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Date Posted: 19:49:42 11/30/03 Sun
Author: Doyle
Author Host/IP: wopr-p-144-134-173-37.prem.tmns.net.au / 144.134.173.37
Subject: Okies, I just finished reading it, sil...
In reply to: silver 's message, "Speaking of things to read...inside this post anyone interested can find the prologue to my new Angel fic, "The Fallen". Anyone wanna beta?" on 14:24:34 11/30/03 Sun

When I'd done my first reply to your post above, I'd only caught a glimpse of the start and noticed "Makale Grant" which I thought was neat (that you were using him in ya fic). After posting, I then checked my e-mail and saw your reply (talking about the character we both "know and love"). So then I came back to read your prologue.

Very nice starting. I know it hooked me pretty much instantly (what with Grant being in it and us finding out what he was like in his rookie days). For someone who maintains they don't like ATS anymore, you always seem to be able to write good Angel fic. True, I've only ever read *one* Angel fic from you ('Impact') but that alone showed that you grasped all the character's personalities and the prologue for this one shows you get the type of atmosphere that Angel (used) to have. I just watched a S1 ep yesterday ('Somnambulist'). It was definitely a different show back then. Anywho, as usual, I'll be waiting with baited (fishy) breath for the next part.

Oh, and the only spelling mistake I found was at the beginning, instead of Officer Makale Grant you had "Office Makale Grant". That's the only one I could find.

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Replies:

heh -- silver, 20:36:57 11/30/03 Sun
- I'm glad you asked about that... -- Doyle, 21:21:47 11/30/03 Sun
  - Brack, Dru, Sophie & SB... -- silver, 21:34:24 11/30/03 Sun
    - ooh time zone issues... -- Drusilla, 01:22:34 12/01/03 Mon
      - Where in Canada? (NT) -- Bracken, 03:23:38 12/02/03 Tue
        Re: Where in Canada? -- Drusilla, 20:19:04 12/02/03 Tue
        awwww. that's so cute. -- silver, 00:42:07 12/03/03 Wed
        What's considered cold where you are? (NT) -- Doyle, 02:06:46 12/03/03 Wed
        well.....my conversion sucks, -- silver, 04:39:33 12/04/03 Thu
        So does mine... -- Doyle, 18:34:11 12/04/03 Thu
        Re: awwww. that's so cute. -- b, 13:46:09 12/03/03 Wed

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