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Date Posted: Sat, Nov 15 2003, 15:03:00
Author: King Krypton
Subject: Sadly, no
In reply to: Heywood 's message, "Do we get to read what you have?" on Sat, Nov 15 2003, 0:42:49

I got so fed up with it that I just deleted the thing. Besides, I don't like posting up fics or MSTies that aren't complete. I tried to shake things up by scattering wisecracks at random throughout the piece, but in the end all I wound up with was huge chunks of text with the occasional line of snarkiness showing up. Even with the first encounter between Celebrian and the Goblin King, that was the case. I was leaving sections of text unaltered, thinking I'd get to them later...and ultimately realizing that I just don't have the stomach for stuff like this. There's not much humor value in repeated scenes of orgasmic fluid spraying out in fire hose quantities or in a woman repeatedly debasing herself over and over again, even fooling around with animals. I mean, it's one thing when a couple's role-playing. They're just goofing off, and that's not a problem for me. But the stuff in this fic...I couldn't take it anymore. So I just deleted it and gave up.

There were only a few lines in the MST that I thought were any good. Here's one of those few:

"To her [Celebrian's] horror, her nipples stood

HALDIR: And started doing jumping jacks!"

I did get˙

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  • Sadly, no -- King Krypton, Sat, Nov 15 2003, 15:04:23

  • Sorry for the double post. The stupid MB was acting up on me. -- King Krypton, Sun, Nov 16 2003, 0:35:17



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