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Date Posted: 11:43:54 07/31/10 Sat
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debikm
Subject: Love this scene...
In reply to: Page 's message, "Sometimes the getting there is almost as nice as the actual thing >>>>" on 01:04:22 07/31/10 Sat

From the moemnt typo she'd seen the
>look on his face when he opened Maureen's gift

With that taken care of...oh my God... I love the breathless anticipation, the intensity of their feelings, despite the fact that Adam is so close to both of them and neither one of them wants to hurt him. I can feel their passion for one another, that feeling of wanting to explode with the strength of need. Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!

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Page, 20:49:15 08/03/10 Tue

> From the moemnt typo she'd seen the
>>look on his face when he opened Maureen's gift

Evidently "moemnt" is a word. MSWord thinks so, anyway, because it didn't flag it. *G* Glad you caught it!
>
>With that taken care of...oh my God... I love the
>breathless anticipation, the intensity of their
>feelings, despite the fact that Adam is so close to
>both of them and neither one of them wants to hurt
>him. I can feel their passion for one another, that
>feeling of wanting to explode with the strength of
>need. Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!

Oh, Debi, that's exactly the kind of reaction I was hoping this excerpt would get! (((Hugs))) It's Katie's moment (spelled right! *G*) of surrender, and I needed it to be powerful. Thank you so much!!

Last edited by author: Tue August 03, 2010 20:49:50 Edited 1 time.
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