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Date Posted: 17:58:43 10/15/11 Sat
Author: Lady Morilka
Subject: Ahhh, so someone is still awake here :) (I was on vaccation the last week ;))
In reply to: susiej 's message, "Yikes- its been so long, i can't remember my password but hello! and iinside>>>>" on 11:20:55 10/04/11 Tue

Thanks for the crit you got me thinking with the wordchange. Somehow I still very much like the "can" since it is, as you pointed out, a choice. But your wording does have an appeal too. It points out the self awarenes that is reached at that point, which was quite a strong one (I know!) since this is more or less autobiographic and took several month to get all its verses. They emerged one after the other, every new one a new point in coming to terms and than overcoming.
And you are very right about the spelling, I have read and reread this poem so often I can't count it, but never seen those.

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