Date Posted:13:19:47 11/10/09 Tue Author:Debi Subject: Thank you dea! In reply to:
dea
's message, "i like it" on 10:15:22 11/10/09 Tue
I'm finding the differences between Molly and Valerie and trying to play them up. At the beginning it was too close to the other story, sounded similar. That could part of why I chose to describe her immediately, just to emphasize that difference to myself.