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>>Enjoyable as ever. Comments below. >> >>>^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^>>A row of narrow, locker-like >cabinets stood along the >>wall. >>"Locker-like cabinets" or just "lockers"? >> >Locker-like cabinets. I've had them in workplaces >before. Tall, narrow, meant to be used my=uch like a >locker, but not quite the same. > >>>“What accent?” >>Not sure I get this. Does Alan not hear Daniel's >>accent? > >After all the time he's known Daniel, it probably >doesn'ty register, but I'll play with it and dump it >if unneccesary. > >> >>>Steeling herself, she took a deep breath and crept >>>with <b><s>great</b></s> trepidation >>When I edit, I like to take out qualifier words like >>"great", "quite", "very", etc. unless they're really >>needed. I see those kind of words like pepper - a >>little goes a long way :) >Good idea. I'm glad of good eyes like yours! > >>>The phone rang and she almost snatched at it in >>relief. >>Did she snatch at it or not? The sentence isn't clear. > >Gotcha. She did or didn't. > >>>“So, as the captain, you’re the one doing the actual >>>flying? I mean, what else is there to do?” She >paused, >>>shaking her head. “I sound like an idiot. Of course >>>there’s more things to do besides fly.” >>Oh, I remember this feeling of being tongue-tied one >>minute and spouting out nonsense the next. It's so >>obvious she fancies him rotten. >> >LOL!!! > >>>His eyes sparkled in pleasure <b><s>with the >>conversation</b></s>, >> >> >>>her ears flamed again at the thought. >>Valerie gets hot and "flames" a lot. Is she usually >>prone to blushing or is it just around Daniel? > >She's very fair so any embarrassment shows up easily >as a blush, but she seems to do it a lot around him at >this time. She does fancy him rotten, but she doesn't >want too. Just makes it all the more awkward.;-) >> >>>Nessa snorted. “You kids need to learn how to behave >>in public.” >>Poor Nessa! Her 5-year-old daughter is the most mature >>person in her life. > >More than likely... > >Glad you enjoyed it and again, thanks so much for the >feedback. It is greatly appreciated. >Debi
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