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Date Posted: 19:45:29 11/09/09 Mon
Author: Debi
Subject: Ooohhhh... I like this!
In reply to: Page 's message, "I see where you're coming from, and have made a few slight revisions, highlighting Katie's beliefs, and what that would mean to her. Tell me what you think of it this way >>>>>" on 19:30:33 10/31/09 Sat

I think that 'almost" bit added even more tension and complexity to the scene. Great change!

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[> [> [> [> [> Thank you SO much! I was afraid it was too much, but you've put my mind at ease! --

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