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Date Posted: 15:55:53 06/17/01 Sun
Author: Peggy to Moonchild
Author Host/IP: 206.97.65.246
Subject: Re: "Blue Love Poem"
In reply to: Moonchild 's message, "Re: "Blue Love Poem"" on 14:44:01 06/17/01 Sun

thanks Karen ,,,,i wrote this about 3 years ago i guess
and tried to make into a sonnet with beki
about one year ago
but i only want to keep this one which is almost
the original one - or close to it
anyway now i have "black rose sonnet"
so this work can be a blue love "poem" not a sonnet,,,,
beki helped me with it but after she got done it
felt like it was not my poem or sonnet any longer
and mcmillen said it was close to a sonnet but fell short
on a few things and then beki and i just let it go.
when mcmillen helped me- with black rose sonnet- he only made sure it was a sonnet
he did not re work it or re word it, but i did ask beki to
to help me
thinking it would be a sonnet but it never was a sonnet so
i want to make this a "poem" and only that and use as close to the
original one as i can, this being very close to the original,,, and just call it mine alone,,,
but i am thankful for beki 's help and will keep that
poem, she and i worked on in a archives page someplace
but anyway thanks:)

ps the very first one i wrote of this i have no idea
where i store it in my email if i can find it I will
post the first very first original one too

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