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Date Posted: 23:52:19 04/02/10 Fri
Author: Alex
Subject: Re: This way please >>>
In reply to: Esther 's message, "This way please >>>" on 21:55:11 03/29/10 Mon

Ditto what susiej said. (What a great crit!) Plus, awesome job on the rewrite. Very crisp and CLEAR. Woo hoo! A great read, Esther.

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[> [> [> Hey Alex! >>> -- Esther, 11:37:00 04/04/10 Sun

>Ditto what susiej said. (What a great crit!) Plus,
>awesome job on the rewrite. Very crisp and CLEAR. Woo
>hoo! A great read, Esther.

I concur! Susie did a great job showing me where I could tighten up. It's one of those cases of not being able to see the tree in the forest kinda things. *G*

K, but now I'm lost. I think it's great that you think it was a great read, and that it was crisp and clear, but I have no idea what the rewrite is that you refer to. What I miss?

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Hugs

Esther

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[> [> [> [> Re: Hey Alex! >>> -- Alex, 12:47:48 04/04/10 Sun

Last scene I remember reading with these characters was very confusing. So much so I can't even remember the point of the scene. It's just a big muddle. I left feedback about the confusion, but never got a reply. Stopped participating on the board after that, so I might have missed other posts you made. But unlike the last scene I remember, this read was effortless. The action and conflicts are clear and the character's are vivid. I'd keep turning the page now.

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[> [> [> [> [> Alex. My apologies. I always try really hard to respond in a timely manner, but I admit sometimes I do miss replies or I am late in replying. I can�t express how much I regret that my action, or lack of, might have been the catalyst that prompted your absence from the board. More inside >>> -- Esther, 13:42:30 04/06/10 Tue

Unfortunately, I can�t recall which scene you refer to, which in no way is an excuse, but I honestly don�t recall missing replying to your comments. I value the feedback I receive and I always appreciate the time others spend reading and commenting.

Again, I am truly sorry if it appeared that I was ignoring your comments.

And I must say I�m glad this story has gone from reading like a muddle with no point to having clear action and conflict with vivid characters! *G* Thank you!

Hugs

Esther

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[> [> [> [> [> [> Re: Alex. My apologies. I always try really hard to respond in a timely manner, but I admit sometimes I do miss replies or I am late in replying. I can�t express how much I regret that my action, or lack of, might have been the catalyst that prompted your absence from the board. More inside >>> -- Alex, 17:30:14 04/12/10 Mon

>Unfortunately, I can�t recall which scene you refer
>to, which in no way is an excuse, but I honestly don�t
>recall missing replying to your comments. I value the
>feedback I receive and I always appreciate the time
>others spend reading and commenting.
>
>Again, I am truly sorry if it appeared that I was
>ignoring your comments.
>
>And I must say I�m glad this story has gone from
>reading like a muddle with no point to having clear
>action and conflict with vivid characters! *G* Thank
>you!
>
>Hugs
>
>Esther

Thank you, Esther!

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