Date Posted:14:31:31 03/23/10 Tue Author: Larn Subject: But it's so much fun to have readers salivating! In reply to:
susiej
's message, "Larn>>>" on 12:44:58 03/23/10 Tue
>It was all the talk of rein
>lenghts and horse muscles and such. I had a horse. I
>love horse talk, but it was a little much for me.
>Maybe because I could imagine what was going on
>without it?
I suppose it should have dawned on me when I kept having to think of synonyms for everything that I was getting a little too loquacious. Spot on, the both of you. Time to edit!
>I just know I wanted the action/results
>faster. But I am greedy that way.
No, I get you. And I think that's what I've been worrying over the scene for. It just needs to get out and get over with.
