Date Posted:16:20:10 04/10/10 Sat Author:debikm Subject: Good stuff Fi! In reply to:
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's message, "Hi, Fi! >>>" on 12:04:56 04/10/10 Sat
You've captured the pride and desperation of a poor family, and Richard's understandable confusion. Despite his mother's desire to keep him safe, he's frustrated because she won't let him contribute to the household the only way he knows. The cat was a great touch.(I have one that sits up like a dog and waves to beg.)Gave the scene a little humor and still helped illustrate how little they have to spare.
debikm