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Date Posted: 11:35:34 08/01/10 Sun
Author: Page2
Subject: Re: Sometimes the getting there is almost as nice as the actual thing >>>>
In reply to: Page 's message, "Sometimes the getting there is almost as nice as the actual thing >>>>" on 01:04:22 07/31/10 Sat

From the moemnt TYPO she'd seen the look on his...

Other than the typo above, I loved it. The build-up for their passion is all in there and you almost can't wait for it to happen. Then you have Adam watching... I feel for the guy, I do.

Great job Juli!

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Page, 20:54:51 08/03/10 Tue

> From the moemnt TYPO she'd seen the look on
>his...
>
Never trust MSWord's spellcheck. Always trust the members of the Lit Forum!

>Other than the typo above, I loved it. The build-up
>for their passion is all in there and you almost can't
>wait for it to happen. Then you have Adam
>watching... I feel for the guy, I do.

I'm so chuffed you like it! Especially that you almost can't wait for it to happen - that's what I was aiming for. (((Hugs))) And I'm glad you feel for Adam. Even though Katie was trying to do the right thing by waiting until that first show was over to break up with him, and although he did bring a lot of it on himself by being so stubborn, Adam still got a raw deal.
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>Great job Juli!

Thanks, Steph!

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