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Date Posted: 18:29:06 06/22/01 Fri
Author: Peggy To Gabriella
Author Host/IP: 206.97.65.37
Subject: Sonnet[s]
In reply to: Gabriella 's message, "Re: Black Rose Sonnet" on 16:22:36 06/22/01 Fri

i don't know about that,, thanks tho
but i had help with this one, this black rose sonnet prof. mcmillin
i mean i wrote it and sent him the 14 lines
but i had no idea if i had done it right,,,i just knew
the rules
and like i told before he would tell me how
many lines were a go and a no go,,,i sent it to jahneene
too so she could she how i was coming along with it,,,and,,,,
mcmillen
did not, would not do it for me, he made me do it until he said
it was ok, when i got down to the last two lines
he did help me pick like that last 2 words i needed
to make it a sonnet
i was getting tried and hateful and he could tell
by having me as a creative writing student
i was about to stop and give up
so he gave me the two last words to make it a real
sonnet and well i am happy with it,,, but i don't feel
the need to do another one,, this is my last sonnet
or i think so anyway ,,,,unless i go sonnet mad ,,,,
but i am glad i have one sonnet, when i got this black
rose sonnet done
i was high as a kite for about 7 days then i came
back down to earth and well i think i made way too much of it
in my mind like i always do lol i am bad at doing that
thanks again :)
ps and you write very very good Gabriella
if not for Mcmillen's help i would not have this one
either .

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