolf Story (continues)


Author:
Auburn
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Date Posted: 21:49:27 09/11/05 Sun

Lionel stared in disbelief at his mentor. “What? You two are actually going to tell me about my parents?”
Aoife sighed and repeated for like the 10th time, “Yes.”
“Who were they? What were their names? What were they like? Did they love me? How did they die?” Lionel asked quickly, question tumbling out of his mouth, one after another.
Shaheen grinned and turned towards Aoife, “This is going to take a while. Good luck.”
Aoife glared at him, “You are going to help me explain it to him.”
“How? I didn’t know Lionel’s parents that well. Actually, I barely knew them at all,” Shaheen replied.
“We’re no going to tell him,” Aoife spat back at him.
“Then how? I thought you were going to … oh no. No...no…no way! Absolutely no!” Shaheen cried out, realizing what Aoife had meant.
“This is the easiest way,” Aoife replied with a glare at Shaheen, daring him to object.
Shaheen looked hesitant and then put up a brave face, “When I said no I meant no!”
“Please? For Lionel?’ Aoife pleaded, knowing Shaheen’s weak spot and using it against him
“Fine,” Shaheen said reluctantly.
Aoife gave a small smile and whispered a long stream of words.
The words, a rippling silver stream, circled the three wolves. Making smaller and smaller circles, the silver stream finally weaved itself into a small pool of silver words, almost like a pond full of silver water. An image appeared slowly in the pool showing a small clearing in the woods. Tall oaks, birches, and yews surrounded the clearing, protecting it. The clearing itself was bare except for a stump near the edge of the clearing, a small badger hole near the stump, and the snow that laid everywhere and covered almost everything. A harsh wind rustled past the trees and into the clearing. The three wolves that stood silently watching the scene could hear it. The picture seemed so real and lifelike that it seemed that if Lionel, Shaheen, or Aoife touched it, they would actually feel something other then air and water.
"where's my mother and father?” Lionel asked, turning his head to give Aoife a confused look. He was puzzled because he could see nothing but the clearing.
“Wait my dear,” was all that Aoife said.
Lionel nodded his head and turned his gaze back to the silver pool and its image.
The silver pool gave a small ripple and two wolves, one carrying a small bundle of fur, burst side by side into the clearing. One was a large gray male with a white chest and four white paws. He had an unusually tufted tail, marking him as a wolfdog or a wolf hybrid. He had dark chestnut eyes the expressed his emotions clearly, courage, belief, anger, love, fear, pain, and pride.
Lionel gasped and turned his head quickly to stare at Aoife. His piercing eyes anguishly looked at Aoife as he asked, “Is that my father?”
“Yes. His name was Ysonne. He was half timberwolf, a quarter Siberian husky, and a quarter arctic wolf. As you can see, his dog side was clearly apparent. His father, your grandfather, was a pureblooded timberwolf, heir to the timberwolf throne. Yvonne’s mother, your grandmother, was half pedigree Siberian husky and half artic wolf. She was royal-blooded and was heir to the Siberian husky throne and the artic wolf throne,” Aoife said gently. However, seeing Lionel’s confused look, she explained, “The arctic wolves and Siberian huskies get along quite well and don’t mind having one hair to both their throne.”
Lionel said nothing but his face showed his awe as he turned his gaze back to the silver pool.
The other wolf in the image was a pretty red-pelted she-wolf. She had vivid green eyes that seemed to stare across space and time to look at Lionel. “My son,” she whispered silently.
“Mother,” Lionel said quietly, testing out the new word.
“Her name was Ariel. She was a full-blooded grey wolf and one of the last full-blooded red wolves. She was heir to the grey wolf throne and the last queen of the red wolf throne,” Shaheen said sadly in his deep voice.
The bundle of fur that Ariel carried in her mouth was a small wolf pup. Carrying the pup gently in her mouth, she set it down on the ground. The pup awoke from its sleep and gazed up at its mother, adoration and puzzlement both evident on his face.
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The pup was oddly familiar to Lionel. Finally, he realized who it was. “It’s me,” he said incredibly.
At that moment, a large crash was heard coming from the woods. Pawsteps, howls, and growls could be heard. A few dark shapes were to be seen slowly weaving their way through the bare trees covered with snow and coming towards the clearing.
“They’re coming,” Ysonne said simply. He turned to Ariel, nuzzled her comfortingly on the shoulders, and then turned to face the direction of the noise.
Ariel nodded her head slowly and nuzzled her pup who was whimpering, “Be careful,” she whispered softly to her mate. Turning, she picked up her pup and headed to the old badger hole.
A few moments later, six wolves burst into the clearing. They were grouped in a pyramid, one wolf in the lead, two wolves behind the lead wolf, and three wolves in the last row.
The one in the lead, an unusual orange-red wolf, growled at the sight of Ysonne. “Get out of my way! We want only the cub.”
“No! I will not Saneth! You will be allowed over there over my dead body!” Ysonne cried, crouching in defense position.
“Ysonne, please. We want only Lionel. We don’t want to hurt you,” a silver wolf in the last row pleaded.
“I will not let my son die in front of my eyes Gareth. Even though you are my best friend, I cannot let my son die and will kill you if I absolutely have to,” Ysonne replied, spitting out the words.
“Then so it will be. We will have to attack you,” Gareth said mournfully, the words escaping his mouth slowly as if they weighed a ton to say.
“This is your last chance,” the Saneth warned with a trace of fear in her voice.
Ysonne refused to say anything but growled out a warning.
Silence and suspense settled in the clearing. All six wolves refused to move or let a sound escape into the still air. Finally, a strong gust of wind blew into the clearing, awakening all the wolves from their stillness.
“Attack!” Saneth yelled out, nodding her head at Ysonne. Her voice held fear, anger, pain, and sadness. However, her face showed no emotion, making her seem emotionless only on the outside.
Some of the wolves hesitated, including Gareth and Saneth. Only two wolves actually trotted towards Ysonne, but they were moving very slow and were clearly hesitant about attacking Ysonne.
Ysonne’s brown eyes looked disapprovingly and sadly at the two wolves approaching him. “What is the world coming to?”
The two wolves, one gray and one red edged closer and closer to Ysonne. Within 5 feet of Ysonne, they both stopped and looked back at Saneth for commands.
Saneth gave a tiny nod, barely perceptible.
The red wolf, her keen eyes seeing the nod, spoke to Ysonne. “I’m sorry, but we must do this. Do forgive us, please.”
Ysonne nodded bleakly, “Of course I will. It’s not your fault that you must follow your orders.”
The gray wolf muttered, “I’m sorry,” and then leaped at Ysonne. The gray wolf seemed to hover in midair as he dove slowly at the spot where Ysonne stood, or used to stand.
Ysonne sidestepped the attack quickly. With a large white paw, he buffeted the gray wolf head over heels gently. The gray wolf rolled through the snow to crash into a large birch. Snow fluttered and fell in bunches from the branches, covering the gray wolf with snow.
The red wolf leaped at Ysonne’s unprotected side as he turned to hit her companion. Her claws scratched Ysonne, leaving a shallow but long cut. Her eyes widened in fear at the sight of the injury she had caused. “I’m so sorry,” she said apologetically.
Ysonne’s brown eyes looked at the red wolf gently, “I’ve had worse injuries.” With a sigh, he lightly rammed into the red wolf, sending her flying into the air. With a small thud, the red wolf landed in a huge bank of snow.
The thud seemed to rouse the other four wolves.
A large timberwolf with tan and white fur loped around Ysonne, trying to attack him from behind. His amber eyes were narrowed, looking at Ysonne as if he were the prey but still showed his fear.
Ysonne started turning around in circles, trying to keep the timberwolf in his line of vision. As he spun around and around again, he finally realized that he could not see the timberwolf anymore. He tried to turn but it was too late.
The timberwolf had leaped into the air, landing on Ysonne’s back. With a growl, he slashed with his claws, leaving deep scratches on Ysonne’s back.
Instead of crying out in pain or anger, Ysonne did an unusual thing. “Do not stand on my grave and weep; I am not there. I do not sleep,” he cried, his deep voice resounding loudly in the clearing. He shook the timberwolf off his back and picked him up with his sharp needle-like teeth. With a snarl, Ysonne threw the timberwolf straight into a tall yew tree.
Crack!
The timberwolf had hit a lower branch of the yew tree. It had made the branch break and it fell to the ground with a thud.
Sides heaving and gasping for breathe, Ysonne continued relentlessly, “I am the thousand winds that blow, I am the diamond glint on snow.” His brown eyes, blank, stared out at the air, as if he was seeing something beyond space and time.
The last wolf, a small black tundra wolf, and Gareth attacked together. Dashing side by side, they approached Ysonne.
Ysonne, eyes glazed, was pretty much automatically defending himself. His thoughts were on other things, like his son and mate. Even though he was pretty much mindless, he somehow knew that his best friend was finally attacking him. “I am the sunlight on the ripened grain. I am the gentle autumn rain,” he cried with sorrow and regret in his voice.
The tundra wolf sprinted at Ysonne’s face, fangs bared. With a sharp claw, he swiped at Ysonne’s eyes.
Ysonne ducked under the flailing paws and gave the small black wolf a deep gash on the left shoulder. “When you awaken in the morning’s hush, I am the swift uplifting rush, of the quite birds in circled flight. I am the soft stars that shine at night,” he shouted as he attacked the black wolf mechanically. The words were filled with emotion and seemed as if they were his mind’s last farewell to all those he loved. It seemed that Ysonne put all his heart and soul into that poem, those words, that his body was defending itself automatically.
Gareth, slow and hesitant, whacked Ysonne softly on the right hind leg. Then, he backed off quickly out of Ysonne’s range in case he decided to attack.
That seemed to wake up Ysonne from his mindless state. His eyes lost their blank look and he stopped his last poem to his mate. Ysonne turned to look at his best friend. “You too?” he asked softly, disbelief and sorrow in his voice.
Gareth did not answer. His golden eyes answered for him. They say that the eyes are the windows to the soul. In this case, Gareth’s eyes showed grief, pain, regret, and guilt.
Ysonne sighed deeply and gave a mournful howl to the moon. His eyes brimmed with tears.
At that moment, Saneth attacked. She leaped at Ysonne, snapping at his left hind leg. A large crack was heard in the clearing as Ysonne’s right leg broke.
Ysonne quickly turned around to retaliate. He swiped at Saneth, leaving a deep and long cut from her right ear to her left cheek. With a snarl, he bit Saneth’s right shoulder, hard. He could feel the fur, muscle, and bone beneath him. With his sharp teeth and strong jaws, he quickly bit down to the bone.
Saneth, suddenly afraid, backed off quickly. She licked her shoulder, trying to stop the flow of blood. “Get him!” she yelled, glaring at Ysonne with her yellow eyes.
Ysonne sat down on the ground, broken leg underneath him. Blood leaked out of the bite marks on his leg, coloring the snow red. He tried vainly to stop the blood gushing out of his wound like a spring. However, it was to no avail. Finally, he gave up and lifted his head, muzzled colored red and pink from his own blood.
All 6 wolves were gathered around Ysonne in a circle. The gray wolf had finally dug his way out of the pile of snow. He stood next to the red wolf who had climbed out of the bank of snow. They stood side by side, their furs matted with snow and ice. The timberwolf stood glaring defiantly at Ysonne, a large bruise starting to showing on his right side and hip. The small black tundra wolf stood weakly on three legs, breathing deeply and giving out small yelps of pain whenever his left foreleg touched the snow covered ground. Gareth stood silently and mournfully at his place in the circle, eyes peering at the ground intently as if it were very interesting. Saneth, on the other hand, stood directly in front of Ysonne, eyes narrowed and growling at the gray wolf in front of her.
As Ysonne slowly turned his head to look at everyone in the circle, he said nothing, knowing that that was his last stand.
The timberwolf attacked first, lunging at Ysonne’s flank. His amber eyes flashed and he snarled ferociously.
Ysonne turned quickly to nip at the timberwolf’s muzzle. His sharp teeth made contact with mostly fur and a bit of muscle.
The timberwolf backed up, a small gash on his face. He shook his head, spraying the nearby snow with blood. With vengeance in his eyes, he attacked again, this time at the Ysonne’s face. With a heavy paw, he clawed at his enemy’s eyes.
Ysonne turned his head, trying to avoid the attack. But he was not quick enough and the timberwolf slashed open a wound right above his eye. He turned quickly, ignoring the pain in his broken right leg and plowed right into the timberwolf. Ysonne watched grimly, blood streaming down his face, as the timberwolf flew through the air to land with a loud crash.
The tundra wolf rushed in at the moment to attack, tail straight out behind him. His ears pointed forward as he rushed at Ysonne. He swiped with his claws, hard.
Ysonne bellowed in pain as the tundra wolf slashed deeply at his stomach. He lashed out blindly, hoping to hit the tundra wolf somewhere. He heard a squeal of pain and knew he had hit his target. But that was soon forgotten when the gray wolf and the red wolf attacked him together, again.
The red wolf, faster and more nimble, darted at Ysonne’s flank. She flitted back and forth, trying to confuse her enemy and attack at the same time. She crouched low, almost belly to the ground and her ears strained forward. However, it was more of a diversion than an attack.
Ysonne fell for the trick, almost. He batted the red wolf aside, sending her rolling into a bank of snow. As he spun around to face his other adversary, he felt claws rip into his side. Ysonne knew that this wound wasn’t like regular ones. This one was life threatening, just like the huge slash in his stomach.
The gray wolf sighed with relief, thinking the battle with over. He did not expect huge jaws to clamp down on his paw as he turned to leave from the look of surprise on his face. Nor did he expect Ysonne to fling him aside roughly instead of killing him.
The timberwolf returned, this time more wary and more respectful of his opponent. He zigzagged back and forth, trying to confuse Ysonne.
Ysonne watched his foe, sharp eyes trained on the moving wolf. After several minutes, he began felling weaker and more tired. His sides heaved as he took deep breathes of air, trying to stop the spinning in his head.
Subject: Wolf Story


Author:
Auburn
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Date Posted: 21:47:15 09/11/05 Sun

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post this on here, but here it is. I'm in II:

The Darkest Hour

Dammar (Dam-mar) – means “destructive one” in Arabian
Fiona (fee + ona) – means “fair, white, beautiful” in Irish
Aoife (ee + fa) – means "beautiful, radiant, joyful” in Irish
Ailene (ay + leen) – means "noble" in Irish
Neala (nee + la) – means "female champion" in Irish
Shaheen – means “white falcon” in Arabian
Lionel – cousin of Lancelot in King Arthur
Saneth – “Child of Fire”
Chapter 1
Dammar stood proudly on the rock, watching his pack carefully. The moon rose directly overhead and he lifted his muzzle. He let forth a great howl that came directly from his heart, or what was left of it. His pack below him followed suit and a chorus of howls echoed through the valley. The wolf pack’s howls echoed across the valley and even penetrated into the forest on the edge of the plain. Dammar stopped suddenly, hearing a new howl among his pack. The other wolves stopped and cowered under his glance, wondering which wolf was going to suffer his wrath. Dammar always punished someone when he had that look on his face, the one that every wolf felt that Dammar was peering into his or her souls and learning every one of their hidden secrets. Dammar’s keen eyes scanned his pack of wolves. Seeing a pretty silver pelt that he had never noticed before, Dammar cried out, “Come out you! There, in the back.”
Fiona heard Dammar call her. The other wolves around her slowly edged away and others peered at the radiant silver she-wolf suspiciously. Slowly, she walked up to the black wolf on the rock and slowly lifted her head to look up.
He stood, tall and proud, and seeing Fiona tremble, he smirked at her fear. Dammar was a coal black wolf with cold, hard black eyes. His eyes, a black void, peered at Fiona, inspecting the silver wolf. Finding nothing out of shape or alarming, he snarled at Fiona.
Fiona tensed up, brain urging her to run before it was too late. She cowered under his glance and peered at the ground and rock in front of her.
Dammar gave a hostile wolf grin, sensing her fear.
Fiona gazed at the green moss on the rock, head lowered in respect. She sneaked a peek at Dammar’s face, shivering from seeing the impressive sight. Legs trembling, she wondered, Will he discover my secret? Silver eyes downcast, she whispered softly instead, “You called?”
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Ailene and Neala stood stiffly, both terrified of the future of the silver she-wolf. A large gray rock near the edge of the forest hid them from prying eyes, but they could see and hear everything that went on around them.
Strangely, the plains and nearby forest was abnormally silent. Not a bird’s cry was to be heard. Only the rustles of leaves and the shriek of the wind broke the still silence of the night. All the animals, from both the plain and the forest, were frozen with terror and suspense.
As Ailene and Neala saw their youngest sister Fiona slowly approach Dammar, they both whispered urgently, their voices breaking through the stillness of the night. Because of their distance, the wolf voices did not carry across the valley plain to the wolf pack.
“Don’t he dare harm her!” Neala growled, fur bristling. Neala was a she-wolf with a grayish-red pelt. Her eyes were steel grayish-blue pieces of ice. She would have been pretty if a scar hadn’t carved across her face from her right ear to her left cheek. It was caused by hunters, human hunters. Neala stared evilly at Dammar and snarled.
“Calm down Neala. It won’t do Fiona any good if we are discovered,” Ailene warned. Ailene was the oldest and the leader of the three wolf sisters. She was a pure white wolf with steel-blue eyes. Her wisdom was known throughout the wolf world. The noblest of the three sisters, but not the prettiest, Ailene was born to lead the pack.

Aoife closed her silver eyes, seeing the battle scenes play before her eyes. “No! I cannot let this happen to my children!” she cried. Red fur with some gray and silver hair from old age bristling, she sprang up to her battle-scarred paws and called out, “Shaheen, bring Lionel here!” Without waiting for a response, the old she-wolf sighed and lay down, knowing she would have to wait a while before Lionel arrived. As the sunlight infiltrated the cave through a small opening above, Aoife slowly slipped off to a dream-ridden sleep. As the past and future of the wolves danced past the back of Aoife’s eyelids, the sun played its rays on the she-wolf’s body, causing it to seem to glow in the sunlight. Silence slowly settled inside and outside the cave as Aoife waited to start the epic quest that lay before her and many that she knew.

Lionel Wolfstar sat on the cliff overlooking the valley. His hazelnut eyes stared longingly at the pack of wolves below him. He was especially focused on a group of wolves his age playing. “How I wish that I could be down there with those other wolves,” he whispered. Hearing soft pawsteps behind him, the gray wolf quickly sprung around to face the other wolf. “Oh, it’s you Shaheen,” Lionel said sadly. He turned his wistful eyes back to the scene below him.
“Aoife is calling for you,” Shaheen said. Shaheen was an old wolf, about Aoife’s age. He was old enough to be Lionel’s father. Shaheen looked sadly at the young wolf before him. I wish Lionel didn’t have to be alone. He doesn’t deserve his life. He should be down there playing with those other wolves, enjoying life instead of training to defeat Dammar, Shaheen thought sadly. Bitterly, he continued, Aoife shouldn’t be just using him as a tool to defeat Dammar. He should be taught about the good of life. Lifting his head to see Lionel staring concernedly at him, Shaheen managed a brief smile and said, “Come along now. You know what’ll happen if we keep Aoife waiting for too long.” Turning quickly, Shaheen looped off to find Aoife, Lionel following closely behind him.
Chapter 2
Dammar examined the lean silver she-wolf in front of him. The moonlight caused her pelt to glow in the darkness, seeming to absorb most of the light from the moon. Her eyes shone in the darkness, glowing spheres that seemed to reflect the light of the moon itself. Her silver eyes peered downwards respectfully. She’s pretty and obedient. I wonder if she is courageous and clever, Dammar thought. Snapping at the wolf before him, he growled, “Of course I called! Are you deaf?” He glared at the she-wolf, daring her to answer back.
Fiona trembled and whispered, head still lowered, “I’m sorry my lord. But I was pretty sure you wanted something and my question was asking you what you wanted,” she said, amazed that her voice wasn’t shaking. Dammar didn’t answer. She heard the restless shifting of the wolves behind her. Heart beating quickly, she closed her eyes, awaiting her doom.

Neala stood shocked at Fiona’s response to Dammar’s anger. “How dare she do that? That foolish foolish wolf,” she thought over and over again in her head. Knowing that the only choices left were to either rescue Fiona and blow their cover or not rescue Fiona and lose a wolf. She knew that whatever Ailene chose, she had to follow. Dreading Ailene’s answer and hoping for the best, Neala closed her eyes, swallowed nervously, and flexed her leg muscles.
“Oh no! What has she done?” Ailene whispered, terrified. She almost knew that Fiona was doomed. “Should we save her or leave her to her doom?” Ailene asked herself. She carefully debated the consequences of her actions. Voice trembling, she turned to Neala and said…

Shaheen trotted as quickly as he could to Aoife’s cave. His old scarred paws thudded into the old dusty and treacherous trail that went up the mountain while he thought, “Should I tell Lionel? He’s old enough to know and he deserves to know how his parents died. But if I tell him, Aoife will certainly be enraged. What should I do?”
Lionel faithfully trotted after Shaheen, glancing back to the wolf pack often. He hardly noticed Shaheen slowing down or the dark entrance to a cave that loomed before them.

Aoife heard the two familiar pawsteps reach the cave entrance. She quickly sprang to her paws and proudly stepped outside the cave. Tail high and eyes blazing with a strange light, she approached Shaheen and Lionel. She barely glanced at Lionel and turned her full attention on Shaheen instead. “It’s time,” she told him.

Lionel stared at his two mentors, puzzlement showing on his face. He had no idea what Aoife and Shaheen were talking about. Nothing, not even anything from the conversations he had “accidentally overheard,” had any relation to what Aoife had just said. Could it be possible that they’re going to tell me about my parents? But he quickly shook off that thought. No matter how many times he asked, Aoife and Shaheen told him nothing about his parents. The only thing he knew was that they were dead, the information gained by spying on Aoife and Shaheen’s conversations. But Lionel had this feeling that maybe, just maybe, today would be the day Aoife and Shaheen finally told him about his parents. Lionel’s heart slowly started to beat faster and he stared expectantly at the two wolves in front of him.
Chapter 3
Dammar smirked at Fiona trembling below him. “You presumed correctly,” he said, voice carrying over the plains. “What is your name?”
Fiona swallowed nervously, waiting for Dammar to answer. When she heard him say that she was correct, she sighed but did not relax completely. He’s bound to ask me something, probably what I wants. Hearing Dammar ask her name, she gave a little grin, glad he wasn’t asking where she came from for she had no idea what to say. “My name is Fiona,” she whispered.

As Ailene was about to say what their plan was, she heard Dammar’s voice. She froze, ears straining to catch Dammar’s words. With a sigh of relief, she turned to Neala and smiled. “It’s time to go. Fiona will be safe,” she whispered.
Neala said nothing but stared determinedly at Fiona. Turning abruptly, Neala slowly headed into the forest. She did not look back and trotted quickly and quietly back to her own wolf pack.
Ailene followed her sister. On the edge of the forest, she turned to look briefly back at Fiona, Dammar, and Dammar’s wolf pack. She sighed and whispered softly, “Good-bye sister and good luck. I promise I’ll be back for you and be nearby when there is trouble.” Then she too turned and trotted into the forest.
Silence settled into the forest as the two wolf sisters trotted silently towards home. Any wolf that would have seen them would have also seen that they left no signs that they were ever there and no scent. However, the only ones who did see them were the occupants of the forest, the birds, the tress, the insects, and the other animals, but no wolves.
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Aoife was nervous, a weird thing for she was usually indifferent, no matter what the situation. She stared at Lionel, wondering if he knew that what was soon to be said could change his life. Seeing Lionel looking puzzled, she relaxed slightly. “We’re going to tell you about your parents,” she stated simply.
Subject: A Story P.2


Author:
Hertin
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Date Posted: 16:49:01 09/11/05 Sun

Chapter 2

It was late the next morning. Hertin’s mother had just woken up, and was headed out to the kitchen to start breakfast. She entered the front room, and was surprised to find a short note from Hertin sitting on the kitchen table. “Well what could this be?” She said to herself. The note read:

Mother-
I have gone to the home of a new friend of mine, an otter by the name of Greyth. I will be home soon.
- Hertin

“Well, as long as he is a nice creature with a good family.” She said.

It was not what Hertin’s mother thought they would be doing. Hertin parried every thrust with her stick that she had against Greyth’s. “Good, good, and step to the left, parry, and Thrust! Well, Hertin, that’s all I know. The student has surpassed the teacher.” Greyth smiled as sweat trickled down his face.
Hertin was also breathing hard, but she had enjoyed the duel immensely. “Come on, just one more round, please?” She said to Greyth, who had fallen back into the snow.
“No way! You will kill me, please!” Greyth pleaded.
Hertin smiled and began singing a comic ditty that she had heard as a child.

Oh, the otter was a slinger,
But the hare didn’t care.
She caught him in combat with flair,
Oh, the otter tried his hardest,
But the hare was everywhere,
Next time instead of a hare,
Please fight elsewhere.

Kilarta laughed. “Hey, Hertin where did you learn that?”
Hertin smiled, a far away look in her eyes. “My dad taught it to me before he went to the Great Ten Season war. I was barely old enough to repeat the song, but I learned it, and will probably never forget it. It is very important to me. That was the last thing he ever said to me. He sang it to keep me form crying as he left. He was such a proud, proper creature in public, but in our home, he was as foolish as Terlik.” Hertin sighed. “I miss him. Somewhere over the sea, somewhere out there, I know he’s there. I can feel that he is still alive.” She sniffed. I’m coming father. Please wait for me. She walked back to the house, with Kilarta and Greyth following in her wake. As she reached home, she turned to Greyth. “Thank you, Greyth. You are a great teacher. I may never see you again, as I am leaving tomorrow morning for the army. I think you make your parents proud. Kilarta, I know you have a strong mind, and I want you to use it for the good of our country. Please don’t do anything foolish.” She turned to go inside. She looked at the creatures she had come to love over her shoulder. Please let them be safe.







Chapter 3

The next morning Hertin got up as the city clock chimed 5 o clock. She stopped at the table, and packed a bag of some of her mother’s biscuits, and a flagon of her mother’s best apple raspberry tea. She stepped out the door, and into the enveloping darkness, not to be seen in that region for years to come.
Subject: A story


Author:
Hertin
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Date Posted: 02:30:37 09/10/05 Sat

Chapter 1

Hertin awoke with a start. She let her eyes wander about the silent room. It was not fancy; it had plain green walls, and a wood roof, but she had grown to love it. She snuggled into her worn out sheets. She knew she would have to get up soon, but she wasn’t sure when.
The sun was not a warm, kind thing on this day; it mocked the hopes of every poor animal living in Paronal. Hertin watched the dust motes float around the room for a moment, and then she let her eyes close. I ought to get up soon she thought. Might as well get up now, better that than having Threni wake me. She climbed out of her warm bed into the chilling air of the room around her. She shivered, and walked to the wardrobe that she and her younger sister Threni shared. She stepped out of her shabby wool nightdress and into the more practical short dress that reached half way down her calves. She sighed. This is going to be me for the rest of my life. I wish I had something better.
She wandered into the kitchen. Her mother, though creased with age, was a strong diligent creature, who was always up by dawn. Hertin smiled fondly at her mother. She had a good heart, and was always ready to stand up for her rights, but she was getting on. “Here, mother, let me get that for you.” Hertin said as the crouched to get a spoon that had slid under the stove. “There you go,” she said as the handed her mother the spoon.
“Oh, thank you, dear,” her mother said. She plucked the spoon from Hertin’s paw and tapped it against her own paw. She seemed strangely preoccupied.
“Mama, is everything alright?” Hertin asked, curiosity playing in her eyes.
Her mother smoothed the wrinkles in her pinafore. “Yes darling, everything is fine.” She said. “Will you go out and get some more celery Hertin? We are running low.” Her mother asked her. Hertin could tell she wanted her out of the house, and pulled her bonnet over her ears.
“Alright, Mama, I’ll be back soon.” She said as her mother dropped a silver coin into her paw. She stuffed the coin into her bonnet. She walked to the door, knowing that there would be an icy wind that would sweep through the house the second she opened the door. Hertin stepped into the bustling streets of Paronal.
Hertin walked for about five minutes, nodding and smiling at people she knew, and looking down respectfully as merchants and others passed. She stopped at the entrance to an alley, and stepped inside. It was dimly lit, but Hertin could see that the market was no place for the faint hearted. The vendors were mostly weasels and rats, with small, shifty eyes, looking for someone to swindle.
Hertin knew where she was going, straight to the other end of the alley, near the wall that distinguished the alley from the more respectable street. She stopped at a simple spice and vegetable stand with no advertising or adornment. She saw the large ears and the long tail resting on the counter. “Excuse me, Mr. Theegle.” She said quietly.
The ears shot up in alarm. A short, graying harvest mouse with an extremely long tail stuck his head above the counter. His face creased into a smile. “Ah Hertin. It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. How is your family? Is your mother well?” He asked.
Hertin smiled weakly. “Oh, they are not bad, Mr. Theegle. How is your wife?” She asked, really interested. Mrs. Theegle had cared for Hertin as a small leveret, and Hertin knew her well.
“Oh, you know the wife. She is as spry as a willow branch, and could still put you over her knee, if she had a mind to. Not that you ever need that.” He laughed. Hertin smiled. “But my guess is you didn’t come through the streets of Paronal to talk about family, did you?” the harvest mouse asked. “What can I get you?”
“Oh, just some celery.” Hertin said. “And by any chance, did my mother tell you anything that she might be worried about?” Hertin asked.
“Not that I know of.” Mr. Theegle said. “Sorry.” He placed the celery on the table. “Enjoy the celery!” He called as Hertin walked away.
She walked back to her house, hoping that this puzzle would become unraveled soon. She opened the door, Surprised to see her mother looking up at the door as she entered. “Mama, aren’t you supposed to be at the Fradile’s home, watching their little molebabe?” Hertin asked.
“Oh, I got the day off. I’m sorry Hertin, I was expecting someone else.” Her mother looked worried.
“Mama, who were you expecting? Were you hoping that they would be gone when I got home?” Hertin asked. “And does this have anything to do with the fact that you were a nervous wreck this morning?” Hertin inquired.
“Yes, yes, all of those! Darling, your brother has been drafted into the Paronal Royal army, and I sent for the sergeant, to tell him that Terlik isn’t fit to be in the army. There’s his leg, and his eyes have always been bad...”
“Mama, Terlik’s been drafted? How could you let that happen? You told me you would stop the government from finding Terlik.” Hertin declared. She was shrill with indignation. “Oh, that King of ours. I wish I could give him a piece of my mind.” She said.
“Don’t talk like that dear, the King’s spies are everywhere.” Her mother said. She looked around the room as if they were being watched.
It was common knowledge that King Gretin and his Goodwife Queen Tranillia were said for spying on their subjects. They were a pair of vain beasts, and everyone knew that they were both against women’s rights. Even Queen Tranillia thought, “A woman’s place is in the house. Making food, repairing clothing and such.” They were both pompous old dormice, who had hired guards to enforce their laws.
Terlik is not fit to go into the army Hertin thought. I have to do something! However, what can I do? I’m a lowly female hare. She said to herself. She bit her lip.
“Hertin, Kilarta is here to see you!” Her mother called form the front door. Finally, someone to talk too! Hertin said to herself.
Kilarta was a milky brown fox of about Hertin’s age. She was a strong creature, with a mind of her own. She hated everything about the monarchy, and she didn’t hide it at all.
Hertin’s mother pushed them out the door. “You two have fun, and don’t go to the far side of Paronal!” She warned. “Badbeasts live there!” She yelled after them.
Hertin turned to her friend. “Are you ever going to tell my mother that you do live on the far side?” Hertin asked.
Kilarta shook her head. “Nah, she has the wrong idea of the far side anyway. She wouldn’t understand that only creatures with good reputations could live on this side. Foxes, weasels, ferrets, rats, everything that has the reputation of being evil is forced to live on the far side. All thanks to the king.” She spat out the last sentence with contempt.
“Cheer up. Come on, I’ll buy you a sugar cube.” She said. She pulled a faded silver coin from her cloak pocket.
“Wow, Hertin, where did you get that?” Kilarta exclaimed.
Hertin smiled. “I got it for watching the Fradile’s little molebabe.” She said. “He’s so cute, so innocent, and he comes from a great family, too. Happy, hardworking, and well, wealthy. He will have a good life.” Hertin said ruefully. “Come on, I’ll race you to the candy stand!” she said as she looked over her shoulder at Kilarta.
She was out of breath by the time she got to the stand. Kilarta arrived alongside her. “What can I get for you two ladies?” A short otter asked form behind the counter.
“Two sugar cubes, please.” Hertin said. “Is one silver coin enough?”
“Yes, yes, one silver coin is fine. Here you go!” He said cheerfully.
“Thank you.” Kilarta said. She smiled. Kilarta had beautiful teeth, but she did not smile much anymore.
The otter, whose name was Greyth immediately liked the two girls. He was about their age, maybe a little older. “Hey” he called to the girls, who had just turned away. “The shop closes in a couple of minutes. Can I meet you somewhere?” he asked.
Hertin smiled. “Sure. How about the old church?” The old church was a run down old building that was replaced years before by the King.
“Sure, I will see you there.” Greyth said happily.
A few minutes later, Greyth appeared at the old church. He sat down to wait for the girls, who he had figured would already be there. All of a sudden, two pairs of hands grabbed him and heaved him into the church. “What are you doing? No one is supposed to be in here! What were you thinking?” he asked.
Kilarta shrugged. “This is where we come when we go out together.” She said simply.
Greyth looked around. A part of the altar had been covered with some old strips of wood and was dry. He looked up. He could see the grey evening sky from where he sat. There were still a few pews, but they were termite ridden and mostly rotten. One pew stood under the makeshift awning, and it was still in relatively good condition. Under the awning, he saw some small trinkets that the two girls had picked up around the town. He was in awe of how well they kept up their space.
“Welcome to the real old church” Hertin said as Greyth came under the awning. “We peddle to earn extra money and to buy more trinkets to peddle.” She said as Greyth examined the pile of objects in the center of the room.
“Wow. You two must do a pretty good business to get all of these trinkets.” he said.
“Yeah, we don’t do too bad. Sometimes it is worse than others, but you have to take the good with the bad.” Kilarta said simply.
“So. The reason I brought you to the old church was not to show all of our trinkets. I need help with something.” Hertin said. “Terlik has been drafted, and he is not fit to go into the army. I need to do something, but what can I do? I’m a poor working class hare.” She said.
“Go instead.” Kilarta said. “Disguise yourself, and rise through the ranks as Terlik. I know you are tough, and I think you could be just what this country ordered.” She smiled. Her eyes were like ice. “Maybe then the royal family will respect the people more.”
Greyth nodded. “If anything, that would be best. I don’t know much about you, but I can tell you’re hiding a warrior. I have a short blade that has run in my family for generations. I could show you how to use it. I have a feeling that you will change Paronal forever.”






Chapter 2

It was late the next morning. Hertin’s mother had just woken up, and was headed out to the kitchen to start breakfast. She entered the front room, and was surprised to find a short note from Hertin sitting on the kitchen table.
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 2: A Welcome Arrival


Author:
Muffle D, Poppinjay, and LM of DD
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Date Posted: 17:44:37 09/09/05 Fri

Extract from the recordings of Sister Clearily, Recorder and Gatehouse Keeper of Redwall Abbey...

" 'Tis a warm summer day, yet the odd breeze betrey the coming autumn. Brooksong says, with a usual whoop, that she will be glad when the winter comes. I know that we all shall look forward to the cooler weather, especially because of the swealtering heat! Friar Iverleas has just anounced that it's tea time, so I must pause just long enough to say that I feel that something out of the ordanairy is going to happen today, mayhap even before the Nameday tomorrow. Well, toodloo and all that!"

Sister Clearily glanced up from her writings. She was a small harvest mouse, clad in a blue gown and a small cap topping her furry head. A mouse in her middle seasons, Clearily was also a member of the Council, Recorder, assistent cook, Gatehouse keeper, and assistent Infermary keeper. She ajusted her small glasses and peared out the open Gatehouse door.
"Young Nettlebriar! Get your spikes away from that pond, young lady!"
The little dibbun hedgehog looked back and winked cheekily at Clearily. "Willa you gimme a can'ied chesknutter?"
The Sister sighed and blew a stray hair away from her face. "Yes, if you beat me to afternoon tea!" Nettlebriar took off for the wallsteps, where the tea was layed out.
"Beatcher to da table, Sissy Cear'y!"
Clearily shook her head and smiled as she made her way out of the Gatehouse, careful not to disturb the dust. Suddenly she hitched up her skirts and, with speed that belied one of her status, scampered nimbly to the wallsteps, causing much hilarity among the Dibbuns and beating the startled Nettlebriar to the table.
"Whooohahahaha! I say, Sister, you certinly showed that liddle 'un! Whoohahahaha!" A otterwife about the same age as Clearily wandered up with her plate piled high with scones and mint tea. Brooksong, or Brooky as she was known to her friends, balenced her's and Clearily's trays as the two friends made their way to the orcherd.
Sister Clearily smiled. "Aye, but one more caper like that and I might caper out, Brooky!" A loud knock on the main gates interuppted her. They both looked at each other as a haremaid called Kersey said in a puzzled voice.
"I say, wot! Who's at the door?"


Muffle banged fruitlessly at the tall wooden gates. Rosestripe sighed. "Hear, let me 'ave a try, Muff. The rest of you, start singing!" Whilst the strong badgermaid pounded on the door, the squirrels, the hares, and the otter broke out in song, harmanizing as they went.

"Oh the strollers life is plain for me!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!
We sing, we charm, we play for thee!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!

While some are rough, and some are naughty,
We charmin' ladies are none to haughtyyyy!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!

We've come tae y'door, to sing for
A deli-isous-yummy-riffic lots a scoff!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!

Muffy, Lady, Haze an' Rosy,
Are joined by Star, and Rei,
Not t'mention May and Poppy!
An' these fair maids will make yer day!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum!
Dum De Doo La Hey Hey Hum Hum Hum!"

The gates slowly swung open. Muffle suddenly found herself engulfed in a tight hug by Brooky. Muffle grinned. "Hi, Mum! Ah'm back from a likke stroll 'round th' Highlands wi' Nuncle Doogy!"
Subject: The Day Nerean Fol Came to Redwall. Part 1: The Strolling Players.


Author:
Muffle Diddlepaw, Poppinjay, and Lady Moss of DD
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Date Posted: 22:01:58 09/07/05 Wed

A story. (A Few Notes: In all, the Strolling Charmin' Players number 8. LM, Muffle, Poppy, Reila, Rosestripe, Starmist, Maybelle, and Hazel. You'll learn more about them later. All except Muffle -who brandishes a Gullwhacker- have bow'n'arrows of the approprite color. They all have a tunic and matching headband. And they are all the same age, youth. The haremaids are all sisters, as is the squirrelmaids. Oh, yeah, only LM, Poppy, and Muffle are real. The others are just wishful thinking on my part, LOL!)


A young Highlander ottermaid looked up at the sky from her perch on the back seat of a cart. It was a players cart, with a hooded top of assorted colors, and room enough for a large party. There was also a bar for pulling. The ottermaid thought aloud, "What a bonny day!"

A badgermaid of like seasons, wearing a light yellow tunic and headband, turned her huge striped muzzle in the direction of the otter and winked. "Aye, Muffle, but what use is a bright day when we've nought to eat?"

Muffle disagreed. "Nay, Rosestripe, we've- er, hold on a second." The ottermaid clad in a pink tunic and headband dived into the swaying cart and, after a moment, cried triumphently. "Aha! We've six apples, two scones as hard as rocks, and a few shriveled herbs. Maybelle, can ye whip up something wi' these?"

The haremaid whom she had spoken to nodded. Maybelle had on a light green tunic and headband, and a pack slung across her back, next to her quiver of matching green arrows. "Aye, a good stew, if Ah add a few of the berries that grow around 'ere."

"Scoff?" A aqua-dressed haremaid popped out of the cart. "Did somebeast mention scoff, wot?" Poppinjay, or Poppy as she was known to her friends, eagerly dived at a blueberry bush. Stuffing blueberries into her mouth, Poppy remarked airily. "Delicious scoff, wot? 'Course, we'll 'ave better fodder once we get to Redwall."

"Aye," A red-clad haremaid beside her agreed. "An' we'll put on an extry special show for 'em, wot?" Reila indicated the banner flying above the cart. "The Strolling, Charmin' Players!" It read.

"Yah, we'll put on a good show for 'em, but first things first, practice! LM, 'ave you an' Hazel found a place tae do so?" Inquired Muffle.

Two squirrelmaids dropped down from the trees to land beside a startled Muffle. Lady Moss, LM for short, was completely white except for her bushy silver tail. Tied around her head and slightly over her large purple eyes was a strip of purple cloth which matched the tunic she was wearing.

Her companion and sister, Hazel Browntail Naedrey, was a small hazel squirrel, and was clad in a light brown. She nodded excitedly as she chattered. "Yeah! It's a beutiful spot, with a nice lil' stream t'the left, and good oak trees t'the right! Oh, 'tis a perfect clearin' right enough!"

She was cut off by Muffle. "Okay, we'll 'ave tae judge for ourselves afore we kin agree wi' ye, Hazel. Weel you two," Muffle grined and said in her heavily Highlander accented voice, "Ah'm athinkin' that ye two ought tae lead us thae!"


After Rosestripe had pulled the cart to the designated spot, they all stood there admiring it until a haremaid in blue called Starmist poked her head out of the cart. "Well? Are you three just gonna stan' there gawpin', or are you gonna 'elp a poor 'are get these bally preformin' things set up?"
It was a lovely place, exactly as Hazel had described, but they resignedly tore their eyes from it and helped set up the needed equitment whilst Maybelle made a soup. The hares found it difacult to consontrate with food about, and Rosestripe at last said that she would do it herself when Poppy accadentily dropped a heavy wooden pole on Muffle's footpaw. There was much howling from the ottermaid before she leaped up and chased the unfortunete hare around the camp.

Maybelle grined. "C'mon, troupe! I've a splendifferes suppa ready, an' if y'all aren't hungery, I s'pose I could scoff it-" No sooner had she started to speak then they had grabbed their bowls and devoured the soup.

After the meal, Muffle glanced at the darkening sky. "There's nae enough light tae practice now, sae let's do it straight after breakfist, aye?" The suggestion was heartily agreed, and the Players snuggled down around a smoldering fire, sleeping, not knowing what suprises the next day would bring.


END OF PART ONE. Please read the next bit when it comes out! Thank you!!
Subject: 'Nother poem


Author:
Lavee Nightswift, CC
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Date Posted: 02:38:02 09/06/05 Tue

Will always I travel
'Neath a star-ridden sky?
Will poems unravel,
Ne'er again to ask why?
Will sunflowers blossom
On the side of a stream,
Unmoving, unspeaking,
Still lost in a dream?
Will I go to the mountains
To see the sun rise,
And return just in time
To watch whilst the sun dies?

The light always lingers
On the face of the sea,
And lasts until dawning
For keen eyes to see.
And the light of the moon,
Still caught in the trees,
Shines o'er the wavelets
And fore'er will be.

And will I go to the mountains
To see the sun rise,
And return just in time
To watch whilst the sun dies?
Subject: The Rat Revolution, Chapter One


Author:
Pear, Spring Bud, and Zyrius of LL
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Date Posted: 02:15:44 09/04/05 Sun

"Dear Journal,
Today was dark and stormy. The place known as, The New World, is on the edge of a war. But even now Papa says that, what he calls, A Miracle will always be better than the tyranical streets of England, and better than the poverty of Ireland. Alas, I must go. I can hear Mama calling me to help her with baby Micheal."
The young Berkshire rat places her quil down, and hurries into the adjoining room. Her mother, a white rat with brown eyes, handed her the tiny rat cub. He giggled, and Terra tickes the end of his nose. Micheal was just getting fuzz, and it looks like he was to be an albino.
Their mama, called Mary by the grown beasts, grabs a small bottle, and fills it with the warm and nurishing pale milk. She takes him into her loving arms, and Micheal's tiny hands reach for the bottle. Mary lets him grab it, pull it to his mouth, and stinkles.
"Terra dear, would you go get some cheese? The nice pale one with hazlenuts if you can. I left a coin by your cloak."
Terra quickly swings her black cloak, and waves to her mom, as she picks up the coin. She opens the door, and sees the many animals rushing around on the streets. She gets to the edge, and climbs into the Trolly.
"Market please!" They soon reach it, and she hurries to the place where they usually got their food. It was an alley, and there was an unpleasent smell. She bites her lip, and continues boldly foreward. She stops infront of a stall, and takes out the coin from under her cloak.
"How much for the pale cheese with hazlenuts?" She said it abrutly, for she was used to bartering with the street vendors.
"Wha would ya want to know, no body can afford it!"
"I don't want all of it, but how much can I get with the coin?"
"Eh, ah'll give ya, a sixth of the wheel!"
"How about a fith?"
"NO!"
Terra simply turns, and the rat fidgets a little, before calling out to her, " Fine than, I'll give ya a fith."
She smiles, and resumes her solemn position before turning, and handing him the coin. He mumbles about ratlings, and scrawls on a piece of paper. He hands it to her, and she grabs a small wagon, and wheels it over to the shed. She hands the ferret there the paper, and her brings out the cheese. She puts it one the wagon, and starts wheeling it home.
She smiles, and she says to herself, "Now little Micheal will have some nice cheese cream!"
Just as she finishes say that, she turns the cornor, and she is run into! She falls, and blinks at the rat who ran her over. It was a rat, and he is wearing a brown tunic with black pants. His frightened blue eyes show that he is not bad, just, just, just what? He mouths the word, 'sorry', and jumps up and runs away.
Soon after a weasel follows, scowling and talking to himself, "When I get my paws on tha' deserter of a rat Tony, I'll tear him apart!"
Terra finally understands, and she realises that Tony was probally a deserter, and he either ran away from work, or from being enlisted in the King's Army.
She thinks out load, "Why can't they just get recruits that are willing from England?"
She continues to the trolly, and is lost in her thoughts. She automatically gets off, and puts the cheese on the rough wooden table, and plops into the chair still thinking.
She brightens up and smiles now, "A-ha!"
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