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Date Posted: Sunday, October 01, 09:09:22am
Author: Mary
Subject: Nice writing Jane Ann...(r)
In reply to: Jane Ann 's message, "It's not from any LFN scene. (r)" on Sunday, October 01, 01:07:40am

You did a great job of keeping this non-specific, yet still relaying to the user just how painful the scene was for the man (operative); at the same time you just knew that the woman in the scene was evaluating every move, every breath that the man took - just what we would expect from Section. Great use of the weekly theme in an abstract setting.

Mary

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  • Oh, that's excellent! (r) -- JayBee, Sunday, October 01, 09:17:24am

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