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Date Posted: 20:00:31 10/30/09 Fri
Author: Fel
Subject: whoa!! And then I was like Whoa! and then you were like Whoa. I'll be back for a crit on this one soon!!
In reply to: Page 's message, "And BOOM, he just shows up out of nowhere >>>>>" on 19:16:06 10/29/09 Thu

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[> [> [> LOL! Can't wait to read it! -- Page, 23:36:44 10/31/09 Sat

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[> [> [> Okay! Here we go, crit inside>>> -- Fel, 11:43:27 11/03/09 Tue

Okay Page,

I'm just a big kid who hasn't grown out of watching Disney cartoons yet, and Finding Nemo is awesome. So anyways, here I go.

This one feels much more real to me. I like it better now that Katie isn't quite so quick to let Jay back into her life. The emotions are all right there in the open. I like it!

Sorry about how long it took me to get this done, but I work on Saturday and Sunday, and further more my computer decided to give me a blue screen of death yesterday so now it is in the shop. Hopefully everything is fine, since my latest work, Look Upon The Ash is in there.

Well hopefully you can find something usefull in my ramblings.


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[> [> [> [> It's the moon >>>>> -- Page, 13:43:21 11/05/09 Thu

I swear the moon must have been in some freaked out orbit or something last month, and it killed computers. The motherboard went out in DH's (second motherboard in a year!), and a friend woke up in the middle of the night to find her laptop displaying the Blue Screen of Death, like yours. I hope your manuscript can be retrieved! Scares the poo outta me to think mine might disappear into nothing. I'm pretty good about backing it up onto a flash drive, but not as consistent as I should be. *puts one hand in air, and the other on photo of Jimmy Page* I do hereby solemnly swear to back up my book every half-hour while I'm writing. There.

I'm glad you liked this chapter, and relieved that it's no longer too tidy. I agree it feels more real with Katie's fighting against letting him back into her life.

Thank you! And my fingers are crossed that Look Upon the Ash is all safe and sound.


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