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Date Posted: 21:24:57 08/03/10 Tue
Author: Page
Subject: Way, way down inside >>>>
In reply to: Page2 's message, "Wanna a Whole Lotta Love...>>>" on 11:29:23 08/01/10 Sun

And if Aiden didn't think they were going to remember something like that, then he needs his head examined! (I'll do it.)

I love Ari's thoughts and feelings about what happened, and the way she's mesmerized by the way Tarrant's body reacts to her touch. I like the way she experiments with differnt ways of touching him, just to see what he'll do.

And poor Tarrant - knowing it shouldn't have happened, wasn't supposed to happen, knowing there will probably be hell to pay, but unable to stop it from happening again.

Lovely scene, from beginning to end!

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[> [> Well now, this was some kind of wonderful >>> -- Myxtress, 15:54:04 08/09/10 Mon

Very magical.

You've done a great job in capturing the beauty of the moment while at the same time foreshadowing that the act will not be without consequences.

Loved it!

Hugs

Esther

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