>But...but...I thought she wanted breakfast. *ggg* The
>only thing that blipped at me is his wording about the
>bet. If she forgets what's owed, wouldn't he take
>advantage of that? I'm never making good on my bet
>again or...next time I'll just bring donuts. (Standard
>payment 'round these parts in lieu of fulfilling
>foolish bets, like running through the halls at work
>in just your underwear. (No one wants to see
>that.) Instead, the bet-ee shows up with a sheepish
>grin and three dozen donuts under his arm before the
>morning meeting, and all is forgiven. *s*) Aside from
>the betting thing I flew through this scene. Didn't
>read rough at all. Smooth, vivid, and interesting
>details threaded in, making the characters leap off
>the page. Put a grin on my face too. *g* Thanks for
>the treat!
Thank you! The bet was a device to explain why he would show up in such a thing in the first place. Maybe I'll work the donuts thing in there somehow, just to make sure. I appreciate the comments, Happy Easter!
debikm