Date Posted:13:06:25 02/10/10 Wed Author: Esther Subject: Don't good girls have more fun anyway? >>> In reply to:
Debi
's message, "Doing my homework, like a good girl ;-)" on 12:06:21 02/07/10 Sun
>Excerpt from "New Tricks", copyright 2010, Debi
>Matlack, all rights reserved. Posted for sharing and
>critique purposes only; does not constitute
>publication.
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Hey! That's a new title isn't it???? So this is book two of the Valerie and Daniel story! Yay!
I really like Valerie and Daniel as a couple and I love how he stands by her without offering to fix it, and it was sweet that he didn't want her to go alone. Now this scene had a lot of people in it whom I was unfamiliar with, yet, I had a sense of their character by the time I finished and I didn't get confused as to who was who. Well done! And a huge congratst to Valerie for getting her opinion out without swear words. Thats hard to do too! *G*
>>Excerpt from "New Tricks", copyright 2010, Debi
>>Matlack, all rights reserved. Posted for sharing and
>>critique purposes only; does not constitute
>>publication.
>>**************
>
>Hey! That's a new title isn't it???? So this is
>book two of the Valerie and Daniel story! Yay!
It is!
>
>I really like Valerie and Daniel as a couple and I
>love how he stands by her without offering to fix it,
>and it was sweet that he didn't want her to go alone.
>Now this scene had a lot of people in it whom I was
>unfamiliar with, yet, I had a sense of their character
>by the time I finished and I didn't get confused as to
>who was who. Well done! And a huge congratst to
>Valerie for getting her opinion out without swear
>words. Thats hard to do too! *G* That's why when I get really angry, I clam up big time. If I say what my brain is screaming, I'll get fired, or punched or something.
>
>Hugs
>
>Esther