Date Posted:12:53:21 11/08/09 Sun Author:Page Subject: It's funny you should say that.... >>> In reply to:
Debi
's message, "*FANS SELF*" on 17:24:09 11/06/09 Fri
The thrill of anticipation (for lack of a better term *G*) builds throughout this chapter until the payoff. The first draft had them jumping each other's bones the minute they got to Jay's house, but the re-write is much different. They know they won't be interrupted, they have plenty of time; and so they have their dinner, enjoy each other's company, and let the anticipation build. I think it made for a much more poignant scene. (I hope I'm right! *G*)
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