Date Posted:21:38:18 11/04/09 Wed Author: Larn Subject: Glad you like! In reply to:
susiej
's message, "I like >>>>" on 19:35:27 11/03/09 Tue
>I would never have pegged you as a horse person, Larn.
>I had a horse when I was in 5th grade, but my parents
>weren't thrilled about it and with their
>discouragement, I eventually quit riding.
I actually rode all the way up till college, could have gone pro if -yadda-yadda-yadda. Still not ruling out horseperson as a life decision. I was very lucky that my mom and dad both rode (though only very casually) and were very supportive. I miss those horsey days!
>OK enough about me. This was great. It read very well,
>very smooth. Only two little comments- the bit about
>the horses in the aspen grove uses the word tree two
>times too close together.
I have a nasty tendency to do that, use a word repetitively. Did the same thing with "ripple" in the beginning. Both are fixed. Good eye!
>And there's a typo when he
>say's "a life I wasn't meant for" its actually says "I
>life I wasn't"
Fixed. Another eagle eye moment.
>
>But that's all I could find to nitpick. Good job!
Thanks for the nitpicks. Those are what I need the most!
