Date Posted:14:23:03 08/01/10 Sun Author:debikm Subject: Niiccceee...! In reply to:
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's message, "Wanna a Whole Lotta Love...>>>" on 11:29:23 08/01/10 Sun
I like how you've bracketed the past within the present, showing Airana and Tienan in contrsast to Arianwen and Tarrant. Very sensuous and magical, just as it should be!
And if Aiden didn't think they were going to remember something like that, then he needs his head examined! (I'll do it.)
I love Ari's thoughts and feelings about what happened, and the way she's mesmerized by the way Tarrant's body reacts to her touch. I like the way she experiments with differnt ways of touching him, just to see what he'll do.
And poor Tarrant - knowing it shouldn't have happened, wasn't supposed to happen, knowing there will probably be hell to pay, but unable to stop it from happening again.
debikm