The first line put me in an orchard full of mature trees covered in blossoms, and of course, they are drifting in the air.
Line two made the wind a bit stronger and the blossoms rise higher into the sky.
Line three added a road between the trees, and put a lady in one of those old fashioned, ankle length, white, tied with a sash, dress. Oh and a hat, which she's holding onto so it doesn't blow away.
Line four didn't add anything to the imagery, but I got the secrets she was keeping. And aren't they wonderful!
You know, I must have mentioned before that I don't get poetry. But here I'm just amazed at how much emotion is tied up in those four lines and even more astounded with myself that I allowed my visuals to join the clouds she was looking at and just feel what was inside.
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You'r good>>> -- Lady Morilka, 15:00:56 04/11/14 Fri
The pic is actually of a woman with a secretive smile hiding in the corners of her mouth.
I woun't give you more details for now as to not disturbe your image, which I love by the way.
And you showed me one thing clear, the emotions got across.
Fenlinka
Myxtress, 12:54:37 04/13/14 Sun